Manan ss : Hum aapke hain kaun.. ?? Discontd. Note pg 39 - Page 85

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<font size="2"> [COLOR= blue] So...Accha lemme tell you something...hame bohut zyaada mazaa aapke A/N par ke aaye...haha...wo naa aapke updates jaise hii lambee hai...and the thing which touched is aapke way of update dedication...wow you're such a sweet heart...accha hamaare bak bak ko yahi break lagaa teh hai... Last mein phir se tapkenge...hehehe...now proceeding towards story... A big big big thank you for creating HAM AAPKE HAIN KOUN?? with MANAN, CAVYA, MUKBHI, DHRULYA touch...I just love this movie like anything... So its very easy to get related to the story... It's like visualizing rather than reading... Thanks for this contribution...

Banner was so nice...gudiyaa[ISHU]did the great job...Prologue was funny and little confusing... Hehehe... Monkey malhotra and chipkali... Combination was superb...but i did got the catch ki they are not Manan... I thought its Mukti...but nikhle toh koi aur...Hehehe...

And Malhotra's and Murthy's introduction was like haayooo rabba aur kinne log hai types... Hahaha...i thought hamaare family hii bohut big hai... Par yahaan toh... Uff...dono families means Manan's Daada jii...bade paapa...bade mamma...chaacha...chaachi...Abhi...Mukku... Manik...nandu...Cabir...Navya...Aliya...Dhruv.. Ufff...inne saare log... Murthy's daadu is shooo cute...awww kinne tantrums hai dawaai lene k liye.. And his daughter in law's was so devoted to the family... And his son's are very obedient.. Awww daadu call his grand daughters and son by nick names...i loved nandu as sugar and dhruv as nonu...then coming to malhotra's same case daughter in laws are devoted to the family... Son's are obedient... And grand children's are very loving creatures...

Hmmm...so mukku k shaadi abhi se karaane mein game khela gaye hai Murthy and Malhotra uncle milke... Wow...even they are best buddies in their college time... Phir toh they knows about each other very clearly... Zyaada parak ne ki zaroorat hii nahi hai...Hehehe... Awww!! Mukku's that expression when she came to know about her RISHTA...wow its just priceless...confused but still blushing on particular word Rishta was the state of every girl... Aww chaachi is so cute... Leg pulling karna koi inn chaachiyon se seekhe...and Mamma's they are like khushi k maare rone laag jaate hai...betiyon ko paraaye karne k liye kitne sapne dekhte hai...jab paraaye hone ka waqt aagaye toh rokhna chaahte hai... Kitne ajeeb hai na mamma aur beti k rishta...

Then coming to Jaipur trip jahaan par younger Malhotra's aur Murthy's ke mulaakaat hone waale hai...wow Navni's bond was so cute...nandu's way of waking navya was funny..Hehehe... And dhruni team was shoo cute...dono bhaai behen milke doosre behen ko chiraana...wow...Here Manik is up si early... Ye toh aatve ajoobe ho gaye... Cabir's tantrums ghade kahinke...Awww!!!Alooo as baby sister of Manbir... I so wanted this to happen...thak gaye teh ham baccha ye wahi ex-gf or crush or some sacrificing drama's dekh ke in dono manik aur aliya k... You have binded them in very pure relationship SIBLINGS... thanks for this uniqueness...

Then first meeting... Wow...matlab full filmy...hahaha...car's bach gaye varna inn logon ke vajese wo bichaare kisi jagaah par takra jaate...hmm...ye kya teh??Navnik toh ek doosre ke khatal karne mein lage huye hai... Dhrulya.. Uff such a kiddo's...ek dusre ke baal pakar liye... And finally Cabini has to jump in this fight to rescue others from killing each other... Hehehe... Wow both soon to be couples ek dusre ko nahi dekhe...it was very interesting... Car mein sannaate was wow... Then cabir and nandu attacking their cousins was so cute...phir that sorry session was so adorable...

