manan : love or lust (part 8 updated - page- 12) 3.06.16

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Nidhibansod

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Superb Yar, i read all parts, its awesome

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anjali10896

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Wow loving manik feelings for nandu

N excited for manik seeing nandu singing

Eagerly waiting for next update so plz don't make us wait for long dear

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nitishine

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Part 7.

Manbir teasing session was on when they heard an announcement that all students are asked to be assembled in the hall.
Mukti- kyaa yaar subha subha pata nahi inka kaunsa naya drama hai..
Dhruv- Wo to jaake hi pata chalega mukti lets go..
Manik- Haan chal..
All of them headed towards the hall.

Here abhi and nandu also heard and headed towards the hall.

While going they all met in between were nandu just ignored manik which irked him.. while mukbhi also tried to ignore each other. . Seing nandu.Dhruv came forward.. and said Dhruv - Hii nandini ..Iam dhruv. .
Nandini in a sweet tone - Hii.. I know your names..mukti had already told...

Yes she was like this..If anyone be nice to her..she will the nicest. .she had a big..heart having lots of love for everyone. .
This is one of the reason why mukti and abhi love her. She is a sweetheart. .

Suddenly they heard principal voice .
Nandini- We will talk later.. saying this she went away..
MUKTI - Dhruv..??
Dhruv - I thought to say sorry for yesterday. .
Mukti- oh... Fab5 headed towards the hall.. They found princi.. standing on stage
Prici- Hello students! So here we have an new students in space. .A cordial welcomes to them.. By this he called out the names of all the students along with their batch...Nandu was in the same batch with fab5...
Principal- So now today the new students will perform for us and give us their introduction.
Abhi to nandu- Nandu tu tayar hai na...mujhe pata hain yahan khade sabhi log behosh ho freeze teri awaz sunke.. I had always been your fan..And I am gonna listen your voice after so long.. I am literally dying to listen it.. Nandu smiled to his antics. Mukti - Wow..yaar that gonna be interesting. .I am to literally dying to hear nandu... its been so long...
Alya- Mukti why are you so excited as if she had been a rockstar..
little she could know that she was actually the singing diva of US.
Mukti- You will get to kniw it soon.
Cabir- I am excited to look forward. .
What say manik?
Manik- Yaa let she..
He was also excited. .to hear her .but reason was unknown. .

Mukti in mind- heheh i know my choti...I am excited to see you all's freezing conditions. .it will be amazing...because nandu ke song ke asar se koi nahi bach sakta..even If its a stone.
She chuckled on her own thoughts. .
When they heard. .so here next is the toper of her college. .And we are proud to have her in our school..Mrs. Nandini Murthy.
How much nandu try not to get special attention. .but indeed she was talented. .her either if the talent give her a special attention.
She went on the stage..
Manik- Topper haan...
Cabir- She is really talented. .I really wanna hear her now..
Till now all the performance. .were ok..but not that much fun..so everyone was really feeling bore...

When nandu went on stage..every boy was startled by her beauty. .how much simple she try to beauty. .her beauty inhances even more...She was dropdead gorgeous..girls were jealous of her.. .
Nandu started. .

Haan aa o...
Everyone became silent listening to the voice. . Each and every single life present their was focused on her.
She closed her eyes..And continued.

Main jaan ye vaar doon
Har jeet bhi haar doon
Keemat ho koi tujhe beinteha pyaar doon (x2) Her voice went like a magical spell to them.each and every single soul present their was freezed at their place..hearing such a melodious. .voice that they ever heard.. Fab4 was freezed their. .. No one was even moving a bit. .everyone was looking toward her..fully ..
Manik thought- Her voice its so soothing. .so melodious. .I never thought she will sing so well..I have talked to her..I liked her voice..but now I really love it..
Manik was having a smile on his face.
Mukti and abhi were happy. .Listening cause they already knew this talent if their chotu packet..(nandu) Nandu continued. .Saari hadein maine meri, ab maine tod di
Dekar mujhe pataa awaargi ban gaye

Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye

Aa o... aa...

Kya khoob Rab ne kiya
Bin maange itna diya
Warna hai milta kahaan
Hum kaafiron ko Khuda (x2)

Hasratein ab meri tumse hai jaa mili
Tum duaa ab meri aakhiri ban gaye Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye

O..ooo..o..

She ended and opened her eyes..and saw..each and every eyes their was wide open..some people's jaw droped..and some were totally freezed including fab4..
Nandu knew that she sings well but today she sang after a long time..so she was a bit confused. .whether they liked it or not. Not hearing her voice anyone manik came back to normal.and started clapping..soon everyone present their clapped. . The teachers stood from their places and clapped. .
Mukti and abhi were proud of her. .
Nandini became happy..
Whole hall was full..of clap..cheers..whistle..everyone expressed their happiness by clapping and cheering...
Principal- Wow.. Nandini that was amazing I . mean we don't have words to appreciate your talent..we ate proud to happy..
She thanked him for the compliment. .
She came down the stage ..everyone appreciated her..From . teachers till the new students. .now she headed towards abhi..and found fab5 standing beside him..She saw that Nandu saw that manik was looking at her continously. .without blinking his..eyes..which made her blush...but controlling her sense she came forward to abhi and mukti you were now standing in front of her..
Nandu- So how was it guys?
Mukti literally jumped on her..and hugged her saying. .it was amazing. .I am proud of you. .
Nandu smiled and thanked her.
Abhi- I to already said ki main Tumhara fan..huun..but really this was really. .fantastic. .
Nandu - Thanks.
Cabir came forwardand hugged her..
Everyone was shocked with his act while one was really angry on him and that was manik..

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sharon.babu

@sharon.babu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

awesome update...

loved it so much...

glad that everyone enjoyed her performance...

loved the mesmerised manik...on nandu's voice...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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dhillon90

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Awesome
Amazing update
Nyc song
Lovd it
Continue soon

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ruchi116

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Wow awesome loved it everyone present their was freezed after hearing her. Maja aayega gaya cabir hugged her n manik became angry manik apne hi friend se jealous ho raha hai. Waiting for more romance n fun.
Update soon the next part dying to read it.

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qamarkhan87

@qamarkhan87

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Nice update

Cabir hugged her and manik get jealous 😉😃 abhi to dhruv bhi baki hai 😉

Waiting for nxt

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anjali10896

@anjali10896

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Dis is one of my favourite songs n nandu chose dat sry sry u chose dat😉

I'm soo happy n everyone including manik froze for her voice

N jealous manik is back but here in ur story strangely he felt dat for cabir too

Nice liked dis change but I think cabir will make it up considering her as sister😉 warna pitega manik se😉

Thanks for quick update n looking forward for next too soon😛😊

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Rooth348

@Rooth348

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Nice update yaar...so here comes our jealousy manik... Love to watch him like this...continue soon yaar...

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sameeksha

@mini_manan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Superb story...
Amazing update..
Nandu ne to sabki bolte band kar di..not bad..
Last part was a shock...and a chingari for manik to burn cabir🤣
Loved it.
Cont soon.

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