MaNan FF - I WILL MAKE YOU MINE U/P CHP 20 20/02 page73 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey dear ur prologue is amazing...😳Plss continue wid ur story... Dnt b discouraged wid d response.. U start wid d 1st chap.. Ppl will lik it..😊 And think abt d ppl who r loving ur prologue.. Write for us plzzz😉😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful one!!You nailed it!!Cont soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello guys...here is the update...please do read and tell me hope is it...

Keep smiling <3

Chapter -1

As Muqti cut the call Nandu stare her cell phone for few seconds and then the beep of Muqti's message broke her trance and then she sat on couch with a thud... she got highly tensed as Muqti wasn't lying and she can't broke her promise she have to go for their help and she doesn't have any problem with that it's just she never ever met them she has just listened about them from Navya and Muqti so it is awkward for her to go there and you know apna gyaan batna start karde...and she also have heard so much about manik's short temper and arrogance through Navya but from Muqti she only have heard how protective he is...


she have hear about all of them so much that she will recognize all of them instantly but still she is not their friend after all she is their friend's friend and it is something which make her uncomfortable...she always denied Muqti for hangout sessions with them as it doesn't look good naa ke sare friends ke bich mai bethi rahu, they will also become conscious and can't be as free as they used to be...but now she has no option she has to go...so after coming out from these deep thoughts she left out a sigh and move towards her room to get ready and said Aiyyoo Ayiappa kaha fas gai mai...ab jana hi padega...what if mene kuch galti ki or vo log Muqti pe gussa kare ke kesi friend hai teri...nahi nahi...I will go there but sab bata kar vapas aa jaungi...rukungi hi nahi zyada...yes that will be perfect...with that she got ready quickly and ran to get an auto to reach the desired address...but little did she know that going there will turn her life upside down...huhh...


finally she got an auto and reached at Dhruv's house in around 30 minutes...After paying the fare she got down the auto and look at the big house or should say a mansion and then started fiddling with her fingers in nervousness and was pacing to get some courage to inside...and suddenly her cell started ringing and the caller was none other than Muqti she picked up the call and said haa Muqti mai bas abhi pahuchi hu...just coming inside..Tell me where are you? On which Muqti shouted pahuch gai to andar kyo nahi aai...koi kha nahi jaegi tujhe...jaldi aa na...all are waiting for you...with that she cut the call and finally Nandu moved towards the entrance and looked here and there to find Muqti but in vain..


She didn't come to take her in...and nervously she stepped inside the house...she was admiring the house and didn't realised that someone is coming from other side and accidently bumped in him...and without even looking with whom she had bumped she started apologising I..I...am sorr..yy..vo vooo mai Muqti ki...and she was cut by a cheerful voice of Cabir with whom she ha bumped...ohhh...hello pretty lady..please don't be sorry it was not your fault..so you are muqti's Choti..I mean Navya ki Nandu and humari Nandini...henna???? and I am and he was cut by Nandu who was so glad to meet with such a nice person and said in a chirpy voice you are Cabir..right? on which Cabir look at her amusingly and said woahh...how do you know? I hope I am not having name imprinted on my hand?? :p on which our Nandu look at him weirdly not understanding what he said and Cabir again said embarrassed sorry bad joke...but on a serious note tell me how do you know I am Cabir? He asked with so much curiosity that Nandu giggle a bit and then replied Muqti ne bahaut bataya hai sabke bare mai to I guessed ke you are Cabir and I was right...on which he let out a oh and then said oh sorry..please come in..we can chat later..lets first complete the task for which we are here and when they were about to enter whole gang come outside as they were waiting for Nandini but she took some extra time and as they enter the living room Muqti saw Cabir chatting with Nandini and Nandini was also smiling she relaxed a bit seeing her Choti comfortable and ran to hug her leaving a confuse gang behind...