Again they both are going to same place... Kishan jii ke mandir...wow Cavya's first meet was nice... Hahaha... That chotu boy was so cute.. Kinne acche se buttering kiye maama se naa keh ne ki...Oh nooo...Cavya phir gir gaye... Control biraa agar larki ko kiss kar dii toh saare haddiyaan thor ke rakh dene hai aapke Navya ne byee God... Haww!! Ye kya cabir ne Navya ko intentionally giraaye...that's too bad... Aur upar se uthne mein help bhi nahi kiye... Shit yaar poor girl got sprain on her ankle...Manan side Here situation is like pehle nazar mein aise jaadu kar diye nandu ne manik pe...ki bichaare shoe lace baand ne ku jagah larki ko taar rahe hai...Haww!!! Nandu manik ko bhikaari banaa daale...Drama queen I'll never forgive you for this... Huhh...Mr. Majnu aapko kis angle se bhikaari lag teh hai??...huhh...larki gaye payaal mile...wow..
Aawww!!!bichaare love sick puppy ban gaye hai
Hahaha...cabilya teased manik to the core...
And here dhruni teased Navya... Hehehe...
It was damn funny...

Oh freak nandu toh rone lage yaar...oh... Paayal was given by daadi...tch...poor girl... Don't worry sugar your paayal is safe with your hero...which will connect you to him...

Here in Mumbai... Mukbhi meeting was too good
There nervousness... Happiness... And confusion was clearly visible... Their talks went very well... Made for each other types... Hmm...thore se boldness from both side... Haha both are clean bowled for each other... Hmm..so Rishta is pakka...

Then that shopping thing was too good... specially that kaaka...and his marwaari wow...
Arre kakaa toh daadu k long lost dost nikhle.. Hahaha... Dhruv was shoo cute...nandu is little embarrassed by dhruv's behavior... Then malhotra siblings also came to same shop... Hahaha... Marwaari ne bolti band kar dii bhai behen ke...hmmm...last mein like finally Manan met...hahaha...nandu in such a cute look... Wearing spex and pagdi... Shoo cutee manik toh poore flat hahah... Haayee ek dusre k baahon mein wow...great postures... Mr. Malhotra hold on varna gharbar ho jaayenge..
Haawww!! Daddu aagaye vaapis kya timing hai huhh.. Chalo jii koi exchange nahi huye bags ke.. Hmmm...awesome update cutie pie... Just loved it... Update faster...
Continue soonish...
Take care stay blessed

PS- Aur bhi lambaaa comment chaayiye toh send aaple flavor ORS for me in next update.. Varna pataa chale ki do aur attacks aagaye... Haayoo rabb jii...finally ho gaye hamaare promise poore...cutie pie now I'm choo mantaring myself aapse acche koun jaante hai hamaare personal life k baare mein so time for those stupid medis...huhh...i just hate it...
Do well in your exams... All the best.. Bbyee... [/COLOR]

Originally posted by: Snehasn

<font size="2"> [COLOR= blue] So...Accha lemme tell you something...hame bohut zyaada mazaa aapke A/N par ke aaye...haha...wo naa aapke updates jaise hii lambee hai...and the thing which touched is aapke way of update dedication...wow you're such a sweet heart...accha hamaare bak bak ko yahi break lagaa teh hai... Last mein phir se tapkenge...hehehe...now proceeding towards story... A big big big thank you for creating HAM AAPKE HAIN KOUN?? with MANAN, CAVYA, MUKBHI, DHRULYA touch...I just love this movie like anything... So its very easy to get related to the story... It's like visualizing rather than reading... Thanks for this contribution...

Banner was so nice...gudiyaa[ISHU]did the great job...Prologue was funny and little confusing... Hehehe... Monkey malhotra and chipkali... Combination was superb...but i did got the catch ki they are not Manan... I thought its Mukti...but nikhle toh koi aur...Hehehe...

