#2 MANAN FF LOVE IS MY LIFE PART LINK TO THREAD 3 ADDED PG 143 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
CONGRATULATIONS FOR THE NEW THREAD...
I KNOW I MAY SEEM OFFENSIVE BUT IT IS TRUE

#anu22sweety

I don't know what u have planned... All I know is I'm really upset. Ek ladki 5 saal se hopelessly selflessly kisi ka intezaar kar rhi h. Uske peeche uske doston ka uske Papa ka khayal rakh rhi h aur saath saath usse kia hua waala ki woh kabhi nahi royegi usse bhi night rahi h... 5 yrs ho gaye lekin woh ladki ek pal ke liye tooti nahi.

AUR HUA KIA USKE SAATH ATLAST JAB USKA INTEZAAR KHATAM HUA TO PATA KYA CHALTA H YAHI KI JISKA WOH PANCH SAALON SE WAIT KAR RHI H HE HAS FORGOT HER AN MOVE ON WITH HIS LIFE.


CHAHE JO BHI REASON HO AAPKA ISS TWIST KE PEECHE BUT NO ONE CAN'T UNDERSTAND THE PAIN OF THAT GIRL THE PAIN OF HER HOPE BREAKING...


JUST IMAGINE HOW BADLY SHE WOULD BROKE DOWN AFTER 5 YEARS

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Posted: 10 years ago
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congrats for new thread continue soo
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CONGRATULATIONS YAAR... I'M SOOO HAPPY & YEAH ISI KHUSHI ME 2 UPDATES EK SAATH PLS... I KNOW I'M GREEDY IN THIS MATTER BUT WHAT TO DO I'M NEVER ENOUGH OF UR FF & I REALLY HOPE WOHI SKOL WALE PURANE DIN AJAYEN MANAN KI LIFE ME THEIR UNDERSTANDING, LOVE,ROMANCE... SAB PLS AB AUR MAT RULANA SHONA PLS
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congo dear ... u totally deserved it. ..👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congo... For the new thread
U deserve it
Way to go girl

Keep writing
Stay blessed
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 127 :

Alia and mukthi fall on couch. Dhruv and kabir hold them and sit beside them.

Manik goes near them but no one looks him.

ALIA : guys she must be on her way

MUKTHI : wo kisi bi vakth yaha aa sakthi hain

DHRUV : nahi we can't let her come here

KABIR : main main use call kartha hoon

MANIK : guys kya hua tum log itne pareshan kyu ho

ALIA : kabir jaldi karna

KABIR : haan its ringing par she is not answering

DHRUV : guys ham sab try karthe hain

MUKTHI : haan

Everyone gets busy calling nandini.

SOHA : guys do you need any help

MUKTHI : help my foot and gets up in anger

Kabir stops her and "iss vakth hamare liye shona important hain"

Mukthi sighs and again tries calling nandu.

ALIA : babyyy please pick up the phone kaha hain tu

DHRUV : pariii please yar please pick up the phone

NANDINI : hellooo

DHRUV : pariii

NANDINI : haan dhruv kya hua

Kabir snatches the cell and "shona kaha hain tu"

Mukthi takes the cell and "tu teek tho hain na"

Now alia takes the cell and "tu call kyu lift nahi karri thi"

DHRUV : alia phone mujhe de

MUKTHI : nahi mujhe

ALIA : let me speak

KABIR : guys enough and takes the cell from alia's hands

"Shonaaa" and have tears

NANDINI : kabirrr shhh

Kabir closes his eyes and tears fall down from his eyes.

NANDINI : kabirrr please

He wipes his tears and opens his eyes.

