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Posted: 9 years ago
Manan Hatred and revenge but where is love?
Part 10



Nandini was sitting on the ground like a lifeless body staring at the direction where manik faded away in a matter of few minutes. Even though nandini confronted manik and stayed strong putting a mask of bravery to disguise herself but inside she felt her heart shattered into million pieces. Her tears were constantly falling from her eyes but the rain replaced them by the fresh raindrops that fell from the sky instantly. She felt herself fighting to a lost battle but then she remembered her plan and smirked. She might be weak inside but she had to make manik realise his mistakes. Nandini stood up and wiped her tears removing the fresh new piercing memories of the past hour. After a few seconds she calmed herself and started walking to a unknown path but destiny knew where she had to go.

Manik was walking on a road Thinking about what happened few minutes ago. He kissed her again and in return he got a slap. He deserved it and he knew it. It was his fault but he didn't know how to mend things. He so wanted to be in her arms asking for an apology over and over again even if she forgives him he couldn't forgive himself. He had started to regret on his decision on betting on her. But then something struck him, he looked around and found isolated roads with only darkness surrounding him. He remembered that in anger he had left nandini on a silent and isolated road. He ran back to the way he came from.

Back to the club, fab 5 came back inside panting heavily after a small session of finding nandini. Chasing after her and looking for her made them tired. The thing they wanted to do the most was to have a nap on a bed. Unfortunately they were in a club. They looked around and found a bar counter that brought a smile on their faces. Afer sharing glances they made a dash for it.

Manik came back to the road where he left nandini. He didn't find a trace of her. Manik looked around trying to find out what direction she went in but he couldn't. After fighting with his mind and heart he chose a road that was going straight ahead and without wasting a second he ran in that direction.

Nandini was walking carelessly. She went in different direction while walking clearly indicating she is drunk. nandini looked at the sky intensely. She saw the sky moving (rotating) and the clouds moving in the same direction.

Nandini: "aiyappa jaise clouds sky ke saath hai waise mein aur manik kyun nahi reh sake...how come we aren't together...as clouds are not leaving the sky then how can I leave manik...sky is moving away from the clouds but clouds are following than how come manik is not following me? Aiyappa kyun Humesha mein hi kyun"

While nandini was busy staring at the sky 3 guys were coming from the opposite direction. They were drunk and laughing. After a few minutes coming closer to nandini they noticed her and looked at her from top to bottom. they shared glances after checking her out. Three of them whistled gaining nandini's attention who became cautions and scared when she saw them but still showed that she is not effected.

Guy 1: "hey babes"

Nandini drunkenly: "whattt?...listen I am not your babes ok just mind your buisness"

Guy 2: "arrey beautiful humara business aaj ki Raat ke liye tum hi toh ho"

Guy 3 singing: " Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho"

Guy 3 was interupted by nandini

Nandini: "just shut up ok...kisi aur ke saath ja kar flirt karo mere saath nahi samajhe"

Guy 2: "Acha kyun...tumhara saath kyun nahi"

Nandini: "tumhara ghar mein maa beti nahi hai kya"

Guy 1: "listen just shut up...tum toh aise baat kar rahi ho jaise tum buhot hi achi ho aur khud flirt nahi karti...sab pata hai ke tum one nighters karti ho aur kabhi kabhi shahid prostitutes..."

Before he could complete his sentence someone attacked him with a night slap...any guesses who..?

So here's the update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow awesome update...
Fab4 were soo shocked to see nandu...
Manik was fighting with himself...
He loves her soo much..
He was shkcd to see nandu in tht attire...
He kissed her hugged her but not ready to accept...
Nandu was soo hurt...
I think tht the guy is manik...
Waiting for nxt...
Update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update. long update wow.
manan part was wow and that kiss it was a pure bliss.
stupid idiot manik again messed everything to make brain win over mind.
then us 3 boys nd that slap l think it's our own manik malhotra who came to save his angel .

nice concept.
thnx for pm and this long update .
waiting eagerly .
do update ASAP
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update..
Luvd it..
I hope manik il apologize..
Thnkz 4 d pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update. Manan's confrontation part was phenomenal. Loved it. Manik's heart and mind battle was amazing. Nandini's state was well penned. Hehe manik must have punched them.eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon.thanks for pm
Keep writing
Stay blessed😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Full of emotion
Both r in immense
pain
Can understand nandu feeling she was betrayed by her love

But manik he is in love
But not ready to accept urggg
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Posted: 9 years ago
that was really long one

amazing update

nandini ko dekhkar fab 5 ka reaction awesome\


manik kissed her again n left her ssaying all non sense

but whn reality hit he started searching for her

nandii was hurt but she don't want to show him that


loved it


awesome
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow.. ..

Thanks for long long long update.. .

Awesome update.. . Amazing.. . 😃

Of course manik hit that guy...

Both should clear their mis understanding.. . 😭
They should come together... Should confess their love for each other.. .

Please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome updates
You gave so many parts ...wow
Fab 4 were shocked to see Nandini
Manik loves Nandini but his ego stopped him
Nandini state was so painful
She loved him so much
Manan collided
Loved the hug and the kiss
Nandini slapped him 2 times
Manik was so rude to her
He left Nandini alone
But when he realised he went back to her
Of course Manik is the person
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: archu_asok

Awesome update. Manan's confrontation part was phenomenal. Loved it. Manik's heart and mind battle was amazing. Nandini's state was well penned. Hehe manik must have punched them.eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon.thanks for pm

Keep writing
Stay blessed😊


Thanks...

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