Aiyoo Ayyappa- FF- Chapter 23- Updated on Pg 149

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Chapter 1

Hello

"Hello!" A voice was heard over phone!

"Hello?" Nandini asked munching on the yummy crisp vada in her hand while gazing at the television in which a song of Fab 5 was playing.

"Excuse me, but can I speak to Mr. Williams?" The guy's voice suddenly switched to a rich American accent.

Nandini continued to carelessly munch on the oily vada gazing at the music video of Fab 5 as they were performing their song 'Kaisi yeh yaariaan'.

"Sorry, wrong number!" Nandini said in a crisp tone and as she was about to cut the phone. Suddenly the guy said "Wait! What is the song that you are listening to?"

Nandini started getting irritated with this guy who is continuing on and on over the phone and not letting her listen to her favourite music band Fab 5. " Aiyoo!! Seriously? Don't you know this song? It is 'Kaisi Yeh Yaariaan' song by Fab 5! Which country are you from?" she answered eventhough she was not interested to continue the conversation more.

"Oh! You are a Fab 5 fan? Do you like Fab 5 a lot?" He continued in a soft yet curious voice.

"Oh yes! I'm a huge fan of Fab 5! I love all the songs of Fab 5... I listen to them a lot! All five of them are fabulous. They are my favourite music group!" Nandini got excited speaking about Fab 5 and she sat with her legs both up on the sofa and rubbing the oil on her hands onto her dress and wiping her mouth with the back of her hand.😉

The guy gave an amused chuckle as he continued, "hmm...you like Fab 5 so much? So who is your favourite Fab 5 guy?"

" Dhruv!" Nandini said in a firm tone.

"Oh! You love Dhruv? So who do you like after Dhruv?" He continued to enquire.

"Excuse me! But why are you so curious about who I like in Fab 5? I don't even know you. I don't like to talk to strangers", Nandini said in a bit irritated tone.

"Ok fine... if you tell me your second favourite member of Fab 5, I'll tell you who I'm." he continued in a persuasive tone.

"I'm not interested to know who you are. I don't want to continue speaking also" Nandini answered affirmatively.

"Hey, but you know... I personally know Dhruv! Perhaps I can help you meet him." He said in his smooth rich youthful voice.

"You really know Dhruv?" Nandini's eyes widened. She stopped watching the music video and turned to concentrate on the phone conversation. "Can you really introduce me to Dhruv?"

"Hmm...ya its a deal! I'll do it, if you tell me...who is your second favourite member?"

"My second favourite member is Kabir". .. Nandini continued and then asked "But who are you? How do you know them?"

"Ok...so your second favourite member is Kabir? What about the lead singer Manik Malhotra? " he continued

"Manik Malhotra???? U mean that guy with a lot of attitude? Bada attitude deta rehta hai...tv pe interviews main sunglasses lagaake baithta hai! Ladkiyon ko dekhte hai car ke andar ghuske wahan se bhaag jaata hai! I don't like him!" Nandini replied .

"Seriously?? U don't like Manik Malhotra? Isn't he talented and handsome?" the guy on the other side of the phone suddenly raised his voice.

"Buddy...did U talk to Mr. Williams?" Nandini suddenly heard another soft voice talking! She felt the voice so familiar! It was like the voice of Dhruv!

Nandini instantly recognized the voice of Dhruv! His voice was so easy to recognize!

"No man...I think I dialed the wrong number! Williams ko call kar rahe the and I got connected to another number" the guy on the phone replied to him.

"Aahh! Manik?? Tu kissse baat kar raha hai, buddy? Phone rakha kyon nahi agar wrong number ho tho?" Dhruv asked with a naughty smirk!

Nandini froze. Was she speaking to Manik???? The Manik Malhotra leader of Fab 5? Nandini's phone receiver slipped off her hand and she quickly picked up the phone and placed it on the cradle!

