#3 Devil's Bride manan ff link of thread 4 on pg 1 - Page 83

Originally posted by: avirene

commenting for the first time...
i have been a silent reader...actually my fault only i couldnt comment from my phn...n its difficult for me to log in from pc!! sorry!! i am new to ds thing so its bit difficult to operate i dont knw what pm n all..
i wl try my best to comment from now on!!!

coming to ur update i hav loved each n evry update of ds ff..i wont say u to end manik's torchure coz its devil ka story...its becoming interstng..i want to knw wht happnd that manik's behaviour changed!! keep writing!! i love ur work!!!
plz help me to get the next update!!

sorry once again for commenting sooo late!!!

That's ok dear chlo maaf kia but only first and last time or you can easily log in from your phone just add anything from your profile in your bookmarks pms buddy list or profile anything i usually use if from my phone but my eyes are on you comment krna pdega glad u like it thanks

Nice update...now manan are back in action... First of all Nandini niyonica talk its nice.. Then manan talk its awesome.. But manik's behaviour towards Nandini its heart-wreching... But as u say its devil so anything happen..so over all nice update.. & Manik's revenge nature is also treat to read.. Please update soon... Sorry I m not commenting from last 2-3 times because I m out of town & I didn't get time to read the update so I read that parts in one go..sorry.. Please update soon..waiting for it..

Originally posted by: parthadmirer

Ashu first of all kaan pakkad ke sorry ... really sorry...

that i couldn't comment on last part...

yar m sorry...

but what an update yar...👏

fabulous...

specially the pov parts...

the writers pov manik and nandini pov...

awesome work...

all the emotions beautifully portrayed...

so the scene start with nandini telling neyonika that she is pregnant...

she was happy telling this news..

but neyonika was trying to make her understand that its not easy to be a single mother...

and she is already a single mother...

manik wont accept...

to which nandini is in turmoil and want to stay alone...

she want to take some decision for herself...

and neyonika leaves her...

nandini thinking abt her life...

why life has been so unfair to her...

why manik betrayed her...

she loved manik but in return manik went to another gal...

this reality was making nandini feel disgusting...

but she thought to control her life..

and she decided that now she wont let manik use her...

torture her...

ans hence decide not to tell abt the baby to manik...

as she thinks he does not deserve...

when nandini saw manik on bed with another gal...

she was shattered badly..

only the thought that manik kissed the other gal..

the same way he kissed her..

was breaking her... every second...

she came to her room and was crying badly...

she was letting her anger through tears...

and slept with it...

feeling bad for nandini as to what she is seeing in front of her...

on the other hand manik paid the gal and aksed her to leave...

he was wanted nandini to suffer in same way as he had suffered...

after gathering courage nandini went to mnaik room to talk to him...

nandini told manik that she has done and thank u and she is leaving...

but return manik insulted her...

but kehte hain na devil to hai but be careful with nandini..😆

as manik got a tight slap from nandini...

finally she said she has done with him..

and she is leaving him forever and wont come back..

she has done with him...

but that slap and this was a

manik couldn't bear that nandini will move with dhruv leaving him...

it was heart breaking for him...

he couldn't take it...

and he in anger dragged her to the store room...

and said to stay there...

nandini said she is very scared of it but he brutally replied her to die there...

she was broken completely listening this...

and she broke down..

tears flowing from her eyes..

she was thinking what life has done to her...

the scene was scary amazingly written...

the scary things were visible..

pov amazingly portrayed...

but she was determined to control herself..

for the baby she is carrying...

awesome wow nandini so proud...

that after so much this much courage...

on the other hand manik was also broken..

he loved nandini and thought that is the most amazing feeling...

but he thinks she has betrayed her...

both have misconceptions abt each other..

misunderstandings are there..

so lets see what will happen...

how these misunderstandings will solve...

and i hope things dont go out of control...

That's ok pri maaf kia tuje gosh god gave me a very big heart 😉 😆
As always your comments are the best as i told you nandini won't be a cry baby coz i don't like cry babies she will be a strong woman just like a rock well you know devils in and out nothing is hidden from you yet your excited i can't believe this 😆 chlo thik h i m glad you are excited for this pri again thanks for this comment love you sweety

Originally posted by: aisha_lv

Hey...
First let me tell u, u r perrrfecttt I just looove ur ff

Sorry for being late actually I wasn't here for sometimes but now I'm back again

I am in ur buddy list but I haven't get any update in pm just read up to part34 which is here only...please tell me have u updated farther?? If yes how can I reach them???

Thanks a lot moooaaahhh

No no i haven't updated more than this story only reached till.34 or if you want last updates you can check the index on page one and glad you like it thanks for the comment

Everytime your update surprise me.

Originally posted by: princessbaby

i felt the pain which u wanted to convey through ur POVs 😭 n trust me im dumstrucked when within just 4 hours i read all ur chapters...i just wana salute u for ur writing skills, ur imagination , ur creativity 👏 im so sorry that i was a silent reader...actuallly im all new to handle this...i desperately wanted to write comments that to long long ones...but to mu dismay...!! im so sorry...but plzzz do pm me plzzz...its a request from my side...im really addicted to ur story...so plzzz do pm me...!!! n plzzz give us an update...!! waiting is killing me.n a round of applause to u... 👏

Four hours me story khatam really uff ek min ke liye uthi nh kya tum and salute no no its a big thing don't do this its just a story glad you like it and buddy me i will surely pm you thanks for the comment

Originally posted by: Honey123pooh

Hie...I must say what a story...got me hooked on to it since like 2 days and I literally finished the hole story until now in 3 days..even in office breaks I read this..! Got to know about this story through a friend few days back and have been planning to read since then but something or the other was coming up but Monday I had started reading it and I had literally tears in my eyes..I was like Etna jaanwar kaun hosaktha hai and that made me read all the chapters in almost 3 days..!!!I'm glad I've read this..jeez I could feel nandini...!!!! Can't wait for you to put up the next part..! Keep writing..!

Thank you so much dear glad you like it or your comment boost me up i thought in this dark zone everyone will leave but i was wrong no one left heartly thanks to my readers for this and glad u like my story i will update soon if u want i will pm u for sure

I m ur new reader pls first thread mil Sakta hain

Amazing update...
Manik thinks that nandini cheated on him...so he wants her to suffer the way he is suffering...but nandini don't know anything about this and she is hurt by manik's behavior...
Eagerly waiting to see what happens next...
Update soon...and plzzz do pm me...

hey sorry for late comment...u r story is vry emotional but too nice to read it both if them r in lain n really hurt but plz jldi dono ki msundrstndng clr kr do na plz...
thnkx fr pms...
srry fr lafe comment...
cont soon...
god bless u...


SHUBHI