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Posted: 9 years ago
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Manan:OS

Passionate



It is the 3rd month of our marriage,till now we have become really good friends, we were strangers to each other when we got married,but our parents weren't as they are business partners also close friends.our parents shared the thought of marriage with us, I had no problem because I knew my parents decision will be mine.


Manik malhotra, the CEO of malhotra's industry,and I nandini malhotra a photographer...my father wanted me to get into the business but i had my own Interests..anyways,one thing that I told my parents before marriage was that whoever the guy will be, has to respect my passion, my love that is photography,they asked manik and he was perfectly fine with that, and I was satisfied by then.


After the marriage,

By the time passed we got to know each other,gradually became friends,and now we both take care of each other ..be it related to his business or my safety.


we haven't got intimidated yet,nor confessed our feelings..not because we didn't wanted to but because we wanted to build a strong relation among ourselves first.The relationship of a friend, of respect, of care,and mostly of love.The best thing is that he respects me.He is a man and he could have forced me,but he didn't ...and that is the reason of our friendship bond,sometimes I used to feel,and see how much he needs me as a wife,i could see the desire in his eyes,but he never shared that feeling,he never said anything...we haven't kissed yet,but he never forgets to smooch my cheeks,and hug me,every morning before leaving for office, and I love it when he does that.



It is the biggest day for us...mostly for my husband ,as it was his first birthday after our wedding... And I want to make it the best one for him...and I know how to do that.




Manik was at office and it was 9 already... Till now I have made all the arrangement,


"Hii..."i said as he received the call


"Hii...what's up...missing me..!?" He said and I could feel him smiling


"Obviously... Arey look at the time ...it's 10pm ...kia hua aj late ana hei kia "I asked as it was quite rare for him to come late


"Han yar...I had a meeting at 8:00 or abhi farig hua hu..just few files ko check kerna hei phir ara hu.." He told me and I could feel his tiredness,I know he was exhausted


"Manik..relax...jaldee se kam kero or jaldee ajao...I'm waiting for you at the dinner" I spoke lovingly


"No no...tum khana khao... Your Little tummy needs food...no waiting.. OK"he ordered


"Nhi manik mene tumhare sath he khana hei...ok is se pehlei tum phir kaho ...I'm saying ...jaldee kam kero and be at home byeee" I said in a go and he chuckled


"OK phir mujhei jaldee ana perei ga.." He said


"Exactly" I replied


"OK then see ya..bye" he said

And we hung up the call


...


I stood in front of the mirror...had a look at my self ...I was Wearing a red chafon sarree,...the blouse had a cut in the middle that was giving a good ,sexy look of my cleavage,I didn't wore too much of the makeup as I don't like to ,so I applied kajal in my eyes,eye-shadow and finally mascara... Then I took a red lipstick and applied that too...thats it,as I like to keep myself simple

I looked at the room everything was set...


It was 11:30 when I heard the horn of his car,and I literally shivered at my place as it was the first time I was gonna give him something that he wouldn't have even thought.


I saw him coming in as I stood leaning on the railing. He looked so exhausted and pale...my heart cried to see him like that...but then smiled as after few minutes he's gonna be the one who'll smile the brightest ..chucking all my thoughts I ran back into the room.


As guided one of the servant went towards him


"Sr madam so gye hei to apka khana mein laga dun"he said


"What nandini so gye...usnei kuch khaia" he freaked out as he knew I must have slept like that only


"Sr pata nhi per unk room ki lights off hei or kitchen mein khana Wese ka wesa he hei" the servant said


"Acha aisa kero k mere room mein khana leker ao ...or han 1 he plate Lana"he said


The servant was continuously looking at the clock as trying his best not to let manik come in the room till its 11:57 and luckily he succeeded...I could hear his footsteps...and as soon as he opened the door I saw it was 11:59


He came in and looked here and there it was dark

He didn't say anything as he thought I was sleeping...I saw it was 12:00 by then,


"manik" I said from behind as he was struggling to follow the light sneaking in through the curtains


He turned around


"Nandini ..tum uthy ho...wo kehra tha k..."he was saying just to be cut as the lights turned on


"Happy birthday manik"I said coming in front of him


His Jaws literally dropped as he saw me and I blushed at his gaze,he looked startled.He took few steps towards me

My heart was racing at double the speed merely by his gaze.