"Aiyooo Ayyappaaa...what did I do? Did I just now speak to Manik Malhotra?? Leader of Fab 5???"😕

Nandini rushed to her room and locked up the door. Suddenly she heard the voice of Amms calling... "Nandini...daa chellam inge vaa (my dear..come here) Unakku romba pudicha masala dosai...seekiram vaa daa (I've prepared your favourite masala dosai for you...come fast)! Amms kept the plate of hot Masala dosai with sambar and chutney on the table. But Nandini was nowhere around. "Ival enge poyitten?" (Where did she go away?) Amms murmured as she went back into the kitchen to bring the payasam she prepared for Navratri. 😳

" Manik...buddy...who is on the phone?? Did U ask who the girl is?" Dhruv asked Manik

"Wait man...let me complete this call" Manik said with a frown on his face as he turned back to the call "Hello??? Hello???" Manik noticed the call has gone cut! Manik's eyes blazed as he remembered the words he heard a few minutes back "Manik Malhotra???? U mean that guy with a lot of attitude? Bada attitude deta rehta hai...tv pe interviews main sunglasses lagaake baithta hai! Ladkiyon ko dekhte hai car ke andar ghuske wahan se bhaag jaata hai! I don't like him!"

"How dare she say that? I will teach her a lesson." Manik murmured under his breath as he searched through the number he had just dialed. 😛


Hi guys...this is the 1st chapter of a story which I thought of taking forth. I am not very experienced in writing stories. But just wanted to give it a try. I am new here and got a really warm response from this forum. Thanks for all the love that U have given me with your replies and responses. I will try continuing the next part of the story if possible tonight itself. Now it's 4 days holiday for me and then I will have to get back to work from Monday. Now since its a little break from the KY2 show...till Monday, I thought let me fantasize about MaNan in my own way😆


Thanks a lot for warmly receiving this story. I will try to continue. If U find any flaws...whether in my writing style or even minute spelling mistakes/mistakes as to facts that I state in this fiction😆 pls do correct me. U can always PM me and add me as a buddy too! I am here to join in some discussions, have some fun and make lots of new friends too. Thanks guys! Lots of love!❤️


Guys...

Chapter 2 is updated and on -----> pg 2 of this thread.

Chapter 3 is updated and on----> pg 4 of this thread.

Chapter 4 is updated and on---> pg 6 of this thread.

Chapter 5 is updated and on---> pg 8 of this thread.

Chapter 6 is updated and on----> pg 17 of this thread

Chapter 7 is updated and on ---> pg 23 of this thread

Chapter 8 is updated and on---> pg 24 of this thread.

Chapter 9 is updated and on---> pg 27 of this thread.

Chapter 10 is updated and on---> pg 38 of this thread.

Chapter 11 is updated and on---> pg 44 of this thread

Chapter 12 is updated and on---> pg 56 of this thread

Chapter 13 is updated and on---> pg 63 of this thread

Chapter 14 is updated and on---> pg 66 of this thread

Chapter 15 is updated and on---> pg 78 of this thread

Chapter 16 is updated and on---> pg 84 of this thread

Chapter 17 is updated and on---> pg 91 of this thread

Chapter 18 is updated and on---> pg 98 of this thread

Chapter 19 is updated and on---> pg 111 of this thread

Chapter 20 is updated and on---> pg 122 of this thread

Chapter 21 is updated and on---> pg 133 of this thread

Chapter 22 is updated and on---> pg 142 of this thread

Chapter 23 is updated and on---> pg 149 of this thread


The next chapters of the FF is continued in Thread 2! Please continue reading the

remaining chapters of the FF in the link given below:~


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kaisi-yeh-yaariaan/4502795/aiyoo-ayyappa-ff-thread-2-chapter-38-on-pg-136

Do read it and give your comments😳

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Lovelylav7 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely story line..interesting...continue it n pm me
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Originally posted by: NiyaJaiswal

looks interesting...
cintinue soon...


