MaNan FF//The Ex's At War//Link for Thread 2 on pg 150 - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
First if all thanku sooo much for coming back with a new story and thanku for the pm :*
This story looks amazing ..loved the prologue. . Though it's sad that our impulsive manan are separated :( but no worries I know ull get them back together soon .. and I'm very sure ur updates will have cutecute nhok jhok like before .. Manini is sooo cute .. love her doo much . It was sooo sad how she misses her daddy .. eagerly waiting to read manik and his princess Convo and their bonding ...

Again thanku so much for coming back with sequel. .. waiting to read more .. do continue soon :* mmmuuuaaahhh
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Snehasn53



Super super super prologue
Dhii manini is sooo cutee... Awee i loved her talks such a cutie pie
I request you dhii plss give manini talks also in middle...
I just loved the way she introduced herself and her family
I didn't understand one line when manini tells about maniks girlfriend (I think even Daddy doesnt like her may be because she babies him all the time and it is really annoying.)...what's meant by this???

It means his gf calls him baby quite often which is not liked by Manik and Manini
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
Omg omg omg...and do i need to tell u that i just loved it...ha bt ek bat achi nai lagi...dont seperate manan na...ab to ff me bi unki seperteation jheli nai jati...
U are such a good writer...oh forget...good will be an underestimate to say as u are the best one...but plzz...plzz...bahut lambe time tak manan ko seperate mat karna na plzz...write happy happy story...i would love to see an amazing writer of the story to write happy ff...well of course i cant force u ..and ya dnt take in that way that i am not appreciating ur work...if u write the seperation track then also i am going to read it...as i love ur writing very much...waiting eagerly...for the first part ...and yeahhh...i love that manini...wow...she is so cute...and i loved the language u used...do gove us chappy in her pov in future...i would love to read them...and yehh...thanks for the pm

Lots of love
Manan
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
the prologiue in the little girl's pov iss sooo cute I really liked the idea..do continue the story.. will be eagerly waiting to read the first part..:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
the prologue in the little girl's pov iss sooo cute I really liked the idea..do continue the story.. will be eagerly waiting to read the first part..:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
this was amazing ...manini talks are so cute ...but I don't like this separation ...they always fight like childs ..but is OK...but why this aunty came in between ...there seperation is not enough for u ...plzz continue this ff without this aunty ...
thanks for pm 😳
Edited by akansha3 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
Yeee... 🥳
Back with a bang...
I'm like really happy...
Was missing ur other story very very badly...
N look here who made me nt to miss reading her beautiful writing
By giving an another beautiful story...
Thanks a ton...
Now again starts our turn of waiting fr weekends fr ur updates...
I'm sooo happy 😛 ...
Thank uuu 🤗
Coming to prologue
Omg!the lil girl is so cute..
U have written it soo well ..her language us soook cute...
Bt wt happen to manan??? So exited n anxious to knw about their life...
Waiting...waiting ...
Thanks a lot...
Edited by rakshitha9630 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
wow... squeal. ... I am really eager to knoww that... but why r they separated. ..yar.. itsss soo sad to see.. but I m sure u'll make it interesting. ... m sure for that's. ... n seriously. ...ufff manini's p.o.v. something vely vely aweshomee.. I jlust love it..yar . off manini multhy malhotra iss shoo sweet... itsss sooo awesome. .. but makee to vely...vely..more interesting. .. n... m waiting to know more... .keep updating like this. .. update soon. .. waiting for next update eagerly impatiently. .. thanks for this prologue. . thanks for pm too.. thankss for thiss squeql.. makee them one yar.. vaise to.. :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) but itsss interesting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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WOW,KITNA ACHA HAPPY ENDING THA..''IMPULSIVE SOULMATE'' SAB WASTE HOGAYA.. ABHI PHIR UFF.. Manik ne kitna papad bele the nandini ko pane k liye and nandini too.. They use to be mad for each other.. Abhi sab bigad diya.. Arre yaar i was sad when you ended I.S.but absolutely happy with the happy ending of manan... I was damn excited for LIPS DO LIE.. NOW I WANT 'LIPS DO LIE' VERY SORRY IF YOU GET HURT BUT 'Impulsive soulmate' epilogue is my happy ending for manan.. SEQUAL..?? Nah, yeh toh earthquake se v shocking tha.. How can they get separate yaa??? After so many difficulties they were together... I respect your writing but m happie with 'lips do lie' do continue that story soon... Thanq for pm..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
awww ye kya hogya...
manan separation...
so sad
manini is sooo cute...
looking forward to the story...
plzzz continue soon
and unite manan again

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