NEW SS:THE HATE STORY By Mawara And Rits Link To Thread2/PG144/20-11

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello Guys

As told earlier,Mawara and I are writing a new story in collabration.This is a dark story and will have limited chapters.We will be updating it once in a week.Hope you guys will love and support us.

I am posting the prologue and tomorrow Mawara will update Chapter 1.

Thanks and Regards!!!




PROLOGUE

"Di,aapko pata hai...I hate family functions.You go ...I am not coming"He said and went inside his room banging the door with a jerk.

Navya wasn't used to giving up so early.She knew her brother very well.She quietly followed him to his room.

He sat on the bed .His eyes were full of fury.

"Manik, look at youself. She spoke softly sitting beside him "What have you made of yourself in the last 2 years...just because one person betrayed you!"

"Manik "She continued speaking " I can very well understand what you have gone through but this is not the end of the world."

"You dont understand anything di"He got and walked towards the window " You can never understand what I have gone through"He spoke sternly

"Manik,for God's sake stop punishing yourself for someone else's mistake"She said as he stood with his back facing her.

His anger was rising with every passing second.

"Do you really think it was a mistake"He yelled on top of his voice and pulled the window curtain with a jerk.

Navya was taken aback as there was a crashing sound when the rod and the curtain fell on the floor.

"It was not a mistake di...IT WAS A CRIME"He shrieked and knelt down on the floor

His eyes had turned blood red and he was panting .Sweat beeds had formed on his forehead .

"Main tumhe apne aap ko aur torcher karne nahi dungi"Navya spoke firmly " You will have to change yourself and become the Manik that you were before."

"Di,main aisa hi hu aur aisa hi rahunga"He replied gritting his teeth while is gaze was fixed on the wall opposite him.

"Main bhi dekhti hu ki kaise nahi badalte tum.Aaj raat ko tum Murthy uncle ke ghar jarur aaoge."She said getting up.

"Di , main nahin aaonga"

"Manik,its an order from your elder sister and you have to obey me"She spoke firmly and left the room .

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INDEX:

Prologue: Just Above..

Chapter 1:He Has Changed

Chapter 2: Life Changes

Chapter 3: Limits Of Hatred


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Gosh ! My two fav writer. ...
Exciteddd to read part 1. ..
Loved the prologue. .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So yeah..!
I will come up next chapter soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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WOWWW! Update once in a week! :( But that's fine! M sure only that single update would be worth it! :D continue sooon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting prologue guys 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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seems damn interesting!
looking forward to read more!
Cont soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow..
Nice start...
Lovng d promo...
Fr d 1st tim navya hv featured as manik'ssis...dat too elder...dis is nw...but nice...
Nw waitng fr d 1st chp...

Mawara m on ur buddy list...
So if posibl dn plz pm me whnevr u updt...plz..
I would lv to read dis story
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Posted: 9 years ago
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sounds intrestng...waiting for chptr 1 plz pm me
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Wow two romantic writers has come up with a dark story
Its going to be fun n interesting to this ff
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting Prologue👍🏼
Continue Soon..😛

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