MaNan (***live in***)ss part 1 (12/11) pg3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey!!! Guyzzz...
A story was alarming in my head for long time..thought of penning down..
It's our pretty MaNan's journey..for their reunion (according to present track) to live in relation..
Hope u like it..
I known main bhaut bakwas likh thi Hu...jhelo mujhe
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As parth is back ...longing to see him back..aakhee taras gayi thi..
Prologue
A tall guy , devoid of facial expressions sitting in hospital. Reminiscing his old life. A waiting for doctor to come out with good news.
A elderly person pats his shoulder. As he turns up to see the person with heavy eyelid.
The person: Don't worry, everything will be alright!!
Doctors word echo in his mind: Believe in prayers...
The word "prayer" take him to flashback memory lane. "you'll always remain in my prayers". The word he can utter is "nandini".
Dr arrived with increasing heart rate. Hoping for good news . As she always says have "Hope".
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Nandini sitting on her bed. Playing with her manan bracelet. Walks towards balcony to watch put for his favourite stars .
From the day he left, it was only thing she prayed "Manik" . Looking towards dark night sky with his twinkling stars.
Nandini: Aiyappa, Maine essa kya kiya hai..why u snatch every loved one from me..first amma and appa..and now Manik and cabir... I know aap mujhe par itne hard nahi Ho saktey..plzz return my Manik back. I know he's alive aur he has to come back plzz aiyappa..plzz. Aiyappa..manik aur cabir jaa.bi Ho..plzz unko safe rakhna..plzzz aiyappa.
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Plzz do comment and like..so I can understand that you like it and I can contd..
I know I haven't updated story of my life soon I will..
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AMAR_LOVE thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
nice...but what about ur another story
when will u cont
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Posted: 9 years ago
#3
nice start 😊
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#4
Nice story line..
Waiting for update..

parthadmirer thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
Nice start...👏
waiting how will you proceed the story..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#6
interesting concept
start soon
it is magical
u rock man \\m//
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Posted: 9 years ago
#7
awesome prologue
continue soon will be waiting!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#8
nice prologue
please continue
update jaldi jaldi plz
the concept is intriguing

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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome start...
loved story of my life...i think i'll love this too...
interesting concept...
can't wait to see what happens next...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A bit confusing... but I guess it's going to be quite interesting one... do continue... would love to read... update soon...

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