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Adya05 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hayye...that was so cute..!!!
And the last part was so filmy..!!!
And that be-akal , bewakoof , bandar..!!hahaha bechara manik..!!!
Par kya kare pyaar kara hai toh jhelna toh parega..!!!
I am still laughing.. Hayee those lines and then tera rasta chodo na..hehe..!!
Annoyed nandu is always a treat... Aur manik he was just too cute..!!!
Mujhe na iss SS ka addiction ho jayega agar aap itne cute cute updates do ge..!!!
Vaise bhi Parth ka pehle se hi hai..
😳😳
Heheheh... And last part mein jo aapne likha tha in english that was a song right.. So kaunsa sa tha please metion in the next part... Aur please PM me..!!!
I'll be greatful..!!
Continue soon..!!

LOADS OF LOVE

ADYA..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Plz i also need the chapter as pm !!!!! Plz plz do pm me !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank you so much for the PM. Oh! I so loved it! The DDLG wala ending!
I just hope that manik doesn't leave again and Nandini realises it soon that she loves him!
Lovely this was!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for d pm...
Finally dry met...aww how lovely dry are...
Cuti pies...loved ur update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
super plan
that biryani simile and chocolate so cute
keep writing
loved it
👍🏼👏😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey...plzz pm me ..i promise i ll definately comment from now on
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Posted: 9 years ago
thanks 4 the pm kavya.awesome update!!! Cud hug between nanan yaar.manan sleeping on same berth was adorable.all thd quotes were damn awesome.manik's plan was nice.aryamann's encouragement to manik to get back his love was too good.i really liked that part.nandu's bashing manik with words in her mind was a hilarious one!!! Once again i tell u the words u used 4 expressing manik's pov was a mhnd blowing one!!! U nailed it in my heart dear.it was so nice to read about manik's untiring efforts to melt his lady's love was superb.last train part it was like DDLJ.i liked it kavya.thank u so much 4 the pm.happy weekend!!!keep writing kavya!!!
mishru thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
u r great yr...it was awsum..I love our manan.. awww so cute..plz end your story soon...it's amazing...great. work...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bluelake99


<p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2">Wwooohhh !!!
an update most wd manik's pov ...
</font></p><p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2">nd some much
needed flashbacks ...
</font></p><p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2">so here u go
...
</font></p>
<p align="center"></p>
<p align="center">"It seemed like we were back from where we left..and that's
how it should be na..."<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2"> ... yes it should be lyk ds only ... everything strts 4rm
where we left it ... 2 complete it ... nd here s d #strangelovestory ... hv 2 complete na !!!!
</font></p>
<p align="center"></p>
<p align="center">"I saw her eyes..they moist with hiding a emotion..a emotion
called fear..but it seemed like a fear of losing something..."<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2"> ... nd d thng s u nd u
only ... she feared f loosing u again more dan loosing her lyf ...
</font></p><div align="center"></div><p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2">dn ...</font></p><div align="center"></div><p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2">he s soo
responsible .. gvng a damn 2 d world he only cared 4 her ... nd she s fully
depending on him ... ds s one f d gesture f LOVE ...
</font></p><div align="center"></div><p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2"></font></p>
<p align="center">"And for the first she was behaving strange..." <font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2">... nw if u behave
#strange in ur #strange #lovestory ur partner have 2 give u same takkar nah
!!!! otherwise how d #strangestory becoe
complete ????
</font></p><div align="center"></div><p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2">nd 4 her she
s in fear or trauma of accepting u .. of
loosing u again .. of ur existence in her #trainjourney ...
she jst wnts 2 be wd u .. 2 feel u around her .. 2 make u her #story ..
2 become ur #story ... 2 start 4rm where it left na !!!!!
</font></p>
<p align="center"></p>
<p align="center">"The beginning of love is to let those we love be perfectly
themselves,

