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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Manik just can't get her out of his head
The girl's attitude was amazing
I hope manik get some brains
I think fab 5 saw Nandini
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update..
Manik really stub born..
Luvd it..
Want 2 knw wat shock..fab4
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Posted: 9 years ago
Great update
He's falling and falling
Let's see...

Thanks tons for a fun story
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ky2manan

Awesome update
Manik just can't get her out of his head
The girl's attitude was amazing
I hope manik get some brains
I think fab 5 saw Nandini
Update soon


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: archu_asok

Awesome update. Loved that girl. Her words were mindblowing. Manik should regret for wat he did with nandini.wow fab4 shocked after seeing something. Eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon.thanks for pm

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bangfarju

hahaha manik called any random girl by nandu's name in between make out wow and that random girl's comments abt manan was my fav now he thought abt that girls talk that how could he affected by a common girl nandini .stupid idiot manik ab toh tu gaya.our own lioness nandu will be coming soon to destroy U.l hink fav4 shocked to see nandini supposed to be her new avatar. what will they do now?
interesting and nice update.
thnx for pm.

continue soon



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Pari_mananholic

Wow awesome update...

Luved tht girl attitude straight forward...
Manik is sch a jerk...
I think fab4 saw Nandu in the club...
Can't wait for next update...
And this time don't delay..
Luvs it..
Thnx for pm...
Update soon...


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Posted: 9 years ago
Manan Hatred and revenge but where is love?
Part 7



Fab 4 were standing near the DJ and talking amongst themselves when alia's eyes fell on something...her eyes widened in shock and seeing alia in a dazzed mode fab 4 looked at the direction she is looking at and they saw the Same view that alia saw...they were shocked like hell...Cabir and mukti pinched themselves and after flinching on their own given pain...they shared glances ..

Yaariyan ve... Yaariyan
Yaariyan ve... yaariyan ve..
Yaariyaan... yaa...

Dil mera hai nasamajh kitna
Besabar ye bewkoof bada
Chahta hai kitna tujhe
Khud magar nahi jaan sakaa

Manik was walking on the road unsure of his destination. He was a very confused soul who was in between the fight of his brain and heart. He didn't know who should he listen to heart or the brain.

Is dard-e-dil ki sifarish
Ab kar de koi yahaan
Ki mill jaaye isey woh baarish
Jo bhigaa de poori tarah (x2)

Yaariyan ve... Yaariyan...

Kya huaa asar tere saath reh kar naa jaane
Ki hosh mujhe naa raha
Lafz mere thhe zubaan pe aake ruke
Par ho na sake woh bayaan
Dhadkan tera hi naam jo le
Aankhein bhi paighaam ye de
Teri nazar ka hi ye asar hai
Mujh pe jo huaa

Heart vs brain:

Heart: "manik you are in love with nandini..."

Brain: "are you blown...like manik kaha aur nandini kaha...woh ek commoner kaise manik ki life ka part ban sakti hai"

Heart: "shuttt up...manik is in love with her...and it doenst matter about her being a commoner but what matters is that she got a heart made of gold...she is so beautiful and she deserves manik and even manik does to..."

Brain: "nonsense...nandini came in maniks life just because of his property nothing more...how can he love her...she was selfish just like nyonika..."

Heart: "manik you tell...didn't you feel the sparks or a current when you touched nandini"

Brain: "that's just bullshit"

Heart: "you shutt up...you two are destiny to be with each other"

Before brain could defend himself manik shouted on top of his voice getting sick and tired with his heart and Brain fighting...and in frustration he punched the tree near him...making his hand bleed...continously but the rain that was continously falling from the sky...The tiny droplets that the rain held washed away the blood from his skin...he was drenched in rainwater...

Is dard-e-dil ki sifaarish
Ab kar de koi yahaan
Ki mill jaaye isey woh baarish
Jo bhiga de poori tarah (x2)

Tu jo mila
Toh zindagi hai badli
Main poora naya ho gaya
Hai be-asar duniya ki baatein badi
Ab teri sunu main sadaa

It was like the sky was crying...manik looked at the sky with hope twinkling in his eyes...he closed his eyes and shouted and loud as possible for God to help him

Manik yelling: "GOD...I DONT BELIEVE YOU EXIST BUT I AM STILL ASKING FOR YOU TO MAKE ME FORGET NANDINI...I AM CONFUSED...WHY AM I THINKING ABOUT HER??...I CAN'T BE IN LOVE WITH HER SHE WAS A BLOODY BET...PLEASE DO SOME THING TO MAKE ME FORGET HER..."

Milne ko tujhse, bahaane karun
Tu muskuraaye, wajah main banun
Roz bitaana saath mein tere, saara din mera

Is dard-e-dil ki sifaarish
Ab kar de koi yahaan
Ki mill jaaye isey woh baarish
Jo bhiga de poori tarah (x4)

manik sat on the wet floor that had puddles of rainwater. He was fully drenched. He sat there with frustration and irritation, that he held for himself. He remembered the girl's words. He started to believe that he might be in love with her but then his brain always poked his nose and shut him off before he can accept it.

