NEW SS:THE HATE STORY By Mawara And Rits Link To Thread2/PG144/20-11 - Page 14

Nice story
I guess alya cheated manik
Update was vry nice could see monster manik once again
Poor nandu bt she is stong enough to heal manik

its awesome start..really loved the plot...monster manik n naive nandu..

Superb update...

First of all Mao and Dii very heartily congratulations for your work... I know I'm again late par my health condition its just pissing me...choro wo sab...
First part was awesome... So manik suffered a lot in those 2years...wow abeer is also there here...[Mao or dii pls provide pic of abeer na it would be nice to imagine him] he's son of cavya that's interesting...Mao like seriously nandu and aliya are twins ye toh unexpected teh yaar
Vaise where's aliya... Even its her birthday too right... And why manik is so angry with nandu.. What's her mistake in all these fiascos... And what's the relationship between murthy's and malhotra's...how come cabir's nandu's jiju??... Why manik is so angry with nandu's dad??... Gosshh so many questions??? Answers kab milenge???... And I didn't realized one thing ke why and for whom nandu's pretending all okay after that kiss?? She would've punched him na... Baitke Rone se accha kuch kar sakti thi...vaise aiSe lag rahe hai ki aage full thorns k upar chalna hai... Hmmm... Chalo I'll grab my tissues now only... Continue soonish
Take care stay blessed...

Just loved the beginning.. It was very very interesting..
And I am sure ur joint effort will be surely succesfull..
Please continue soon..
I am not very good at commenting but surely try my best..
And best of luck mawara and Ritz..

nice story dears ...
please continue soon ...

AMAZING! loved the update. thanks for the Pm

amazing love it ..
superb ..

Now this is something really interesting.
Lots of suspense, drama and ACTION.
Eagerly waiting to knw ki akhir huya kya tha. What did alya do to Manik.
Continue Soon.
Thank you.