and not to twist them to fit our own image. Otherwise we love only the

reflection of ourselves we find in them..." <font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2">... uff babu !!! ur another quote ... all
of ur quotes depict new definition f LOVE ... loving someone s sumthng changing u wdout
changing u na !!!!!
</font></p>
<p align="center"></p>
<p align="center">"I wrapped my left arm around her...and thought of morning
when I had naked my eyes to sunlight..but more than that sunlight..it was
her..who shined my morning..her eyes sparkled more than sun for me..
/..."<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2"> nd here r his
feelings ... whn she left him it hurt him ... bt he understood her inner
turmoil ...
</font></p>
<p align="center">"Have you ever seen a caterpillar? </p>
<p align="center">It so small..living it life protecting itself from cruel
world..and than nature's love binds with a cocoon...to make it a beautiful
butterfly...



But what if the cocoon gets broken?

Before seeing it's dream turning to a reality...

And what if it's broken by that very nature...??



Than it will never trust nature..the nature may have its own reasons...



But once a broken remains broken..</p>
<p align="center">And I know I had done the same with her..." </p>
<p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2">wht a beautiful
example it s !!!!! jst perfectly fitted in their situation ...
</font></p><div align="center"></div><p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2">a girl who
lives her lyf jst lyk a caterpillar ... protecting her feelings ... living
lyf in a simple way ...
</font></p><div align="center"></div><p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2">bt whn d guy
came carrying a cool wind of love(thande
hawa ka jhoka) jst lyk nature ... nd wrapped d girl in love 2 let her fly ... 2 make her lyf as
beautiful as butterfly ...
</font></p><div align="center"></div><p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2">bt LOVE
can LIFE .. bt nt d REALITY na !!!! so d boy has 2 leave ... unwrap her ...
nd d girl has 2 face d cruel world all alone
wd a deep scratch f break ... whch remain forever ...
</font></p><div align="center"></div><p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2">cant erase
... bt can heal wd d same breeze ... as he s tryng d same ...
</font></p>
<p align="center"></p>
<p align="center">"But still I Trust..and you should always Trust...



Trust your dreams..Trust your destiny...Trust your soul.. Trust your heart..
Trust your belive... Trust your story.



Yes you should trust your dreams..because they will take you one step closer to
Reality you desire...Trust your Destiny that it won't ever cheat you..Trust
your soul because that what Give you that Peace you longed for..Trust your
heart..because that what make you alive..Trust your believe..because you should
belive in believing..and than Trust Your Story...Because it is your story..


And I trusted in OUR STORY..." <font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2">... ur another quotation ... thnks 4 using these
words ... as it is helped me actually 2 trust myself more ... 2 be
confident ... nd as usual fitted in ur story "perfectly by his words ...
in his thoughts ... of his feelings ..."
</font></p><div align="center"></div><p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2"></font></p>
<p align="center"></p>
<p align="center">"Cabir-Abhi to came to us!!" <font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2">... yaaahhh !!!!! see i knew it ... i told u these
cabir nd abhi knew it ... they helped him only ...
</font></p><div align="center"></div><p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2"></font></p>
<p align="center">"His words actually gave me a boost..</p>
<p align="center">...

Me-Okay..we will do it her way..the strange way!!</p>
<p align="center">...</p>
<p align="center">Than once they had boarded the train..I could easily see how
sad she was...but stubborn head won't agree only...

...</p>
<p align="center">I soo wanted to go to her and take her in my arms..but than
this was necessary for her more than realisation but for acceptance of love!!" </p>
<p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2">... d
one who stays strong in a relationship .. sometyms dy also loose hope nd breaks
down ... bt n these #strange story he has his supportive friends who become
his back support ... nd d way have 2 be #strange na !!!!!!!!! uff !!!!!!!
yeh larka !!!!!!!!!
</font></p><div align="center"></div><p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2">he
understands her feelings ... nd again wants 2 wrap her with love ...
</font></p><div align="center"></div><p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2">2 make her
fly .. d only way go through by making her cry !!!!!!!! 2 let out
all d past .. accept d present feelings again atlast !!!!!!! though she initially may be protests .. bt at
d end he take her in his shoulder 2 make her rest !!!!!!!
</font></p><div align="center"></div><p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2"></font></p>
<p align="center">"She is My Love My Life..

