#3 MANAN SS ~ YOU BECOME MY STORY Chap21-140 New thread Hyper link-157 - Page 70

Wow..awesome..amazing..superp yaar

Plz pm again it got deleted srry

wowww... wowww... wowww... finallly u update. ... ...itsss just amazing. .. I just love ...it... itsss soo amazing. . itsss awesome. .. I just likeee it.. shooo shooo awesome. .. it was soo niceee... manik is back with a bang.. just luv it.. just luv manan part.. manan moments was awesome. ... lovable. ... n manik n his songss.. such a yar... sooo awesomeee. ... .. just love it. ... I just soo awesome. .yar... n last me ddlj vaala moment. . soo fantastic. ... just fab... ... keep updating like this update soon. . waiting for next update eagerly impatiently. .. thanks for this beautiful update . Thanks for pm too. .. :-) ;-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) ;-) :-) ;-) :-) :-) :-):-) ;-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) n plsss update ur other storiess... I really misss them.. plsss... update others alsoo.. n I actually missing them very much... plsss update them alsooo

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE PM AND THE UPDATE AS WELL ... LOVED THE UPDATE... DDLG SCENE WAS IN THE LAST... LOVED IT... LOVE YOU...

Uff
wat a update
mixture of emotions
happy they are toghthr
but bolte kyu nhi
the hug..wow
ye mukti n navya na shoo them away..hehe
last scene ddlj wali feeling
best part she slept over him
next part mei dono ka convo taki sab clear

quotes abt love n description abt trust.
Beautiful
fr d first time i felt d manan hug
so beautiful it feels to be in arms
n song samne wali khidki
nandu accept kyu nhi kar rhi hope nxt part mei pata chl jyega
thnks fr d update n pm too
takecare

hmm frm where to start!??
ok i will start by appreciating ur thoughts & ur hard work..!!!
this part was one of my bestest part.!!! nt only because there were manan cute moments bt also because of all the beautiful thoughts u hve poured as manik's pov..!! 😃
"TRUST" jst a single word of five letters bt u hve explained it so beautifully nd made me feel its importance..!! i m really touched by ur update!!! 😳
nd yes i m really loving manik's manofy sessions bt still yr nandu ab to maaf kardo..bechara manik kitna try kar raha hain..ab to usne galti bhi accept karli, apologise bhi karliya, confess bhi karliya!!
now i really want nandus positive response... 😆
update soon nd thanx fr the pm..
monday tak how to wait..!!

As I said before that I don't receive any PMs. There's some problem in my account. And neither can I buddy people. I'm sorry. Really.
Please PM the chapter?

Superb yaar..Manik is back...👏and pls...PM me the next chapter...pls...I'm waiting...😭