Thanks a lot, Niya!😳 I'll continue...😛
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Originally posted by: soothu

super

fabulous
amazing


Thanks, Soothu!😳
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Originally posted by: Lovelylav7

Lovely story line..interesting...continue it n pm me


Hey Lovely...Yes sure! I'll continue the story!😳
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Originally posted by: princypriya

seems intersting continue soon


Thanks Princypriya! I will! 😳
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super cool it was!
update sooonnn!


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Oh my.. This so freaking awesome.. Very different..
Plz pretty please continue soon and do pm me 😊
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Hey!
That was really cool man.. Great idea and a fresh story!
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Chapter 2

Hello again

"Nandiniii...Nandiniii...ennada yen sapidavaralaye? (why why are you not coming to eat?"). Amms shouted to Nandini. Nandini lifted her head off the pillow and shouted back "Pasikkalaye...Amms enakku thoonganam (Not feeling hungry...Amms I want to sleep). Amms looked at Rishabh with a perplexed expression and asked him "Yenna aachu, Rishu? (What happened, Rishu?). Rishab who just came into the room shrugged his shoulders with a perplexed look on his face and sat on the table and started breaking the masala dosa and dipping it into the sambar.

Suddenly the phone started ringing. Nandini could hear the phone ringing in the hall and she murmured to herself..."It cannot be him...could it be?" 😕 Nandini hid her face in the pillow and closed her eyes tight.

Manik was tapping impatiently on the table in front of him as his eyebrows clouded up his frowning face. "Pick up the phone...U better pick up the phone..." he murmured under his breath as he fumed with anger.


"Hello??" Amms spoke into the mouth piece.

"Hello...yes U tell me, why did U cut the call off before?" Manik hissed under his breath.


"Hello? Who is this?" Amms asked with a perplexed expression on her face.


"Don't act smart...I called U a few minutes back, and U forgot me already?" Manik was fuming as his tapping on the table got even more frequent.


"Who are U speaking? Who do U want to talk to?" Amms raised her voice.

"I am Manik Malhotra. I called a few minutes back. Got me?" Manik retorted.

"Who Manik Malhotra? Whom do U want to talk to?" Amms asked loudly this time.

Nandini who was lying in the bedroom lifted her head off the pillow and a fear spread over her face. "Ayyappa...Amms talking to Manik Malhotra...oh my god...this sounds trouble...I must not let this continue"


Nandini jumped out of her bed and rushed into the hall and ran to Amms.

"Amms..this call is for me." Nandini replied breathing heavily. She herself didn't know if she was breathing heavily out of fear or due to running.


"Nandini...yaaru intha Manik Malhotra?" (Who is this Manik Malhotra?) Amms asked with a doubtful expression.


"Amms...he is my friend." Nandini started cooking up a story.


"Friend?" Amms continued with the suspicious expression.


"Yes Amms..." Nandini whispered as she placed the phone to her ears.


"Hello??? Hello??? Are U listening to me or not?? This is Manik Malhotra speaking! Don't U dare act smart...whoever U are...what's your name by the by??" Manik was continuing to hiss onto the mouthpiece as he walked upto the table to sit for dinner.


"Hello.." Nandini whispered into the mouthpiece as she saw Amms walking away towards Rishabh and serving him a cup of tea. Rishabh glanced at Nandini with a confused look.


"Hello! Yes...tell me what's your name?" Manik whispered as he looked at the tall lady in her night robe enter into the hall and seating herself on the chair a bit away from him slowly serving herself some fried rice and gazing his way.


"I...I am...wait why do U want to know my name? U don't even know me. How you got my number?" Nandini panicked.


"Miss...whoever U are...I think U remember...I dialed U a few minutes back and U praised me a lot...remember??" Manik continued sarcastically "And I...just checked the number dialed earlier. So now tell me..what is your name?"


"I don't want to tell U my name. I don't tell my name to strangers." Nandini retorted back.


