manan FF linked by destiny part 17 B/pg 139 (23 FEB) - Page 81

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Manik stopped the car in front of nandini house and nandini was about to open the door he stopped her by holding her hand. Nandini looked towards him with a questioning look and manik without any delay pulled her for a hug. Nandini was shocked at first but she too hugged him with equal fervor. After a long time nandini broke the hug and looked towards him and manik moved out of the car and opened the door for her and extended his hand for her. Nandini took his hand happily and stepped out of the car.

M: nandu lets get married fastly??

Nandini was not expecting this question from manik and she was stunned in her place. Manik noticed this

M: if u r comfortable only and...

His words were stopped when nandini suddenly started to kiss him on his lips. Manik was stunned with her boldness but replied with equal fervor. They both were kissing as if it was their last kiss and nandini was trying to show dominance and manik allowed her to do so. After a long good kiss manik broke the kiss feeling her breathless and looked at her questioningly

N: its for thinking that I am not comfortable with you and always remember I am at the most comfortable place in this world for me when I am with you

Manik who was more than happy pulled her for a tight hug and nandini who was already for this readily gave in. while hugging manik realized that she was not ready to leave him so he tightened the hug

M: vaise meri punishment is superb I want this punishment every second

Nandini blushed to crimson red on hearing his comment and she too tightened the hug.

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Cabir decided to go and sleep and he stood from there

C: I am going to sleep...navya come with me

A: tujhe navya ki kya zarurat thi to sleep go and sleep on ur bed and navya is not coming with u

Mu: haa kya anvya ki sath hi sona hey kya??

C: haa kyu nahi wo toh biwi hi na meri

Ab: oyee idiot abhi shaddi nahi huhihey and haa engagaement bhi nahi so plz don't get any ideas okkk

Cabir with a sad face left from there while all others were laughing seeing him. while going cabir saw manan who were hugging each other and he is so happy to see them together.

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Manan were hugging each other very tightly and their time was broken by cabir.

C: agar ho gaya thumari romance toh u can come inside

They broke their hug and nandini was blushing and looking here and there and manik rolled his eyes and gave a glare to cabir.

M: thum kuch dher ki baad nahi aasakthey kya??

C: agar if I come after 20 hrs also u will say the same dialogue Mr. romance Malhotra

M: very funny aaa

C: plz will u both come inside

M: nahi cabir I will go its late

C: kk did u eat lunch and did u made my little and innocent sister to suffer with hunger

M: wht?? Yeh innocent haa

He said this loudly and murmured u should see just 10 mins back near her ears while nandini hit him playfully on his stomach with her elbow and manik smiled.

C: agar ho gaya toh plz lets goo

M: haa u go she will come

C: aur romance karna hey kya...and nandu come fastly

Cabir left from there and nandini was about to go when manik pulled her back and she collided with his chest. She looked at him questioningly

M: wht?? Don't look like that give me my good night kiss and go

Nandini blushed but when she saw manik who had his eyes closed and was ready for the kiss she moved forward and kissed him on his cheeks.

Manik opened his eyes and holded her tightly by her waist.

M: this is not fair u kissed me on the cheeks

N: acha then where are u expecting the kiss

M: aur kaha meri lips mey

Manik pulled her more towards him and was about to kiss her but nandini kept her hand on his lips and manik opened his eyes and gave her a questioning look

N: aaj keliye bahot ho gaya Mr. Malhotra

M: acha I only kissed u once u only kissed me more

Nandini blushed more and she somehow distracted him and got rid of his grip while manik was looking at her irritatingly and nandini moved from there and went towards the door of her house and before entering she stopped and turned back

N: good night Mr. Malhotra your wish will be fulfilled tomorrow

She blew a flying kiss to him and left from there and manik was smiling like an idiot there.

M: I love u a lot nandu

He murmured to himself and left from there all smiling.

Abhi dropped mukti to her house while Dhruv dropped alya.

They both went to their houses and drifted to sleep.




so here is the update

hope u like it

i will not be posting the story till monday

as i have competitions in my college

and if i have a time i will surely try to give the update

hope u understand

spread love

love

prathyusha

Edited by prathyushaeluri - 9 years ago
dhillon90 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazinggg update
Thnx for pm me
Awesome manan
Lovd it
Continue soon
riyaparo thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
beautiful update
i just loved it
continue soon
ROOP0605 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing, beautiful update
thanks for pm
waiting for next part
shruti1997 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Manan so cute together
Update soon

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
😳 thank you for the pm dear..
wow...gol gappa with masti and romance...thts amazing..
so sweet wish from golgappa wala..
aur woh kya tha??i mean seriously evil twin aur innocent??
sach main joke of the decade yaar..
love their friendship wala nokh-jhok..
too funny..
aur last part was awwwesome..
let's get married first wala kissi bhi..:p
nice update..
All the best for your competition...
take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res

Unressing...

Awesum update...Lvd it..
Thnks so much dear 4 d pm..
Golgappa vala scene was so suprb n awesum,...
Manan r njying fulliest their lyf...
Golgappa vala bhi manan ko aashirvad diya..So cute..

Den Cabir teasin manan...Fabulous as always..
Manik askin nandu 4 mrriage n manan so passionate n romantic kiss
Damn awesum update dear..
Do continue..Waitin 4 nxt update dear..
N all d bst 4 ur competition dear..
Edited by Sreeja_babu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing update...
thanks for the pm...
pls continue...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Naughty manik
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update
goolll gappeee...spicy wala
very bad di muh mai pani aa gaya
licking fingers wala scene was tooo cutee vo bhi vendor k samne
and vo tab blessings deta hai that was dam adorable
nandu ne kiss ki vo toh meri expectation se bht zyada tha...lol
mr.malhotra ko agar aise punishment mile vo toh har sec galti hi karega
cabir ko navya k sath sona tha...kitna desperate hai banda
majnu aur joker dono ek jaise hai...desperate kahi k
dhruv...shyyy boy bechara kuch bola hi nhi chup chap sabki teasings sunta raha ...uss bechare ko manik se kuch sikhao jo baar baar cabir ka mih todta hai
manan teasing was fab...innocenttt
miss writing queen
update was supercalifragalistic xpalidocious
loved it
take care
chauke chakkee marna
thanks for pm
love:
Anaita
Edited by fireflies10 - 9 years ago

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