Because Love is Life...



When you love someone na..that becomes your life...

You life for them..

You toil for thier slightest smile..

You cry for thier pain...

The happiness of loving a person just can't be explained...

It's felt...

It doesn't teach you just one emotion of love..but everything...

And than it makes your life a fairytale...


Life is just one-chance..one-chance..to be you..to see you..to love someone..to
breath..it's just one-chance..and you just can't let it go!!


So I was here to make my love my life...

Make her mine..as I was hers...

Make her waves mine..and my star's hers...

Make her shine mine..and my smile hers..

Make her breath mine..and my beats hers...

Make her My Story..because She is My story.."</p>
<p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2">cant say
anything ... as u said ds feelings only can feel ... make someone's
lyf own s called LOVE ... nd it only can feel ... cant shared ...
</font></p><div align="center"></div><p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2">here he accepts
her lyf as his ... wearing her shoes in his feet, dats why he understand her
feelings ... dats why he choose his #strange
way 2 make her understand ...
</font></p><div align="center"></div><p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2">"MEHERBANNI
NAHI TUMHARA PYAR MANGA HAI / TUMHEIN
MANZOOR HAI TABHE TO YAAR MANGA HAI" !!!!!!! ... isn't it !!!!!
</font></p><div align="center"></div><p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2"></font></p>
<p align="center">"She looked at me than she started hitting me..first on my
stomach than on my chest...!!" </p>
<p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2">...
xpcted ... she s tough nut 2 crack ... u have long way 2 go ...
</font></p><div align="center"></div><p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2"></font></p>
<p align="center">"Me-Because may be your life is not mine..but my life is
yours!!" </p>
<p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2">... awww!!!!!!!!!
Sumtyms d strong ones also become touchy (obhiman) !!!!!!!
</font></p><div align="center"></div><p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2">... he
also needed sum TLC f LOVE ...
</font></p><div align="center"></div><p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2">nd sumwhere
she also accepts his lyf as her as now she
lived her lyf in his way specially those six months ... jst need 2
recognise it ...
</font></p><div align="center"></div><p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2">nd he s there
2 support her ... help her in recognising her feelings ... 2 make her
his story ... dats why he played d song na !!!!!!
</font></p><div align="center"></div><p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2"></font></p>
<p align="center">"Now how tell her more than blushing looks or shy ones and
even glares I love her annoyed pouts the most!!



She looks like a candy when she does that!!"<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2">
... loving
sum1 accepting d whole ... loving their weirdest nature also ...
all seems 2 be sweet nd cute ...
</font></p><div align="center"></div><p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2"></font></p><div align="center"></div><p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2">Dn ...</font></p><div align="center"></div><p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2">d end of hide
& seek game ... as it s already in d way of making her his story ... so he have 2 face it ... d
bodyguards of hers ... d boys counted in his team now ... now only 2
lady don remains ... once they r down ... there s no thorn remain ...
isn't it !!!!! as she s already melting
... "GAIRON KE DAR SE, TERE SHEHER SE HAI KASAM RISHTA TODUN NA" !!!!!!! isn't it ?????
</font></p>
<p align="center"></p>
<p align="center">"Chahat hai meri..kusuur nhi hai...dil jasbatti hai majboor
nhi hai..