He looked at me from the top to the bottom

I could see him shaking at his place


"Manik...tumhei surprise kesa laga"i said breaking the silence


Now he looked around in the room


Maniks pov,

I came in the room ...I had totally forgot that it was my birthday, I came in and it was all dark,as soon as I heard her calling my name ,I turned around and was shocked to see nandini, she was looking breathtakingly gorgeous, I had never imagined this.I so wanted to kiss her hard,but my trance was broken when I heard her saying surprise, then I looked around got another shock,she had decorated the room,



It looked so beautiful,


"Wow" escaped from my mouth


And I looked at her she was smiling


I moved towards her ..held her hands


"nandini...thanku so much...but ,ye"I said pointing towards the bed


"Manik...this is your birthday gift from me" she said and I could see her eyes filled with love and desire


"Are you comfortable with it.." I asked


"More then anything...!! she said taking a step closer to me


I leaned a bit down both of us were panting badly,I pressed my lips on hers ,and she gave in,the kiss was slow yet passionate, slowly I stroke my tongue and she opened her mouth ,our tongue wrestled ,then I bit her upper lip while she was busy with my lower...my hands were clutching her bare waist and her hands were busy pulling me more by fisting my hair...I heard her moaning...my hand went up to the knot of her blouse ...but I felt she was pulling her mouth away...I at once broke the kiss to look at her



Nandini's POV,


I pulled apart as I wanted him to eat something first ,as it was a tiring day for him ,he was looking at me with the confusing and questioning look.. And I chuckled at his expressions


"Manik...pehlei let's cut the cake na ,also tum hungry hogei"I said moving towards the table where cake was kept


"No nandini... Today I only need you" he said


"I know..but.." I said but he interrupted


"Ager itna sab set up kia he hei ...tou let's not waste time" he said


I went towards him,he looked at me and I nodded my head in assurance,he bent down and fisted my hair,throwing my face backwards,he started tracing his lips and nose on my neck,I was breathing heavily as his tortures were giving me tough time,he moved a bit more down kissed at the corner of my cleavage. I moaned and it turned him on,he picked me up at once and headed towards the bed,laid me on the bed,he was smiling and so was I,I saw him taking his shirt off.and my heart beat was betraying me.he hovered over me,i had surrendered myself to him ...he unpinned my drape and kissed on the shoulder..and then bit the area...I clutched is bare broad shoulders in the anticipation...next I felt that I was lying in my blouse ...before he could do anything I flipped the positions and came over him...he was taken aback for once...I started kissing him,biting him...I heard his groan ...next what I saw left me baffled as he unhooked the blouse and I was in my inner garment... I threw my head in shyness and he again came over me...he kissed me there over the fabric...moving down kissing on the belly to navel...

And finally removed the leftover garments... covering us with the duvet... He looked into my eyes for the permission...and how could I stop him,so I nodded in yes...he at once occupied me,and kissed me hard to suppress my pain... I loved his care...after good time making love he laid beside me and pulled me so that I could keep my head on his arm


"Nandini" he said huskily and I looked at him with bleary eyes


"MANIK' I said lovingly


" u OK na"he asked Tracing his thumb on my face


"I love you very much " finally I confessed


"I love you very much too nandini" he said and pulled me for a hug


"Thanku for this best gift..it really was the best till date" he said playing with my fingers


"Thanku for completing me " I said and pecked on his lips


"Mene hurt tou nhi kia zada"he asked with concern filled tone


"Nope...bilkul nhi"


And we both smiled


after few more minutes of lovely talking we doze off as we were really tired




Hello people...!!! Heres another OS...do let me know how it was I will be waiting for the comments

Love

Fatima :*

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dua_arafat thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
Res...
Ye bhi pehle main...
As tumhain promise kia tha 8 baje...

Unress
Dekho time se pehle a gai...

Fatima yar ye kiya tha??
Ufff bhi promo k bad bhi itna blush nai kia jitna is k bad kiya...
Mujh se poch rahi thi limit ka??? Sari limits cross kr din...
It was damn hot😳

Firstly to arrange marriage
We were discussing that... awww I love it...😛
But they were going a little slow... Pehle strangers and now friends...
And yar ye to romantic couple ho gaya... daily subha dosemilta hai...
That cheek kiss and hug before leaving...
Awweee...😳 sachi... deeply in love...
Or birthday surprise to Awlla tha...
Kuch zayada hi nai likh diya??
Manik don't want to waste time...oho...
Tum kuch zayada hi taraqi kr rahi ho...hehehe
Keep it up
Best of luck age k liye...

Take care
Stay blessed
Love
Dua...
Edited by dua_arafat - 9 years ago
jesse93 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful Os dear,
seriously a lovely one of all.
UserM123 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was beautiful! ❤️
abhutani0311 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was indeed beautifully penned...and quite hot too :P loved it! Thanks for the PM!
Love,
Arunima
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was awesome..it was beautifully written..i really liked the whole os..it actually showed how passionate they were which is amazing..but i have a question though..did they eat anything.? 😆
AsthaVerma92 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update wow amazing OS so loving caring
neeharika__ thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#8
Make ot an ff
It was very beautiful
dreamy_doll15 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow.. that's a fab os.. I toh very love it.. itss so superb.. itss soo superb. amazing. . mindblowing. fantastic. . fabulous. . kyaa likhaa yar... kya concept tha.. that's just loving.. more write os n more stories.. ... that's just amazing. . u write very well. :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) Love Geeta
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A very very nice OS.. LOVED IT.. :-)

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