And Malhotra's and Murthy's introduction was like haayooo rabba aur kinne log hai types... Hahaha...i thought hamaare family hii bohut big hai... Par yahaan toh... Uff...dono families means Manan's Daada jii...bade paapa...bade mamma...chaacha...chaachi...Abhi...Mukku... Manik...nandu...Cabir...Navya...Aliya...Dhruv.. Ufff...inne saare log... Murthy's daadu is shooo cute...awww kinne tantrums hai dawaai lene k liye.. And his daughter in law's was so devoted to the family... And his son's are very obedient.. Awww daadu call his grand daughters and son by nick names...i loved nandu as sugar and dhruv as nonu...then coming to malhotra's same case daughter in laws are devoted to the family... Son's are obedient... And grand children's are very loving creatures...

Hmmm...so mukku k shaadi abhi se karaane mein game khela gaye hai Murthy and Malhotra uncle milke... Wow...even they are best buddies in their college time... Phir toh they knows about each other very clearly... Zyaada parak ne ki zaroorat hii nahi hai...Hehehe... Awww!! Mukku's that expression when she came to know about her RISHTA...wow its just priceless...confused but still blushing on particular word Rishta was the state of every girl... Aww chaachi is so cute... Leg pulling karna koi inn chaachiyon se seekhe...and Mamma's they are like khushi k maare rone laag jaate hai...betiyon ko paraaye karne k liye kitne sapne dekhte hai...jab paraaye hone ka waqt aagaye toh rokhna chaahte hai... Kitne ajeeb hai na mamma aur beti k rishta...

Then coming to Jaipur trip jahaan par younger Malhotra's aur Murthy's ke mulaakaat hone waale hai...wow Navni's bond was so cute...nandu's way of waking navya was funny..Hehehe... And dhruni team was shoo cute...dono bhaai behen milke doosre behen ko chiraana...wow...Here Manik is up si early... Ye toh aatve ajoobe ho gaye... Cabir's tantrums ghade kahinke...Awww!!!Alooo as baby sister of Manbir... I so wanted this to happen...thak gaye teh ham baccha ye wahi ex-gf or crush or some sacrificing drama's dekh ke in dono manik aur aliya k... You have binded them in very pure relationship SIBLINGS... thanks for this uniqueness...

Then first meeting... Wow...matlab full filmy...hahaha...car's bach gaye varna inn logon ke vajese wo bichaare kisi jagaah par takra jaate...hmm...ye kya teh??Navnik toh ek doosre ke khatal karne mein lage huye hai... Dhrulya.. Uff such a kiddo's...ek dusre ke baal pakar liye... And finally Cabini has to jump in this fight to rescue others from killing each other... Hehehe... Wow both soon to be couples ek dusre ko nahi dekhe...it was very interesting... Car mein sannaate was wow... Then cabir and nandu attacking their cousins was so cute...phir that sorry session was so adorable...

Again they both are going to same place... Kishan jii ke mandir...wow Cavya's first meet was nice... Hahaha... That chotu boy was so cute.. Kinne acche se buttering kiye maama se naa keh ne ki...Oh nooo...Cavya phir gir gaye... Control biraa agar larki ko kiss kar dii toh saare haddiyaan thor ke rakh dene hai aapke Navya ne byee God... Haww!! Ye kya cabir ne Navya ko intentionally giraaye...that's too bad... Aur upar se uthne mein help bhi nahi kiye... Shit yaar poor girl got sprain on her ankle...Manan side Here situation is like pehle nazar mein aise jaadu kar diye nandu ne manik pe...ki bichaare shoe lace baand ne ku jagah larki ko taar rahe hai...Haww!!! Nandu manik ko bhikaari banaa daale...Drama queen I'll never forgive you for this... Huhh...Mr. Majnu aapko kis angle se bhikaari lag teh hai??...huhh...larki gaye payaal mile...wow..
Aawww!!!bichaare love sick puppy ban gaye hai
Hahaha...cabilya teased manik to the core...
And here dhruni teased Navya... Hehehe...
It was damn funny...

