#3 Devil's Bride manan ff link of thread 4 on pg 1

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sathvika.p

@sathvika.p

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Posted: 9 years ago

#831

this made me so sad...poor nandu and manik...this is what happens when we dont open our heart and dont comminucate with each other properly...this Misunderstandings u knoww...but u penned it well...and specially that Writers Pov part...👏👏

Edited by sathvika.p - 9 years ago

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purikrish

@purikrish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#832

Sorry for the late comment...its really amazing to read such a strong characterization of nandini... Reading this ff we can literally feel the pain she's going through right now and inspite of all this its great to see that she's putting up a brave front.

Thanks to u u for not letting her succumb into this pain.

At the same time inspite of all the hatred towards nandini we can understand maniks pain too.Because of all his experiences in life so far somewhere down the line he not being able to take betrayl another time is also justified.

Even though I'm extremely curious to know the real reason behind these misunderstandings and want them to be back together asappp...like someone mentioned in the earlier comments we want u to continue the story in ur own pace.

Eagerly waiting for next update

Kudos to u for such an amazing potrayl of all the emotions that the characters r going through with such perfection.

👏👏👏

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MahimaSankhla

@MahimaSankhla

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Posted: 9 years ago

#833

Hey!!! Pls update d next part soon.

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Parthini15

@Parthini15

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Posted: 9 years ago

#834

Hi Aashana... How are you

So sorry for the late reply cos I have limited Internet access problems...

Regarding the update... It was so good... Heart touching...

I was literally awestruck at ur writing skills

I really appreciate your work

Writing a love story that too the most crucial breaking up part was really tough one...and u nailed it.

But I really feel so bad for nandu...she was soo hurt...and manik...without asking her even once he just decided to hurt her... I hate it...

Sometimes life is a hell ride... Poor nandu she was left to her own suffering... That too when she is pregnant... God... I hate people who really doing does that... Please unfold the secrets soon and give a happy ending...

Eagerly waiting for the next update

Thank you for sharing ur work

Please share the next ones too

Take care

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Poonam

@Cutiepari97

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Posted: 9 years ago

#835

Hey... It's poonam

Your story is awosome seriously that manik nandini misunderstanding just killing part and was awosome please update next part

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anjali3010

@anjali3010

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#836

Hey...awesome story...loved it...but Manik is behaving so rudely with nandini...looking forward to read further...pm me too...but I cant send buddy request...mere phone s hoti ni h :(...n promise now I'll comment regularly ;-)

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k2k3

@k2k3

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#837

I read all the chapters in 3 days... awesome story... cont soon

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JiyaRajput

@JiyaRajput

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#838

hey its been so long u haven't posted please update na eagerly waiting for the update ...so eager to know what had happened that manik is behaving so rudely with nandu please try to make them together cannot see them separate anyways I more thing I had never say this to you but you are such an amazing writer I seriously feel whatever u write in the story I cry with manan I laugh with them its amazing story a totally unique story thanks for giving us such an amazing story

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9873762232

@9873762232

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Posted: 9 years ago

#839

Hi😊

Frankly speaking I am also ur one of those silent readers

Actually I read manan ff hiding from my mom at midnight

so I don't take the risk of commenting if someday my mom sees them but I seriously love ur ff please don't be harsh on ur silent readers

I have read several manan ff's on this forum but I seriously love ur story and wait eagerly for ur update ...

I am really sry to hurt if I hurt u by anyway but I promise I would try my level best to comment regularly unless my mom catches me read handed🤢

But plz don't be angry on ur silent readers and update us chapters which we wait for ...

And this is not any explanation just a cute sorry😛 and, loads of appreciation 👏and small request plz be mercy on it readers and I promise I will comment regularly😊

Plzzz🥱