Other side, nandini was on the dance floor...swaying her hips on the rhythm of the music...Every single guy was around her trying to touch her in one way or another but she ignored them and didn't let anyone touch her...she was clearly drunk...and it was very visible. Boys tried to take advantage of the fact but failed miserably...nandini although was drunk but she was in her senses...confusing right...well alcohol did bring energy and and a great boost in her to which she was dancing in a sexy and seductive way but she was aware of what she was doing and what's happening around her...

Fab 4 was shocked...shocked is an understatement for there reaction...it was a sight to watch...fab 4 with wide eyes and mouth hung open was staring at a girl who doesn't even matter for them...but now it was time for reality and they were having lots of questions regarding this sudden change in a girl who is nothing more than a commoner...it was time for the reality to unfold itself...it was time to answer those uncountable questions...but will the answers reveal so easily or will there be more obstacles for them to go through to get the answers...

Edited by Angel_manan - 9 years ago
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Manan Hatred and revenge but where is love?
Part 8



Nandini was busy dancing with a guy cosily swaying her hips to the music when she felt some gazes on her. First she ignored it but then she started getting uncomfortable. She looked around finding 4 familiar faces staring at her without blinking there eyes. There eyes were wide open and lips partly opened. Nandini smirked seeing there condition but then something struck her mind. She looked around and couldn't find HIM!!!! Nandini looked back seeing the same shocked faces and then without giving a second thought she turned around dodging around people and went straight out of the club. As soon as she came out she sighed in relief but then her heart started getting heavier. Past events flashed across her eyes blurring her vision as tears brimmed in her eyes. Without glancing back she sprinted away from the club to an unknown street. She started walking aimlessly. It was still raining. Tears made there way out as she started thinking about her past but the tears were not visible. It was replaced by the rainwater that was constantly falling from the sky. The past, the one which she wanted to erase from her memory. Her heart ached but there was one question that was making her restless each passing second. Where was manik? He was not at the club then where was he?. Nandini wanted to know that he was safe and fine. You know heart always wins over mind. Her mind was shouting at her telling her that he betrayed her but her heart always put a point across that made nandini believe that manik didn't do it on purpose and he did love her.

Otherside, manik was also walking on an isolated road Thinking about his past. How she came in his life and changed the way he lived his life. She effected him badly but he was ready to accept it. Here maniks mind took over and won over his heart. It did nothing but to annoy him and to make him shout at himself due to irritation.

Nandini and manik were walking on opposite directions and both were looking at the sky asking for answers but it seems like destiny had other plans. They both were looking at the sky and THUMP!!!! both fell on the ground. Nandini and manik were both kinda drunk but knew whats going on and as soon as there eyes met seeing the reason behind this sudden landing. They both shouted as loud as possible "TUM" . Both were happy from inside but ignored the feeling. Destiny wanted these two souls to sort out there problems and become manan once again but there ego was the thing which made manan manik and nandini.

Both stood up and stared at each other for a few seconds. It had been a long time since they met last. Manik looked at her he noticed her red puffy eyes and figured out that she had cried. His heart ached but his brain overpowered his emotions. Suddenly maniks eyes wandered off on her dress. His eyes widened with shock. His words started replaying in his brain. " Or you think i will ever fall for a stupid, old fashioned commoner like you? In your dreams baby! Have you ever even seen your self in the mirror?? I bet not, because then you might have just understood the difference between your class and mine!!" He couldn't believe his eyes, she looked so beautiful and sexy. This fragile petite girl had managed to clematis bowl him. He couldn't take his eyes of her. He remembered that once this beauty was his but then he threw her away like rubbish. He cursed himself. " Your just a bloody nobody for me. And trust me if it weren't for the bet, then i might have not even noticed your presence in this college cause you know afterall i have so many better, hot and sexy options waiting for me, but just because of this stupid bet i had to stay away from my sweethearts for so many days, but now not any more as the bet is over and even my work with you! And one more thing nobody nobody can ever change me Got That So not that's clear it's a goodbye forever MISS COMMONER!! ."

Nandini looked at manik. His eyes reflected pain and anger. She wanted to console him and tell him that she is there but her ego stopped her. She wanted to hug him but controlled her urge. Nandini noticed the way he looked at her. It showed passion and love but she ignored it. This time her brain won making her rude ruthless and heartless side to come out. He noticed the way her facial expressions changed. He knew what could come next but he was surprised when she started moving past him as if he doesn't even exist. He knew that he deserves this but he wanted nandini badly and couldn't control himself anymore. He grabbed her wrist and pulled her towards him causing her front to collide with his hard broad chest. Without a second thought he took her in a bone crashing hug. She felt pain in her body due to the sophisticating hug but as much as manik needed it even nandini did. She responded to the hug making manik's smile even wider. They stayed like this for what seemed like eternity when nandini's trance got broken and reality struck her. She broke the hug remembering the night when everything ended. When she lost her belief on love and how pure it is. She didn't believe on her mum's words anymore. She didn't believe on fireflies and the purity of love. She hated her existence. She become a cold and heartless figure for the world. She looked at manik's question filled eyes and suddenly her brain overpowered her. She got this strength and courage that she didn't have before. And THUD!!!! Manik clenched his fist in anger and looked at nandini with fire reflecting in his eyes. Nandini had ignited the monster inside him. He placed his other hand on his cheek that had nandini's fingerprints. His cheek was red. Nandini had slapped him with all her power. She took all her frustration and anger out that she held since long.

