MaNan FF - I WILL MAKE YOU MINE U/P CHP 20 20/02 page73 - Page 3

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Sounds like a dark FF...I love dark ffs...I love Monster Manik more than Majnu Manik :p Continue soon :)

Hello people...I am here with the update...hope you will like it...its just a Fan fiction...All the characters are imaginary and the story too...

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Prologue

Location - Malhotra Mansion

A guy is sleeping on his stomach with a frown on his forehead and open mouth only to be disturbed by a smash on his back by his best friend Cabir who has come to pick him up for Dhruv's house to discuss about the wedding...yeah you heard me right...out Dhruv is getting married with our Aliya in some days and today fab5 long with Dhruv's & Aliya's family will decide the whole wedding...you know wedding planning, themes, decoration, outfits, when to shop, spa days and all...a total package of Big Indian Fat Wedding is dream of our fashion diva so here all have bowed their head down to her for her wish and are standing on one leg to complete her every command...After getting that powerful smack our hero knowingly said with irritated tone to Cabir let me sleep bro...or else I will definitely kill you for breaking my slumber...and after saying that he again tried to sleep by snuggugling in his pillow only to get another smack and this time more powerful with a loud voice of Cabir Manik, uth jaa kamine nahi to sab kha jaenge hume...w are already running late...bhul gaya aaj tere Buddy ki barbadi ki planning hai...on hearing the word barbadi he shot open his eyes and asked Cabir by sqeuling his brows that what does that mean on which Cabir replied bhul gaya tu...tune hi to sabke chain ko aag lagai hai...aliya madam ki Big Fat Indian Wedding ki planning karne ka keh kar...aj Dhruv ke ghar jana hai sabko remember? To plan everything...uth ja ab...kumbhkaran..khud to marega mujhe bhi marvaega...after hearing that he mentally kickeg himself for forgetting such important thing and quickly getting up and moving towards washroom he said bro I will be ready in 5 min...and ran into washroom ever so fast...on the other hand;

Location - Apartment

A cute short heighted girl is running here and there in her home to get safe from her bestest friend who is running behind her like a hunter does to his prey...Muqti & Navya are trying their best to convince Nandu to come along with them to Aliya's house so that they can help her in her preparations and then can go to Dhruv's house but she is refusing saying guys please understand naa I don't know them I have only heard about them...what will they think and also I can't go anywhere like that naa...I will come for wedding but not for this...if you want any help just call me naa I will help you but please don't force me naa...even Navya know all of them because she works with them but mujhe to koi nahi janta hoga...on which our lady hulk Muqti replied b finally catching her oyee Nandu ki bacchii kyo nahi janta koi tujhe? They all know you..I have talked so much about you that sometimes I have to bear their scowling for talking only about you...you just didn't met them yet...to ab mil lo naa sari awkwardness hi khatam ho jaegi..and trust me they all will love and adore just as I do...ab to maan jaa please...Muqti said with a puppy dog face on which our innocent Nandu starts to melt but shooing away her heart she one more time tried to convince her two crazy friends guys okay listen today you both go and if you go through any problem just call me and I will be their Nandini promise...listening which Navya replied understanding her awkwardness thick hai an Muqti esa kar lete hai...nandu promise kar rahi hai to agar hume koi pareshani hui to hum ise bula lenge...she said this with a wink to Muqti which was unnoticed by Nandu as she was busy in freeing herself from her grip...after listening Navya an evil plan struck in Mufti's mind and she said leaving Nandu okay fine..but don't you dare break your promise...if you did I will surely kill you...now give me some breakfast..I am damn hungry...on which Nandu and Navya giggle and said in unison jo hokum mere aka...;) and Muqti too giggled wholeheartedly with them...after a fun breakfast Muqti and Navya bid bye to Nandu saying if they will need her they will call on which she happily nodded and closed the door and get busy in her daily chaos...

Location- Malhotra mansion

After getting ready quickly Manik ran downstairs and had a quick breakfast in the form of a some sips of juice and a toast and rushing out from the house and getting quickly in car with Cabir both made their way to Dhruv's house...