Oh freak nandu toh rone lage yaar...oh... Paayal was given by daadi...tch...poor girl... Don't worry sugar your paayal is safe with your hero...which will connect you to him...

Here in Mumbai... Mukbhi meeting was too good
There nervousness... Happiness... And confusion was clearly visible... Their talks went very well... Made for each other types... Hmm...thore se boldness from both side... Haha both are clean bowled for each other... Hmm..so Rishta is pakka...

Then that shopping thing was too good... specially that kaaka...and his marwaari wow...
Arre kakaa toh daadu k long lost dost nikhle.. Hahaha... Dhruv was shoo cute...nandu is little embarrassed by dhruv's behavior... Then malhotra siblings also came to same shop... Hahaha... Marwaari ne bolti band kar dii bhai behen ke...hmmm...last mein like finally Manan met...hahaha...nandu in such a cute look... Wearing spex and pagdi... Shoo cutee manik toh poore flat hahah... Haayee ek dusre k baahon mein wow...great postures... Mr. Malhotra hold on varna gharbar ho jaayenge..
Haawww!! Daddu aagaye vaapis kya timing hai huhh.. Chalo jii koi exchange nahi huye bags ke.. Hmmm...awesome update cutie pie... Just loved it... Update faster...
Continue soonish...
Take care stay blessed

PS- Aur bhi lambaaa comment chaayiye toh send aaple flavor ORS for me in next update.. Varna pataa chale ki do aur attacks aagaye... Haayoo rabb jii...finally ho gaye hamaare promise poore...cutie pie now I'm choo mantaring myself aapse acche koun jaante hai hamaare personal life k baare mein so time for those stupid medis...huhh...i just hate it...
Do well in your exams... All the best.. Bbyee... [/COLOR]

hey di.. first of all let me tell u ki its not cutie pie over here.. its me.. hehe.. aapki cutie pie ne sanyaas le lia forums se 27 days k liye.. haha..
so m replying on her behalf as she told me to do.. so aapne to ab tak ki story ka review de dala.. hehe.. summary of story.. thank u so much ffom her side.. hehe..

Hey Buddy

THE PROLOGUE IS JUST AWESOME
i just read it and find it very interesting

i think this will be a comedy funny loving story

rest comment i will RES, i will finish after reading it full

RES

UNRES ON PAGE 120😃😃😃

Rahul

Originally posted by: MyGuitarVina

Hey Buddy

THE PROLOGUE IS JUST AWESOME
i just read it and find it very interesting

i think this will be a comedy funny loving story

rest comment i will RES, i will finish after reading it full

RES



Rahul

okhay...

Originally posted by: krazzy_parthian

okhay...

so hey..finally i read it...and i was literally rofling...

main toh ache se hans bhi ni payi...varna log pagal samajhte whie reading dis...

the intros of both the families.super awesome..

gull joint family with lots of masti and love bw them...

moorthys and malhotra...ka intro...main padh kar hi itni excited thi...

so abhi and mukti ka rishta...lovely...

hahah.sahi kiya...alya ko manik ki behen banakar...i so dont like her.aga voh manik ke piche padi oti toh...

the rishta laane ka tareeka...hats of gal...kya dimaag lagaya papa malhotra and moorthy ne...

abhi and mukti's meet...it was awesome..i loved u showed their meeting..no clumsiness...

family's toh...by god...loved them..

dhrulya.they are so kidoos...

cavya meet...hahaha...it was damn amazing...

finally manan meet...

shopping spree...

and the language...

everything is super amazing...and hell awesome...

ab jaldi se update kardo...

waiting to read more

LOVE

SANJANA

Originally posted by: puccha

Thank u Sanjana.. :)