Edited by Angel_manan - 9 years ago
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Part 9
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THUD!!!! Manik clenched his fist in anger and looked at nandini with fire reflecting in his eyes. Nandini had ignited the monster inside him. He placed his other hand on his cheek that had nandini's fingerprints. His cheek was red. Nandini had slapped him with all her power. She took all her frustration and anger out that she held since long.
Nandini looked at manik with wide eyes. She realised what she did a few seconds ago and stared at him waiting for the volcano to burst but nothing of that sort happened. Manik looked at nandini and saw guilt in her eyes but he had a strong urge to shout on her face for what she did. His monster was yelling at him but he controlled himself and stared blankly at her waiting for nandini to do something. After few minutes nandini held her head between her palms as the flashbacks came flashing across her eyes. She smirked and looked at manik who was noticing each and every facial expression of hers.
Nandini smirkingly: "Mr malhotra nice meeting you again...long time no see ...but I guess it would have been better if we haven't...you know what the slap I just gave you a few seconds ago wasant for the hug...it was for all the pain you have given me by throwing me away like a piece of shit...you called me a bloody bet...A bet...like you called a human a bet...haven't you got any emotions...oh I forget you were born a monster...a monster who doesn't have a heart...he is heartless ruthless and cold person...he just knows how to play with people's emotions. ...I can't believe it I fell for a person like you and thought I could mend you. ..I was so wrong...maine tumhe monster se human banate banate tumhe aur monstrous bana diya...I am just a fool idiot stupid and what not...how could I ever thought THE MANIK MALHOTRA would ever change...I was so wrong. ...ek monster ko monster se human koi nahi bana sakta lekin maine try kiya aur mein miserably fail hogayi iss mein...I bloody hate myself for letting a filthy person like you to touch me and make love with me...love ka toh meaning bhi tumhe nahi pata...I thought if I give you my love you will change but I was wrong...Mere pyaar se tum toh aur monster ban gaye. ...you used my love as an advantage so that you bloody win an useless bet...haha...i bloody can't believe that I trusted you and gave myself to you...Such a fool I am...pata hai tumhe yeh ek nahi balke aur tapar dene chahiye...you bloody asshole..." And before she could further continue her cursing session she was pinned by the tree and her lips were sealed with manik's...manik started sucking licking and nibbling her lower lip...nandini stood numb...tears were continously falling from her eyes but dissolved into the rain...Each passing second the rain was getting more and more heavier...There was thunder and lightning...manik continued torturing her lips by giving her bites and then finally entered inside her mouth and started sucking her tongue. He explored each and every corner of her mouth. Soon after finding nandini breathless he pulled apart from the kiss and rested his forehead on hers...After few seconds nandini gained her seconds and remembered what happened a few seconds ago...she looked at manik and without without a second thought pushed him as hard as she could...manik stumbled back and was about to fall when he regained his balance he stared at nandini angrily...nandini looked at manik and then THUD!!! Nandini slapped manik again not for leaving her but for this kiss...manik looked at nandini and without wasting another second grabbed both of her arms and pulled them back making nandini to collide with his broad rock like hard chest. Nandini started struggling under his grip but manik was to adamant to let nandini go this time but nandini was also a stubborn head...after a lot of struggle nandini finally accepted her defeat and glared at manik angrily...
Manik angrily: "WHAT THE f**k IS YOUR PROBLEM...HUH...KABHI BHI KAHI PER BHI MAAROGI...ARE YOU INSANE OR WHAT...DONT FORGET THAT I HAVE KISSED YOU BEFORE AS WELL...AUR MUJHE BHI KOI SHOK NAHI HAI TUMHE DEKHNE KA...I JUST KISSED YOU BECAUSE YOU BLOODY COULDNT SHUT YOUR MOUTH UNLESS MUJHE KOI SHOK NAHI HAI TUMHE KISS KARNE KA...AND ABOUT YOUR MONSTER THEORY...YES I WAS BORN A MONSTER AND WILL ALWAYS BE A MONSTER...I AM A FILTHY COLD HEARTED AND RUTHLESS HUMAN CUM MONSTER ...AND THERE IS NO BULLSHIT CALLED LOVE...IT'S ALL ABOUT SEX AND HORNINESS...LISTEN YEH PYAAR VYAAR KUCH NAHI HOTA PUT THIS IN YOUR TINY BRAIN OF YOURS AND IF YOU THINK YOU ARE A FOOL STUPID AND IDIOT THEN I DONT BLOODY GIVE A SHIT COZ I DONT BLOODY WANNA KNOW A PSYCHO LIKE YOU...UNDERSTAND...SO JUT BLOODY LEAVE ME ALONE AND GET THE SHIT OUT OF MY LIFE..." Manik pushed her with all his strength as she fell down on the ground. He left her and walked away.
Edited by Angel_manan - 9 years ago

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