Location - Dhruv's house

Dhruv was waiting impatiently for his friends and love to come and finalise everything regarding wedding and pacing back and forth in living room...and then he heard car horn and finally let out a loud sigh and sat on couch with thud...Manik and Cabir who entered in house saw this scene and came runingly to him and asked him in unison what happen bro?? On which Dhruv just stare them for few seconds and then our ever so shy Dhruv burst on them kya hua? You were supposed to be here before an hour and you are coming now? What the hell you both were doing...taken aback from a sudden outburst Cabir said in a horrified tone yo bro...calm down...why are you getting so hyper??? We are sorry...we were stuck in the traffic...calm down...and before Dhruv could say Manik said in a calm tone buddy we are sorry but please calm down I know you are tensed due to the pressure of a big wedding but we will do everything just be calm...on hearing such calm & soothing words Dhruv calmed down and becoming again himself he said I am sorry too sorry...I should not behaved like this...I was just tensed and stressed..you know aliya how she is...so sensitive when it comes to US...just chuck it and let's start the planning...and they sat on couch and started discussing but after few minutes they got to know that they don't know much about wedding and related functions so they decided to chill for sometime till the girls join them...

Location- Aliya's House

When Muqti and Navya reached Aliya's house they gasp at the scene before them and after entering by skipping and hoping in her room which was all mess with clothes all over the room Muqti asked aliya... what the hell happened here? Why your room is a mess?? Aandhi aayi ya toofan?? Hua kya??? On which aliya replied with a puppy dog face guys see naa kuch hai hi nahi pehene ko...mai kya pehnu? Abhi Dhruv ke ghar jana hai and I am not even able to decide what to wear...on which Navya and Muqti look at her with a disbelief look and Navya said aliya kuch bhi pehenlo naa...aj sirf discussion hai..shadi nahi,..why are you freaking out like this...and she took out an indo western dress and hive it to her...and seeing that aliya jumped and hoped and replied oh my god Navya mene to dekha hi nahi ise..thank you...it will be perfect... na western na Indian a perfect combo...thank you and ran out from there to get ready and Muqti and Navya sighed and sai in unison pagal...and then trio left for dhruv's house...

Location- Dhruv's House

When girls enter in house they saw boys chilling and playing around and they were like what-the-hell and moved towards them with full tashan and then smacking them one by one they give them a I-will-kill-you-look and asked oopps sorry I should say shouted in unison what the hell is going on here? We are supposed to be here for planning wedding isn't it?? On which our ever so cool Cabir replied yes girls...shant ho jao...hum karne bethe the but fir we realised ke hume to shadi ke bare mai zyada kuch pata hi nahi hai isilie we thought to wait for you guys...on hearing this reply girls too realised that they don't know much about Indian wedding and even their parents as they were never bothered about that so they all sat and were thinking what to do what to do when an idea struck in Mufti's mind and she literally shouted guys...mill gayi, mill gayi...I know someone who knows all about an Indian wedding...and everyone give her go-on look and the answer she said was nandu I mean Nandini...you know my another best friend than you? Henna...she is so much bhartiya and knows everytinhg related to culture and even wedding...she will surely help us...on which everyone looked each other and then nodded as they have heard a lot about Nandini and they knew Muqti will never be wrong in judging people and also she is so close to her so they all agreed and asked her to call her here on which Muqti nodded vigorously and dialled nandu's number which she answer after some rings and without waiting for her reply Muqti said nandu...please come here...we are in big big trouble...actually naa we all don't have any proper knowledge about Indian wedding and I know you know everything..so please please some here and help us...I am texting you the address please come soon...and again without waiting for her reply she cut the call and texted her the address and when she looked others were looking at like ye-kya-tha look and she didn't bother to reply and sat comfortably and said chill guys...she is coming here..and all will be sorted...she is a sweetheart...I just love her and I am sure you all will also adore her just as I do...in all these their was someone who don't know why felt a strong pull towards nandu about whom he only have heard..yeah you guessed it right it's our Manik but he never show what he feels so he ignored it and waited with everyone for muqti's nandu to come...

So guys...here is the update...I hope I am on right track and is not boring you...please reply and tell me how is it...and wait to see what happen when Nandini met with fab5 and especially Manik..there is lot to happen... for PMs buddy me...comment zarur karna...

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Hey there!
I like it very much.
Don't be discouraged by the response you get, it's how the things work in the forum!
See soon everyone will love you!
Anyway coming to the chapter, you have great writing skills and I'm sure you will keep on making it interesting for us!

Very interesting prologue.
Waiting for manan's first meet.
A good start.. Keep up your good work.
Hope you update the next part soon.

hey its nice
waiting for our manan
continue soonish... 😊

Nice prologue loved it manik bins mile hi nandu ki taraf attract ho RHA hai jab dono milenge tab maza aayega. The cutest thing is Mukti loves nandu so much. Waiting for manans meet. N how their love story will shape up. Pls update the first part soon waiting for manans pehli mulakat.