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sanviM

@sanviM

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Posted: 9 years ago

#91

Ek shadi krne ke liye itne papad bele dono ne

itne efforts dalne ke baad ...now they are separated

They are indeed impulsive😉

U clearly justified the tag given to them even in the previous one and still doing it...

Hatts off to u dear👏

But I can't bear this separation

Saath hi rh lete ... Chahe roz ladte😆

kyunki inki ladaai bdi interesting hoti h

Ye dono bhi na huhh...😡

Khair abhhi to story shuru hui h😉

Waiting for next

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Avneet kaur

@avneetkaur28

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Posted: 9 years ago

#92

Kse yaar. ...??
I mean kse...??
how can uh write soo well..??

vse to I cmnt very less...
but u know this post frcd me...

I hv read implsv sl mts too...
but cmntd less... but today...
yaar this was soo sweet. ...

manini is soo sweet...
n then d equation. ...???
how did this happen. ...??
manan seperation...??
manik's gf...??
n bichari manini...
akhir hua kya...??
soo many questions. ...
but I know d answers will b worth waiting...

N yes...
agn u hv strtd it with d seperation...
I know it is gonna b phaadu...
will b waiting...
n haan this time will surely b cmntng too on every post...
pkka promise...
sorry fr not cmnting bfr (embarrassed)
but this time pkka...

n yaah thnk uh fr d pm...
lvd prologue...
luv uh fr continuing...

bii...
keep writing
Continue soon
Avneet...(Avi)

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alisha_ash

@alisha_ash

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Posted: 9 years ago

#93

it was sooo great n cuteee I can't express wowwss muhhaaa tqq for an impulsive again pls continue it soo will b waiting for thid babiesshhh talkk pls do that its great will b waiting for many more n more mysterious to b unfolded I was missing ur story badly thank you for listening to ur readers wish n making a sequel it great pls continue soon n tq for the pm pls bring chps soon n dnt forget to pm me

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manandeeplove

@manandeeplove

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Posted: 9 years ago

#94

Yayeee...

First let me scream yrrr...

I m sooo sooo sooo happyyy😃

My most fav story is back with a bang😉😛

Thanks a lot for this...

I was really missing my impulsive babies n ur writing like hell...

Coming to prologue...

Manini...awww...

I m in love with her yrrr❤️

She is chooo chooo cutiee pie...

Loved her babyish language a lottt...

No need to ask author for understanding her talks...

I would love to hear story frm her too...

Her silence " R "

Coz she cnt pronounce it...awww

Loved it...

I m shoo small...

I m too young to understand these things...

I m solly...

Omggg...she stole my heart ...

Plz add her talks in that babyish tone only in updates though nandini is narrating it...

And now abt manan...

Ooopsss...ye kya hogaya...

Separation track...again...

Hope manini will b able to reunite them...

Cont sooonnnissshhh...

Cnt wait to read nxt part

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shruthi.kumar

@shruthi.kumar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#95

Yayyyiiieee dance basanti 😆
Fine... i hve to say dis.. i love you... haha .. ni seriously..
i love you for diss ff
bt yaar... how .. how..how,?
how cud manan separate! Ita pyaar ita sb kuch n ab 😭
manini she is chooo cute.. yes yes baby i undrstud wat u r saying .. muah! :*
Bt han jldi jldi btana narrator ji ki kya hua!
manik has a gf -_- dont tell me its soha -.-
Uff... give manik some akal! Khn gya pyar...??
update soon
love you
take care
shruthi

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ssweta

@ssweta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#96

hmm...it sounds good...and i really want to know why manan is not to gather...😊

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stunning555

@stunning555

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Posted: 9 years ago

#97

Soo sweet :)

Phr se manan r not together inka msla kia hai itna pyar b krte hain or larte b...:( ab itna lar lia k they r not together...:(

Manini is adorable...!!

& make them happy family jaldi se :)

Keep writing...!!

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Yashu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#98

This is toh cute of cutest prologue any story can have...

Again they r seperated...why why whyy...???

But at the end they have to be together only na..

MAnini is such a cutie pie..

And the way u wrote each and every detail na it was so amazing...

As if someone wants to film it na...

It can be done so easily and I toh can imagine everything u wrote...

Chooo shweeet u ale authol of this stoly...

I toh want to pull youl cheeks...;);)

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Lily

@lily18

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Posted: 9 years ago

#99

Nice and very very cute..
Eagerly waiting to know what happened between them..
Pls do continue..
Without your story weekends are really boring..
Thanks for the pmpm 😊

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shindesweety

@shindesweety

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Posted: 9 years ago

#100

I couldnt stop myself frm messaging this
so okay manan are separated
i read some commnts some saying there hd divorced is it so
and manik gf..many ppl didnt want..koi toh mere jaisa sochta hai..hehe
n are they like live-in kind of toghthr?
.this irks me too
but wat about the love was it was too weak
wat about the promises they had abt love they took
how he fought to get her back
wat abt the promises they took at church during dhurv marriage
this impulsiveness is beyond love
soon want answers to all ques
and hamesha ki tarah manan ko jaldi lana toghthr soon plzz

double commenting is allowed na..haha
looking forward fr this ff
goodluck
takecare

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