"Tu kaha hain patha hain hum kitna dar gaye the"

NANDINI : jhute kahike

KABIR : haaa

NANDINI : kuch nahi main tum logon ke kareeb hi hoon

KABIR : kyaaa

NANDINI : kya hua

KABIR : kuch nahi woo wo darasal bath ye hain ki tum na tum na yaha par math aao ham hamare gar ke rasthe main hain tho tum bi seeda hamare gar ko ajao

NANDINI : kabirrr

KABIR : haan

NANDINI : abhi ka call aya tha tum log abhi aur navya ko pick karne nahi jaoge kya

KABIR : ooo haan teek hain hum hum jayenge

NANDINI : hmmm wo log adhe gante main airport pahunch jayenge tho tum log abi niklo

KABIR : haan par tu kaha hain bol na ham tujhe pick karenge phir sath main chelenge

NANDINI : nahi baba mujhe aur time lagega isliye tum logon ko kehri hoon

KABIR : hooo

NANDINI : hmmm acha suno

KABIR : haan

NANDINI : jo ankhon ke saamne hotha hain na wo hamesha sach nahi hotha hain

Kabir looks manik who was standing exactly opposite to him with soha.

KABIR : haan

NANDINI : love you

Kabir smiles and looks at FAB 3. They all shout in unison "princess love you too"

MANIK POV : princess... pari... shona... baby... kon ho sakthi hain jiska chehra mujhe dikayi dera hain kya wohi...

Nandu smiles and byyy

KABIR : byyy

MUKTHI : tu ne hame bath kyu nahi karne di use

KABIR : rasthe main batha dunga chel

ALIA : kaha

KABIR : wo abhi aur navya ko pick karna hain airport se

DHRUV : acha teek hain chel

FAB 4 sees manik but without saying anything simply walks out of the house.

MANIK ROOM :

Mr manik malhotra am warning you haa agar tum apna natak bandh nahi karoge tho wo din zyada door nahi jab FAB 4 khud tumhe zinda mardega.

Panch saal pure panch saal hogaye hain maine tho suna tha logon ka dimag vakth ke sath bada hotha hain lekin tumhara dimag na shayad tum US main hi usse bej aye hoo seriously matlab ek tho bina kuch bole chele gaye aur phir ab panch saal ke baad vapas aye ho tho phir ek jhut ko sath main lekar aye ho... kyaa kyaa samaj kya rakha hain mujhe ...pagal hoon haa...nahi bolo...!!!! and makes a angry pout

You know what mr malhotra tum khud tumhare bare main uthna nahi janthe ho jitna main tumhare bare main janthi hoon mujhe tho tumhe dekhne ki bi zarurath nahi padi ye jane ke liye ki tum jhut bolre ho ye kya naya natak hain soha meri gf hain and all haa hmmm chodo tum thodi apna muh kolege vaise tumhari vajah se pehli baar mujhe sab ko yaha se bahar bejna pada and I hate you for that agar wo sab yahi par hothe na tho pakka tum logon ke beech bohuth badi ladayi hothi jo main bilkul nahi chahthi

LIVING ROOM :

Manik closes his eyes and takes a deep breath. He slowly opens his eyes and looks around.

MANIK POV :

I can feel her... kya wo yahi kahi... nahi agar hothi tho mujhe dekhe bina khud ko nahi rok pathi...

MANIK ROOM :

Ayyooo ayyapppaaa kyu karre ho mere sath aisa aap ko patha bi hain main kitna control karri hoon khud ko uske paas na jane ke liye ufff and closes her eyes.

(Few hours back)

NANDINI : ramu kaka

RAMU : haan beta

NANDINI : aap gar chele jayiye aur haan sab logon ko bi kehna ki wo ab gar ja sakthe hain

RAMU : lekin beta

NANDINI : kaka mousam karab hain vaise bi main gar par hi rahungi tho aap phikar math kijiye

RAMU : teek hain beta and leaves

Nandu goes to kitchen.

Aaj nandini moorthy sab ke liye khud apne hathon se kana banayegi and starts preparing dinner.

She soon finishes the dinner and listening to door sound quickly runs up.

She stands behind pillar hiding herself and listens FAB 4 talking.

When power goes off she slowly goes inside a room to get the candle and when she returns back she listens manik's voice.

