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Glara

@Glara

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Posted: 9 years ago

#701

wow like seriously ur each & every lines meant a lot and i really luv it
finally ddlj scene superb
strange things always done by manik
superb thanks for pm

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Jyoti

@bhagupur

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#702

Thanks for pm. This chapter

Awesome awesome and filled with love.

Manik is truly madly deeply in love with her.

After she left. .in the morning how disheartened he was.

But he aging get the strengths thanks to the very good friends.

He blessed with very loyal friends.

Nandni was in shock of the train incident.

They both sleep on one birth..awesome .

But bhi nandni abi gussa hai. .

He needs to take her back with all his love and trust.

But he is there. ..for her only.

He took her in train ...amazingly saved twice in a one day.

Wow maja aa gya padke. ..very beautifully written.

And thanks for long update. .I loved it.

Thanks for sharing this awesome chapter.

Waiting for next chapter. .

Thanks once again for the pm.

Stay blessed dear.

Love. .

Jyoti.

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hanin12

@hanin12

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#703

thanx 4 the pm dear ...
and the update is so dam owsm...
and waiting 4 ur next dhamakedaar update

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Manan2305

@Manan2305

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#704

Hey can u pls pm me

Actually idk how to review it like im new to this forum pls pm me i really love your story!

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puzzz

@puzzz

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#705

Thank you again for the update dear... 😊 and back to update monster manik he is really bandar but cute walla...nandini and manik finally r together... and song wale scenes were really good...and last but not the DDLJ's famous train scene was cheery on the cake...really U going grt... continue soon... update soon. 😳

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Diksha Anand

@DikshaAnand

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#706

Again the lines were amazing...
And the songs selection were superb...i love it when Nandini is mad at manik
Their cute wali fights
Manik - abhi tune btaya nhi yeh tere father in law ki train h 😆
Cabir was acting so innocent jaise he was toh not at all involved in it.
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And the last scene full on filmy DDLJ raj- Simran wala scene yaad aa gya

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sameeksha

@mini_manan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#707

Firstly kaan pakadke bada wala sorry yaar late comment ke liya par kya karo abhi hi mene chapter padha..
I was hell hell busy..in short i was diening each other..
U know firstly these bloody college and their practicals..teachers r on my neck as nxt week i have to submit my file and i havent yet completed..
And now above all my granny she is admitted in hospital and today only she got discharge and becoz of that my whole day is a big hectic..
Know i got a little time so thought to refresh my mood and whatz the better thing then reading ur ff..
Ur ff always chill my mood..
Good 19 chapter was so amazing..
Those smilies r really cute..
Every gesture that manik anve done was really cute..
In last i was also shock wid the sudden accident..
Undershock waz the correct word i guess..
Bechara manik kaise feel ho raha hoga..seeing all this..
But at last he was the one who have saved her..
Excited for nxt part..do pm me whenever u got time.
Loved it.
Cont soon.
LOVE,
MINI