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Posted: 9 years ago

N: u want to say that u love me??

M: haa...vo toh mey karthihu na

N: wht??? She gets happy

M: mera matlab hey ki I love my friends and u r my friend na

N: yeah...she gets sad again

M: acha vo sab chodo and mujhe ye batav ki y r u sad???

N: vo isiliye kyu ki mey bhai ke liye bahot worried hu

M: hum sab hey na

Nandini started to cry and manik holds her hands.





M: u can cry near me without any hesitation

N: I know manik u r the one with whom I can be me only

M: even me too only with u I will be manik but with others I am manik Malhotra

Nandini smiles listening to him and rested her head on his shoulder.



N: pata nahi mey bahot strong dikna chathahu lekin thumari samne mey act nahi karpati

M: vo isiliye kyu ki u don't want to pretend in front of me like others

Nandini smiles and manik smiles more seeing her smiling and rubs her cheeks with his hand. Mean while all came back and they entered cabir room.

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Shilpa: I am very happy to get a proposal for my daughter for ur son

Person (lady): even I am very happy and dono ka pair it will be awesome

Viren: yeah and let us talk to nandini once

Person (male): theek hey but humari taraaf se haa hey

Vishal: I am happy that u liked my pari

Person (female): who don't like her she is so pure at heart

Nazriya: yeah to hey she is very pure soul

All were happy with this marriage proposal

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All entered cabir room and were talking on random topics

M: humari iss kushi ka kuch fun toh bantahey na fab 5 style mey

C: wht???mey yeha bed pe hu aur thumko fun chahiye

Mu: thu chup kar na thum toh kal subha discharge hone wali hey

A: haa lekin kya fun manik

M: iss kushi ko aryaman ki band bajayenge

D: I am in

C: wht is this yaar??? Am I dreaming?

D: kya hua??

C: thum bolrahihey that u r in and first than others

D: mey kisiko nahi chodunga agar vo meri friends ki life ki sath kelengi toh

Mu: acha chodo and manik batav plan kya hey??

Manik then smiling looks towards cabir and navya


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Shilpa: hum jis kaam keliye ayatha vo pura hogaya hey

Viren: lekin ab hum nandu se kaise puchegi vuski shaadi ki barimey

Nazriya: vo mujhe chod digiye

Vishal: yeah we will make her meet him early

Shilpa: lets wait till cabir completely recovers

Viren: yeah u r right

Nazriya: meine batana bhool gaya nandu keliye hospital se call ayatha

Vishal: yeah she has to join tomorrow

Shilpa: lets talk to her tomorrow about her marriage

All agreed and decided to leave to their rooms and went for sleeping

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Druv, mukti and alya left for their homes and manik was insisting nandini to go home.

M: nandu don't behave like a child go home

N: nahi manik mey nahi ghane vali hu

M: nandu please cabir kal subha ghar aajayenga na

N: haa lekin mey yeha rahungi

Na: nandu ghar chali gav na

M: see now navya is also telling na pls go na

N: lekin manik...

She was cut by manik who held her hand

M: don't worry mey kuch nahi hone dunga do u trust me na

She nodded her head in yes

M: then go home for me

N: acha theek hey lekin I will come early in the morning

M: u can but u should sleep and come

Nandini smiles

N: acha theek hey byeee

She left from there and manik sat on the chair outside the room while navya is in room with cabir and all drifted to sleep.



i am back with the update

before the date

keep guessing wht will happen further

lizbeth thanks for ur comment

even i felt that too

and i promise once aryaman track gets over

u will get only manan updates

with the confession and their tour

please give me suggestions

to improve the story

and make it the way u like them

waiting for ur reviews

love

prathyusha


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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update. Nandini's parents are all set to make nandini getting married soon. Hope soon manik confess his feelings for nandini before it becomes too late.manan's convo was amazing. Eagerly waiting for next update. Thanks for pm.
Keep writing.
Stay blessed😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome.
Nandu is joining hospital for what ?
Who is the boy with whom her marriage has been fixed ...
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update
manan so cute their conversation is good
but whom they want to get marry to her?
thanks for pm
continue soon
waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing update .

Manan convo was soo cute ..
complete this aryamaan part soon .
Nandani ke parents uski shadi .
manik confess ur feeling soon.

cont soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update...
Hopefully manik confess his feelings 4 nandini b4 its 2 late...& who is d boy wid whom nandini's marriage is fixed???
Plz update soon...waiting eagerly 4 d next update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome chappy nandu and manik ki convo ko superb...lajawab loved it update soon take care ty for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
when is manik gonna confess his feelings for nandu

nice update
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Lizbeth

This new twist is good.. Th stry is gud but thr z less manan.. U r concentrating on others lyf mre thn manan.. Datz wt I feel.. Nywy lukin forward for the nw twist

thanks for ur suggestion
will definitely work out in it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kavyach

New twists...

Confusing promo...?
Waiting for d update...

thanks for the comments

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