NANDINI POV :

I was shocked,surprised, happy bewildered and don't know what all. I thought it was a dream but no it wasn't. He was real, he he was actually present. His voice it had the same magic and was strongly pulling me towards him.

When suddenly power came my heart started beating rapidly. I was breathing heavily. I just turned and stood leaning to wall. I was blushing and don't know why even though trying hard I couldn't lift my face and look him. My mind was not working and all I could understand was the only thing that my love for whom I was waiting for so long was present in front of my eyes.

I was busy smiling and blushing when I heard a girls voice. I didn't paid attention to it and was trying to slow down my breath and look my love slowly. With great difficulty i turned towards wall still hiding behind it. I was slowly lifting my face when I heard him saying "soha my gf"

My blood boiled with anger. I wanted to look his face but I knew the second I will see him he will get to know about me. I controlled myself from running down and punching him and simply moving back slowly came inside the room.

PRESENT :

Nandu opens her eyes and looks at the frame.

"Kyu kare ho ye sab haan kitna dard hora hoga tumhe hain na"

LIVING ROOM :

SOHA : manikkk

MANIK : haan

SOHA : dekho agar tum chaho tho

MANIK : soha can we not talk about it please

SOHA : teek hain

MANIK : tum jaake fresh hojao

SOHA : okk

MANIK : wo right leke phir left lena vaha ek room hain tum usse use kar sakthi ho

SOHA : okkk and leaves

Manik sits on couch and closes his eyes leaning his head back.

Kaha ho tum...kaise milu tumse...panch saal khud ko rokliya par mujhse ab aur nahi hoga...mujhe tumhe dekhna hain...

He opens his eyes.

Kaise kaise kaise... kisse puchu kon hain jo tumhare bare main jantha ho... Kabir,dhruv,alia,mukthi kisise bi nahi puch saktha... Daddd??? lagtha hain wo gar par nahi hain lekin unse bi kaise puch saktha hoon goddd

Gar haan gar ja saktha hoon nahi vaha par maa aur papa honge tho nahi ufff goddd please please kuch karo ek baar bas ek baar mujhe usse dekhne do

He sits like that for some time and after that slowly starts moving upwards.

He goes near his room and opens the door. He slowly steps inside his room.

"Manikkk nooo manikkk nahiii manikkk please"

"Manik ye kya karre ho chodo mujhe"

"Hahahaa manik is a fool manik is a fool hehehee"

Manik sees her everywhere.

He closes his eyes and "aisa kyu lagtha hain ki tum yahi par ho mere paas"

He slowly walks inside and sits on bed. He looks around and smiles.

"Kuch nahi badla"

Power goes off.

MANIK : godd phir se ufff

Manik sleeps on his stomach and looks at the moon which was clearly visible to him though he was on bed.

He listens some sound but ignores it.

He again listens it and this time he gets up and sits straight.

"Ye aawaz"

He closes his eyes and again hears the same sound.

He immediately opens his eyes and gets down from the bed.

He looks around and then slowly walks towards balcony.

Moon light was enough for him to walk towards the balcony.

It was raining. Curtains were moving to and fro due to cool breeze.

His eyes fell on a pair of anklets and a beautiful smile takes curve on his lips.

As he walks further the sound of anklets grows louder and louder making his smile grow wider and wider.

His heart starts beating rapidly and he could actually hear that sound too.

He stands at the door of balcony hiding himself behind a curtain and slowly moves his eyes.

MANIK POV :

The sound of her anklets was giving me peace. I smiled and slowly tried to see her face. She was wearing a beautiful white anarkali dress. I again smiled and then my eyes fell on her tiny hands. Her bangles were making ausome melody. Her skin was glowing in the same way like it did five years before. She moved a little and I quickly moved back behind curtain hiding myself.

I slowly again looked her and got disappointed. Her face was totally covered with her dupatta. I slowly moved out without making noise and stood infront of her.

I moved closer to remove her dupatta but even her little move made me scared so i stood there silently watching her.

I guess even god was on my side today as I was trying to look her through that dupatta, due to continuous breeze it slowly started flying away from her face.