she was hugging her as she was meeting her after years...as Nandu was aware of concern Muqti have for her she gave in and hugged her with the same intensity...after breaking the hug listening cabir's PJ she first glared at Cabir and then welcomed Nandini come Choti..let me introduce to everyone first and then we will start our mission wedding...Nandu nodded her head and before Muqti could say Cabir interrupted her and said oyee Muqti...let her guess herself na ke kaun kaun hai? As she guessed me...tune bahut bataya hai na isko humare bare mai to let's see teri mehnat kitni rang laai hai..he said with a challenging tone and as guessed Muqti accepted it without any hesitation as she know Nandu will definitely win but nobody looked at Nandu who was looking down to the floor as she has got caught and teacher is giving her some punishment...breaking her trance Muqti held her shoulders and said dramatically Choti ab to izzat ka sawal hai...jaa jakar sahi pehchan sabko or mera naam roshan kar and Nandu stared her and when she didn't replied Muqti pushed her to rest of gang and she tripped in the mat which was beautifully placed on floor and bumped in Manik who was busy in some office work and was texting who also lost his balance as he was not prepared for this chotu toofan and fall on the ground with Nandu on hi top...her eyes shut due to the fear of getting hurt and fingers closed in a chotu fist...Manik was staring at her..how innocent she was looking, leave innocent she was beautiful he thought and cute too...before he could think more he saw her eyes opening as she didn't felt any pain but a well built body beneath her she looked at those caramel brown eyes and don't know why she saw some kind of pain in his eyes...


their this moment was broken by a hype Muqti and Navya and also the rest of gang who know how Manik is and got tensed sensing a big burst out from him and as expected he pushed her aside ignoring all the admiring he was doing moments before and said with a stern voice what was that? Can't you see or what? Dekh kar nahi chal sakti ya har wqt hi girti padti ho...listen don't try to pull your these stupid stunts in front of me...and before he could say anything tears started brimming in nandini's eyes on seeing which Muqti shouted on Manik Manik bas kar yaar..uski galti nahi hai..mene dhakka dia tha usko...us pr yo bhadak raha hai...aj hi to aai hai yha...kese pta hoga flooring ke bare mai...


Before Muqti could continue Nandini ran out from there and without waiting for anyone she searched for an auto and returned to her apartment...after she left all came out but couldn't find her there and seeing that Muqti was definitely mad at Manik for behaving rude with her..she was again going to shout but Navya came in between and said Muqti abhi hume Nandu ke as chalna chahie...vo bahut dukhi hogi...listening which muqti's all anger melted and she nodded her head and turn to leave but not before glaring at Manik and saying she was here to help us and wow..,waht a cordial behviaour she got here...I won't force her now to help us...sorry buddies..bye with that she left with Navya leaving a sad Dhruv and Aliya and a somehow guilty Manik...don't know why Manik was feeling guilty as her tears were hurting him...her eyes were saying volume...may be because she also has suffered with immense pain and tragedies just like him...


After this incident everyone returned to their house and Manik was still in trance when Cabir entered with a bad face and smacked him on his shoulder and said kya tha ye Manik...itna bolne ki kya zarurat thi,...use bolne to deta..uski koi galti hi nahi thi...bechari...kitni innocent hai vo..dekh ke hi lagt hai nahi si jaan hai vo...and let out a sigh and again said you should apologise to her listening which Manik looked at him with a disbelief look and said listen bro mai koi sorry nahi kahunga okay...haa I know mujhe nahi chillana chahie tha but Manik Malhotra kisi se bhi sorry nahi kehta...with that he went to his wardrobe and grabed her track pants and vest and leave to get fresh...on the other hand our Nandu was crying bitterly in her room she was not able to think what was her fault that he said this much to her? She was hurt by his word...don't know why he is a mere stranger to her...she met him first time and saw severe pain in his eyes and got hurt by his words..she always knew about his short temper..Muqti had told her but still she felt that bad that she is crying? Why? Her trance was broken by a loud thud of door opening and looked at the direction and found Muqti and Navya looking at her with guilt written on their faces...both came running to her and embraced her from both side and she smiled within her tears...how they car for her she thought...and then said guys I am fine...it's okay..it was neither he nor anyone was at fault...it was just an accident...koi bhi ese hi react karta and Muqti you only told me na vo short tempered hai...mujhe bura nahi laga..sacchi...hearing which both of them pulled back from hug and looked at her with a disbelief look and Muqti said pagal hai tu Choti...usne itna kuch kaha fir bhi you ae defending him...kya hai tu..yaha khud ro rahi hai fir bhi uski side le rahi hai...and then Navya seconded her or nahi to kya...Nandu hum jante hai tumhe bura laga hai...and we are sorry humari vajah se tujhe ye sab sunna pada...hearing which Nandu replied in her ever sweet voice...guys...sacchi I am fine...it's just ekdum sudden outburst tha naa isilie mene esa react kia..you know me naa...mai esi hi hu pagli si...vese Muqti...kya uski koi problem hai? Matlab I saw somekind of severe pain I his eyes...she asked in a concerned voice which was definitely shocked Muqti and also she got touched by her this gesture that she hugged her again and said Choti tujhe esa kyo laga ke esa kuch hai?? On which she replied pata nahi Muqti bas mujhe laga...esa laga he is hiding all his pain in his anger...is it so? Muqti was dumbfound by hearing this from her mouth she never thought that someone can understand her best friend just in first meet and that too by looking in his eyes??


