MaNan (***live in***)ss part 1 (12/11) pg3

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SNEHA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Nice story.. Looking forward to the story

Update soon

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Jyoti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Dear storyline is looking awesome.

I would love to read more.

Continue soon.

Thanks for sharing this idea.

Stay blessed.

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epicangel

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Part 1
Dr comes out of operation theatre.
Mr.malhotra: Dr..how's he ??
Manik is just standing blank..emotionless
Dr: Good news Mr.malhotra everything is fine..operation was successful..mr.cabir jaldi thik Ho jaye Gaye (he pats on manik's shoulder) congratulations my boy..ur hope wins.. BAs one week more then we can discharge him.
Manik: (sighs in relief)
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Cabir's is absolutely fine now
Mr.Malhotra,Manik and cabir are having their dinner
Cabir: Manik 6mnths se jayada Ho Gaya..let's go back to Mumbai..kitne din rahegey yaha...Pune main..
Mr.Malhotra: Cabir..now its time to sum up the things.(they look at Manik who is just playing with the food)
Manik:(in thoughts) how I'll return? Kya kahu Ga ussey? Does she also believe that I am dead? What I'll say kaha tha main? Our beautiful night which nightmare for us? Aur Mukti, Dhruv, alya ko kya boluga...nyonika..(making grip tight on spoon) (she is out from his chain of thought by his dad )
Mr.Malhotra: Manik kaha kho Gaye..speak up..what u think?
Manik: About what?
Mr.Malhotra: Arey I was thinking..if ..i mean after closure of nyonika's track and her games..why don't you and rest of FAB5 stay in Pune . There r great music college over here. Aur wasey bhi what's left in Mumbai now??
Manik: (smiles) dad I don't think we'll return to Pune ..kyuki..any other college doesn't that magic what SPACE have. And about Mumbai ..there's something in Mumbai. Not something..my everything is in Mumbai.
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Nandini is walking around college campus. Searching for maddy as he is appointed as her new assistant.
She hear someone . She peeps in empty room.
She finds an elderly person in tone of warning asking something. She tries to pay no heed to their mess. Firstly her life and her friends life needed to be sort out . But something makes her to listen their convo
Nandini is about to leave she hears
Person: I don't know anything..even if you work for her . I don't care..mujhe Manik and cabir ke case wali file " chahiye.
Peon: Sir main ne bola na...voh file chori hogayi hai ...nyonika ma'am khud dhood rahi hai..unke..voh dost..maltab voh harshad saxena bhi dhoodh rahe hai voh file..
Person: What?? Fine u leave...(peon leaves) agar voh file nyonika ne kho di hai...before she gets it back i have to find it before her..varna Manik aur cabir..ke anee...(his cut in middle)
Nandini: Apko voh file kyu chahiye?
Person:(turns) tumse matlab..just leave and how dare you listen our convo??
Nandini: By the rights if being president of space... As per authority outsider cannot trespass college campus.. It's better if tell me..or i can kick u out..
Person: Excuse me...miss.xyz..whatever can speak??..
Nandini : Nandini..nandini Murthy.
Person: Mr.dhawan(actually he is Mr.Malhotra none other than Manik 's dad)
Nandini: I m sorry !! Uncle mujhe pata nahi tha..
Mr.: It's ok!! I can understand (in thoughts) Manik sach kehta hai..she is fierce as fire at times and candy at times..cabir she proved u wrong...
Flashback
Manik was telling about nandini..
Cabir poking himself in their convo..
Cabir: Uncle jitne sweet hai na..utne dar pok bhi hai..
Manik: No she's not!!
Cabir: Yes..she is..
Manik: No dad!! Voh na..when things comes to protect her loved ones she fierce as fire..and
Cabir: Ya..uncle!! Kyuki vahi ek ladki..who punched THE MANIK MALHOTRA ...(they have laugh)
Manik: I miss u (he murmurs which is clearly heard by Mr.Malhotra ears)
Flashback ends