I was waiting in fact dying to have a glance of her and yes finally after some time her dupatta got totally removed from her face but no I wasn't happy because this time her hairs were troubling me.

Her hairs were spreaded all over her face not letting me watch her completely. I sighed but then smiled as she was looking more beautiful now. With great courage i decided to remove her hairs and when I was about to move she herself slowly removed them making me frozen at my place.

Finally finally the day I was waiting for so long was here.

My love...my life was infront of my eyes.

I leaned back at door and stood looking her without blinking my eyes.

She was looking breathtaking. I can bet easily and say that 26 alphabets would not at all be sufficient to praise her beauty.

I couldn't control more so I slowly moved closer to her and settled myself beside her on couch without disturbing her.

(Couch is similar to that one on manik confession)

(End of POV)

Manik just lies beside her staring her playing with her jhumki.

He smiles hugely looking her.

"Sapna jahan dastak na de
Chaukhat thi woh aankhein meri"


He moves few hairs from her face and tugs them beside her ear.

"Baaton se thi tadaad mein
Khamoshiyan zyaada meri"

He places his left hand on her cheek and caresses it with his thumb.

"Jabse pade tere kadam
Chalne lagi duniya meri"

He smiles and kisses her forhead

"Mere dil mein jagah Khuda ki khaali thi
Dekha wahan pe aaj tera chehra hai"


He looks her with love filled eyes

"Main bhatakta huaa sa ek baadal hoon
Jo tere asmaan pe aake thehra hai"


Nandu slowly places her head on his chest and her hands on his stomach.

"Tu rooh hai toh main kaaya banu
Taa-umr main tera saaya banu"


She lifts her face up and nuzzels her face on his neck

"Keh de toh ban jaaun bairaag main
Kehde toh main teri maaya banu"


She moves her lips on his cheek drinking the lone tear which escaped from his eye.

"Tu saaz hai, main ragini
Tu raat hai, main chandni"


He smiles and placing his hands on her waist pulls her close.

"Mere dil mein jagah Khuda ki khali thi
Dekha wahan pe aj tera chehra hai"


He kisses her hairs and closes his eyes smiling happily

"Main bhatakta huaa sa ek baadal hoon
Jo tere asmaan pe aake thehra hai"


Nandu slowly opens her eyes and looks him smiling.



Salt and sugar look like same from distance but they are not the same...zaruri nahi hain ki jo cheez hamare ankhon ke samne ho vohi sahi ho aur sach...kisne kaha ki sacha pyar sirf ladkiyan hi kar sakthe hain haaa ladke bi sacha pyar kar sakthe hain aur agar wo apna pyar dikathe nahi hain tho iska matlab ye nahi hain ki wo log pyar karthe hi nahi hain...and now coming to my story to all the lovely haters of my story who sent me very long pm's i just wanted you all to ask one question just because manik introduced soha as his gf you have decided that he has cheated on nandu and so he doesnt deserve any love and happiness in his life like seriously naaa when a person does something na then their will be a reason behind it haan zaruri nahi hain ki har insan sacha ho par tum log manik ko janthe ho na tho phir aise soch bi kaise sakthe ho ki wo hamari pyari si nandu ko chodkar kisi aur ke bare main sochega nahi nahi aisa kabi nahi ho saktha so now please calm down and to the lovely lovers of my story thank you so much for trusting me hope you all are very much happy now so yes finally manan are back now please start commenting and am sry if I was rude aur haan few asked me to stop ff so now please tell me should I stop it or continue...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Dekho aap kuch bhi karo.lzz hamri manan ko alag or yeh story stopmat:keejiye..apki story bohot awesom hai..plzz..continue the:story.. 😊 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Yup plz don't stop the story
Don't separate manan plzzz

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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Nice update! Its interesting & emotional
U should continue😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Dear..Anu.
Heartily congratulations for # 2. 😛😛.

👏👏👏.⭐️.⭐️.⭐️.

Thanks.

Stay blessed dear




Love. .
Jyoti.










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