Aiyoo Ayyappa- FF- Chapter 23- Updated on Pg 149 - Page 17

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: zohasad2.0

please update longer next time!


Yes surely Zoha..I'll try to update longer...but was wondering..if the chapters are long..won't it be difficult for readers to read all together? That's why I reduced the length a bit!😃 But next update..I'll try to keep it longer!😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: priakachan



<font size="3" color="#990000">Yes yes...Nandu ko laane se pehle...first Fab 5 ke intro tho dene padenge na?😳😛Nandu aayenge...just karo thoda intezaar😆</font>

<font size="3" color="#990000">Alya tho hamesha beech main rehti thi...waise Nandini tho abhi abhi aayi hai..usse pehle tho Alya ke property thi Manik! Oye case????????? 1st case KY2 Season 1 walon ke khilaaf aur MTVwaalon ke khilaaf file karna! Coz they only brought in Alya-Manik love story track! Hum tho sirf follow kar rahe hai!🤣</font>

<font size="3" color="#990000">MaNan har chapter main hue tho mazaa kya?? Teekhe ke baad meetha..phir meethe ke baad teekha!😆😛</font>

<font size="3" color="#990000">Yaar...thanks for the lovely comment and I'm Priya!😳</font>


Hmmm... right Fab 5 ka intro toh chahiye mereko...
Aur intezaar hi kar ri hu mai nandu ka...
But yeh nahi chalega Manik sirf Nandu ka h...
Mai gyii thii police ststion S1 walon par case karne par bina case kare wapas aa gyi...
Sochaa ki case kar dia toh fir mera fav show off air ho jayega... 😆
N plsss Alya ko jaldi hata dena MaNan ke beech se warna mai sacchi mei case kar dungi...
N mere liye toh tera har chptr padne mei hi maza hai chaahe usme Manan ho ya na ho...
N i just need spice in d story...
coz maza nahi aata bina spice ke story mei...
N no need to thnk me...
U deserve it...
N next update jldi chahiye mereko...
N di PM me...
Btw M Garima...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Lovelylav7

R manik n alia in relationship?..

Lovely update..
I think manik will go Chennai..I'm I right?


hmm..whether Manik and Alya are in a relationship...is the suspense!😆

Let's see if Manik goes to Chennai or not! Some time surely he will!😆😛😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fabulous update
but alya!
Didn't like her being in a relationship with Manik
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Posted: 9 years ago

Aweee... so sweet of uh...
I will b waiting...
N plss PM me when uh update...
Thanks yaar...and yes here it comes! 😉😛😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Hii Unishaz! Thanks!😳😛
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Hmmm... right Fab 5 ka intro toh chahiye mereko...
Aur intezaar hi kar ri hu mai nandu ka...
But yeh nahi chalega Manik sirf Nandu ka h...
Mai gyii thii police ststion S1 walon par case karne par bina case kare wapas aa gyi...
Sochaa ki case kar dia toh fir mera fav show off air ho jayega... 😆
N plsss Alya ko jaldi hata dena MaNan ke beech se warna mai sacchi mei case kar dungi...
N mere liye toh tera har chptr padne mei hi maza hai chaahe usme Manan ho ya na ho...
N i just need spice in d story...
coz maza nahi aata bina spice ke story mei...
N no need to thnk me...
U deserve it...
N next update jldi chahiye mereko...
N di PM me...
Btw M Garima...
Hii Garima😉

Nandu ka intezaar..baarah mulkon ki police kar rahi hai??? Yaar..itne saare chapters main tho Nandu hi the poore ke poore! Aur Manik sirf Nandu ka hai...ye sunke tho Alya bhadkegi! Ye sahi bola yaar...agar case karte tho S1 waale Manik aur Alya ke shaadi karvaa dete!😆


Alya ko hata nahi sakte...Fab 5 member jo hai..magar hum koshish jaroor karenge!😉😆
Thanks yaar...apun ka chapters saare padhke tereko majaa aaya..sunke humko bhi majaa aaya...apun bola tu meri Garima...tu boli...phorgot lyrics!😉

Next update jaldi milega tereko...bas karo thoda sa intejaar!😆😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: suraiya77

Fabulous update
but alya!
Didn't like her being in a relationship with Manik


Thanks yaar! "But Alya..." Yehi sawaal Nandini ne bhi pooche the..in a scene in Season 1 to Manik...uske baad hi Manik jaag gaya tha!😆

Actually we can't blame Alya...Manik hai hi itne irresistable!😆😉😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: priakachan



<font size="3" color="#990000">Hii Garima😉</font>

<font size="3" color="#990000"> Nandu ka intezaar..baarah mulkon ki police kar rahi hai??? Yaar..itne saare chapters main tho Nandu hi the poore ke poore! Aur Manik sirf Nandu ka hai...ye sunke tho Alya bhadkegi! Ye sahi bola yaar...agar case karte tho S1 waale Manik aur Alya ke shaadi karvaa dete!😆</font>