Mr.: So file laney main mujhe madat kar do gi na...
Nandini: Yes!! But I need assurance for this..ki sach main aap meri help karo gey..
Mr.: Okay done!! Mere details I'll send u..but mujhe file kab tak milegi...
Nandini: Main kal de doogi...(she leaves) (in thoughts) Manik won't let ur justice delay..par voh file..uss din..maddy ke pass hey!! Aiyappa..!!
She sees him walking in corridor..
Nandini: Oye!! Assistant..(he turns)
Maddy:(in thoughts) kyu..bhagwan.. Subah Kiska muh dikha Diya..(she snaps her fingers to bring out of trance)..
Nandini: Oo!! Zara apne..lalala..land se bahar aao..
Maddy: Kya kaam hai..(so called smirk and attitude)
Nandini: Assistant Ho behave..
Maddy:(raising his finger) listen u!!
Nandini:(putting his finger down) look mere pass time nahi ..tumhari bakwass dialogue sune keliye...bas aaj shaam ko main tumhare ghar par aaugi..for work..voh list and all..
Maddy:(evil and mischievous look) mere ghar koi(covering himself with his hands) kya chahti Ho tum..
Nandini: Stop it..apna dimaag kam hi chalo..bas mere ghar Mein disturbance..hoga..get it..
Maddy: Fine..ab toh mera picha chod do..
She leaves
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At night;
Nandini is walking shattered and helpless on road.
Some yanks car horn at her..she about get hit..maddy saves but she is hit by stone on her head.
Nandini lying half conscious in maddy's arms..
He is patting her cheeks..
She blurry sees the driver of car approaching her..a tall figure..
She only able to utter at figure "Manik" She looses her consciousness..
Maddy: Nandini!! Yaar uth !! Look i m sorry!!
The figure standing is none other than Manik..
Manik pov.
Nandini!! What happened to her?? Why was she walking helpless on road? Who the hell in this guy?? Why is he holding her ?? I should have been there?
Maddy: Hey dude plzz.help..main yaha hi rehta Hu..(Manik is numb at his place) dude!!!
Manik: Ha...nandini (he is abt to pick her in his arms)
Maddy: (stops him) I can..tum gaadi nikalo..
He puts her carefully on back seat ..maddy held her head on his chest..which obviously irked Manik..
He drove as fast as he can to maddy's place .
Dr.check her .
Till then manik arrives inside.
Maddy: Doc..any serious injury??
Doc: No...bas halki Si chot hai..she'll be fine ...bas take care..of ur girlfriend..no need to worry..
Manik: ( shocked)(in thoughts) what did I heard it clear...girlfriend did really she moved on..no..but then..(he looks at maddy)
Maddy:(about to burst senses maniks gape on him) ya..i will..
Manik and maddy are standing and looking at her..
Maddy: Jab bolti nahi..itni buri nahi lagti..
Manik: Kuch kaha ?
Maddy: Nahi toh..by the way..thanks bro..
Manik: Anytime dude...
Maddy: Come I'll guide you till door..
They come out..but Manik's car fails to start..
Maddy: Any problem!!
Manik: I don't know!! I think I should call mechanic for help..
Maddy: U can take my bike ..
Manik: Thanks but..i don't to drive a bike..
Maddy: Ohh!! Fine then stay here..for night and it seems it will rain..
Manik: Kk..(thoughts) finally main Nandini ke pass reh sakta Hu..
Flashback
Manik goes and plays with his car..so it won't start...
End
Maddy allots a room for Manik..
Manik is restless ...
He sneeks in Nandini's room..
Slowly caress her hair and plants a kiss on her forehead..
Manik: I m sorry...plzz uth jao.. I want to hear u..just call my Name once... Bhahut bura Hu na main... Don't worry I m back!! Main sab thik kar duga..(kisses on her forehead)
And is about to leave..Nandini holds his hand..
Nandini: Manik!!
Precap: Nandini keeps her head on his chest..and they have a talk