But how can she forget ye Nandu hai bhai...ise sab pata chal jata hai...mujhe bhi to isne dekh kar mere man ki baat padh lit hi...and she let out a loud sigh and tried to change the topic and said Choti to bahut sochti hai..chal ab..it's almost evening kuch banate hai dinner mai..mast saa...milkar khaenge...and haa ab I will not ask you to come over there...I am sorry Navya and Muqti both said this in unison to Nandu..but to their amusement Nandu replied guys no way...I will definitely help...meri vajah se kisi ki shadi thodi bigadne de sakti hu mai? Or agar sab tumhare hawale chhod dia to pata nahi kya hoga shadi ka...she said with a glint of naughtiness and then trio began pillow fighting and land up on bed laughing and giggling...breaking their girly time Navya said guys bas ho gaya ab..chalo kuch khana banate hai...and Muqti jab Nandu ko koi problem nahi hai tum sabse bat kar kr ke kal ka time set karlo..sab jitni jaldi ho sake kar lete hai...on which Muqti and Nandu nodded their head and Muqti started texting them on their fab5 group and Nandu got up and tying her hair she said guys let's make some cake today...kal vaha jaenge to sabke lie le bhi jaenge? What's say? You know acche kam ki shuruaat mithe se karni chahie to it will be good...Muqti and Navya looked each other and nodded their head and then Nandu and Navya leave for kitchen to make dinner and the cake on the other hand Muqti told everyone about nandu's decision and was telling them about tomorrows schedule for planning and all were really very glad to Nandu for understanding and accepting their request and here someone who was reading all the messages was dumbfound by such a selflessness character girl...is she mad or what? Mene itna chillaya fir bhi she is ready to help us? Is she really that good? Looks like she is...her eyes speaks volume man...there is so much innocence in her eyes...should I say sorry to her? No no man...Manik Malhotra sorry nahi bolta...huhh...with that he lay down on his bed and was fast asleep while thinking about the whole chaos happened today..same was with Nandu after dinner Muqti and Navya bid bye to her and she was all alone again and she also drifted to sleep while thinking about those caramel brown eyes...let's see what a new morning has for all of them and specially these two souls...

So guys..here is the update...I hope I wrote something worth...do tell me how is it...hit like and comment...

Edited by sweetheart2110 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
and please for PMs buddy me..its difficult to PM when you are not in buddy list...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
I really liked it.
Innocent nandini and angry manik. .
Always a good combo. ..
Loved it.
Updateee sooon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Awesome
Please update the next part soon
Tqvm for the pm dear
Take care and stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Awesome update
but less manan scene
eagerly waiting for the next chapter
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Awesome update loved it manik ki wajah se nandu royi lekin manik hi uski life complete karega. Update was amazing now I'm desperately waiting for their next meet. Pls update the next part soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Hai sweetie...

Its awesome...

Nandu so innocent...nandu mukti navya bond ...i love it..

Waiting for update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Hey.. Thanks for the pm !! 😊
This chapter is fab.. Eager to know how Manik gonna apologize Nandu..
Update soon 😉

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