Ishq ka hai naam badda..meine hai kiya kaam badda kar ke magar aadha choddu
na..." </p>
<p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2">... lyk
seriously kavyu !!! how i mean how u find d perfectly #strange quotes 4 their
#story ... ds song s 1 of my favourite song ... 2day i heard it again
... nd feel it 4 #their story ... hhmmm !!!!!!!! so justified ...
</font></p>
<p align="center"></p>
<p align="center">"I came to washbasin and..bustrted out ..How can he do
this...mtlb always he has to be soo strange soo crazy here I was missing being
with him..and he was playing around huh..and why has to sing all this stupid
songs...not stupid strange..he is strange uske songs bhi strange..Nandini
Murthy one thing is clear soon you gonna loose your sanity!! Huh I hate
him..bhudhu..bhandar..bewaakoof..be-akal..huh huh!!"</p>
<p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2">... aur
s se stupid .. i se idiot vi hota hai ... jitna ho sake avi gaali de do
... because seriously u r going 2 loose ur sanity nd become LADY EMRAAN
HASMI ...
</font></p><div align="center"></div><p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2">Or may be a
MARY KOM ... i wanted d second one ... she should punch him for once
as he tease her a lot ... bt at d end u have 2 accept ur feelings dear ... as he s never
going 2 leave u ...
</font></p><div align="center"></div><p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2">[[SAR YE
BHALE PHOOT GAYAA, JISM MERAA TOOT GAYAA / KHUDD SE KIYAA VAADA TODOON NA]]
... so jitnaa gali dena hai dedo, jitna maarna hai maar lo ... bt he
s always beside u 4rm now ...
</font></p>
<p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2">Nd one thing
... please add nandu's pov 4 2days whole update ... as u give manik's
pov f morning incident in flashback lyk dat ...
</font></p><div align="center"></div><p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2"></font></p><div align="center"></div><p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2">Dn ..</font></p><div align="center"></div><p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2">Cuming 2 d
end ... yaar ajkaal tu bahaut filmy ho gaya hai ... pahele woh train se
girne wala incident nd now train chutne wala incident ... wht an idea !!!!!
lol !!!!
</font></p><div align="center"></div><p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2">Bt i jst
enjoyed it ... their chote chote moments bring dm 2gther ...
REALITY mst be HARSH bt DESTINY cant be dat HARSH on them ... lets see !!!!! wht happned next
...
</font></p><div align="center"></div><p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2"></font></p><div align="center"></div><p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2">...
ATLAST !!!!!! i m done now ... thnk
god i m back wd my pc ... a66a one more thing ... do u want my due
comments in dis lambewale way ?????
</font></p><div align="center"></div><p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2"></font></p><div align="center"></div><p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2">Till dn
... bye ...
</font></p><div align="center"></div><p align="center"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="2">Wd lots f luv
... keep smiling ... 😊</font>
</p>





Awwwiieee like seriously this is the bestest mtlb bestest comment...Tysm Really it means alot when someone sees what you wish to show...
Awww mera babu you decoded it soo well..
specially the whole Song..hehe and don't worry nandu bhi bolegi na..Agar yeh hai nhi toh fir janne pyaar kya hai..Meri jeet hai tu kisse parvah haar kya hai...I love love this Song!!
And that caterpillar part na it just popped up like instantly hehe...
So I can't describe how happy I'm feeling right read it like for 10 times already hehe..
I'll surely give NANDINI P.O.V I thought of only Mabik P.O.V for this Chapter but than I love writing nandini seld talks hehe soo..
Now I love you soo much you know made it all equal with last update ke comments so no need..i'm full with this only :) ^*^
I love you!!^*^ ^*^❤️❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ab to lagta ha mujha bahut achi neend aane waale he..at a time 2 2update..ab to seedhe manan land me hi jakar land karongi..
Thanku dear for an instant pm..even me after being late..maybe dissapointing u also..
Lobe u alot for this kavuu..
Ahh..update was damm amazing..
Manik's pov was beautiful..
So yeh tha plan..stranger he strange hi plan banayga na..hehe..
I so love when nandu got gussa bahut saar..she look cute..
Last part se to mujha DDLJ ki yaad aa gye..haye ye dono shahrukh or kajol se kam ni he..
Vaise real serial me to manik actually chachi ka shahrukh he..hehee
Loved it..
Cont soon.
Uumahh..love u..tc..gnt

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