"Miss Oversmart...don't act smart with me. Tell me your name immediately or else I am coming to your place!" Manik hissed back.


"My place?? Ha Ha Ha Ha...Mr. Manik Malhotra...U don't know my name...U don't even know where I am from. How are U going to find me?" Nandini retorted with a fake laugh.


"Nanduuu..." Amms shouted...loud enough so that Nandini's friend can also hear it. "Tell your friend that its dinner time and call your friend later. Food is getting cold".


"Yes Amms...I am coming", Nandini replied.


A slow smile spread on his face as Manik heard the name of the "Miss Oversmart" he was talking to all this while.


"Nanduuu...jaao jaake khaana khaalo...your Amms is calling you" Manik replied with an evil smile spreading over his face!😈


"U...U ...stop calling me Nandu. I only let my loved ones call me Nandu" Nandini retorted angrily


"Mhm..." Manik said as he filled his mouth with a spoonful of fried rice..."only loved ones?? ok...Nandu...can I be one?" Manik asked in a husky tone.

"Manik...who are U on the call with? Kya tum jaante nahi ho? Talking on the phone while eating is bad manners. Cut the phone call now" the tall lady in the night robe hissed.


"Sure Mrs. Nyonika Malhotra" Manik replied staring at Nyonika with a smirk and then dropped the spoon onto the plate..got up from his table with the phone in his hands and walked onto the balcony.

"So where were we? Ah yes..Nanduu..." Manik continued as a smirk spread over his face.

"Don't U call me, Nandu. U are not close to me" Nandini retorted.

"Ok Nandu...I won't call U Nandu..if U tell me your name." Manik replied putting an offer to Nandini.


"I don't know you enough to tell you my name, Mr. Manik Malhotra" Nandini retorted sharply.


"Hahaha...U say U don't know Manik Malhotra? Forgot? I am the one who wears sunglasses during interviews and runs away from fan girls..remember?? I don't even notice if I wear sunglasses during interviews or not..but U do, Miss oversmart Nandu" Manik hissed sarcastically. 😛

"Nanduuu..." Amms called and this time coming out of the kitchen.


"Yes Amms..." Nandini quickly placed the receiver on the phone cradle and cutting the phone once again.


"Are U done with your call, Nandu??" Amms came to her. "Y..Yes Amms...I finished the call" Nandini replied.


"Ok..come I heated up the masala dosa for U. Come and eat now" Amms invited again. "Yes...I am coming, Amms" Nandini said...as she slowly placed the telephone receiver off hook and walked upto the table and sat to eat the masala dosa with a sigh.


Manik was fuming on the other end of the phone as he realized that Miss oversmart Nandu has cut his call once again. Manik redialed the number..again...again...again...but he could only hear one voice "The number you are dialing is either switched off or out of service." Manik rubbed his fingers onto his forehead in fury as he continued to press the redial button. But...Nandu was out of range for Manik.


"Out of service...she must've placed her phone off hook...oversmart girl! But I am not going to leave her. For now..U are safe..Nandu...but not forever" Manik hissed as an amused smile spread across his face.


"But must say...this game is really interesting. I am in for it..Nandu..." Manik said to himself as he walked back into the hallway and sat on his chair in front of the dining table.


"Manik...U are rude...is this how U obey your mother?" Nyonika hissed.

"Oh..Nyonika...mom...when did I ever obey you?" Manik replied with a sarcastic smile on his face. "Manikkk" Nyonika hissed angrily and got up from there and walked away. "Will I ever be able to obey you? I don't think so..Mrs. Nyonika Malhotra" Manik whispered.

"Ramu kakka, clear up the table" Manik said as he rose from the table. He lost his hunger after listening to Nyonika. But then again...Manik lost his hunger long back ever since he lost his hunger for love too.

Eating is for living and to live its not necessary to be loved. Or is it?? 😳


Chapter 3 is updated and on----> pg 4 of this thread.

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