<font size="3" color="#990000">Alya ko hata nahi sakte...Fab 5 member jo hai..magar hum koshish jaroor karenge!😉😆</font>
<font size="3" color="#990000">Thanks yaar...apun ka chapters saare padhke tereko majaa aaya..sunke humko bhi majaa aaya...apun bola tu meri Garima...tu boli...phorgot lyrics!😉</font>

<font size="3" color="#990000">Next update jaldi milega tereko...bas karo thoda sa intejaar!😆😛</font>


Hmmm...sahi kaha... N intejaar hi toh nahi hota re merese...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter 7

Miss you, Amms

Nandini is sitting on her bed flipping through a magazine and reading an interview. The photo of Manik Malhotra is on the cover page of the magazine. Nandini quickly reached page 52 of the magazine and there is his picture and his recent interview.


Manik Malhotra the only son of the owner of Malhotra industries from a rich affluent family. There is another picture of Manik with a tall lady. Nandini read the names under the photo "Manik Malhotra..with his mother Nyonika Malhotra". Nyonika Malhotra...she looks very stylish and seems like a business woman. Party-going type of lady lagti hai...magar Manik doesn't resemble her a bit. Is she his real mother? Nandini wondered as she lay down on her bed looking at the photo of Manik and Nyonika.


"He is handsome...specially when he doesn't wear those stupid sunglasses...his eyes are so shining and deep and his jet black shiny hair" Nandini thought as her finger without even her knowing caressed the hair of Manik in the photo.


"What am I thinking? What am I doing??" Nandini thought as she took her finger off the page. "Nandini got up and sat again to read the interview.


"My life is music. Fab 5 is my family. To me without these two life is empty" Nandini read Manik's words. "I wonder why he said so...he should be saying that Nyonika Malhotra is his family. Ok..maybe its coz he loves his friends too much. I mean which son would not love his mother?" Nandini whispered to herself.

She read the final question on the page "Are you single or dating??" Nandini eagerly read the answer "No I am still single...to me music is my life and I haven't thought of dating yet. I am happy the way I am...I am happy with Fab 5. Love doesn't have a place in my life. "


Nandini read the final sentence and whispered "Manik doesn't have a girlfriend...but he does not believe in love too? Magar woh aisa kyon hai?"

"Nanduuu..." Amms was in the hallway calling her. "Nee yenna pannren? (what are you doing?) Bags pack pannittena illaya? (Did you pack your bags or not?) U have to leave tomorrow for Mumbai. Seekiram vaa (come fast)."

"Yes Amms...I'm coming" Nandini shouted back as she placed the magazine in her suitcase and shut the suitcase tight with the sound of the lock falling in place. Nandini opened the door and walked into the hallway..where Amms was filling a huge box with chips. Amms turned back smiling and said "Da chellam...packing is done?" "Yes Amms..." Nandini replied with a huge smile.

"Inge vaa (come here)" Amms replied and took Nandini's hand...caressing her forehead. "This is the first time..I am sending you to an unknown city...Mumbai. I really want to come with you there...but since you insisted that you want to go on your first trip alone...you want to make this first big move on your own..I am not coming with you. I will drop you tomorrow morning at the railway station...and you cannot stop me from doing that, ok?" Amms said as tears started welling up in her eyes. "Amms...don't worry. I will take care of myself and Rishabh is also coming with me. He will always protect me" Nandini spoke looking at Rishabh who gave her a reassuring smile.😳


"I know...Nandu...but you are a girl and trains are not safe now-a-days. I do get worried. I have asked your Venkatesh chacha to come and receive you at the station itself. All these chips are for him and your favourite Shanno chachi. She sounded very excited over phone and must've prepared herself to make lots of food for you" 😳


"Yes Amms..I know..." Nandini said with a huge smile. "I just love chachi...she is so sweet, Amms..can't wait to meet her" Nandini resting her head against Amms.

"I will be missing you a lot...kanna (beloved)...without you..Amms will feel lonely. Have to eat food alone...who will I make masala dosa for? It is your favourite food..Nandu" Amms said as she hugged her Nandini tight and a drop of tear slipped down her cheeks. 😭

"Amms...I will miss you too. I will miss eating masala dosa and sambar made by you. I will miss your hugs..." Nandini whispered. "But don't worry Amms...now its my turn to eat chachi's food for some days. I am going to be eating her newly experimented recipes" Nandini suddenly quipped with a huge smile on her face.

"Yes..and be careful...Shanno makes the weirdest recipes. U must get used to her weird cooking. " Amms said with a huge smile.

"Don't worry Amms..I love her and I am sure I'll manage to eat all she cooks" Nandini said with a huge smile.

"Tomorrow...I will leave Amms and go to a city...a city far away from Chennai where I lived all these years...will the world there be same like here?" Nandini wondered as she closed her eyes..resting herself in Amms' warm hug. 😳

Chapter 8 is updated and on---> pg 24 of this thread.


Edited by priakachan - 9 years ago

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