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Posted: 9 years ago
Sry for late commenting
As my net was not working
Continue soon
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Lots of love and happiness
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Posted: 9 years ago
thanks for updating the update was amazing
manik's pov is very nice 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing update...
manik manaofy session was amazing...
muku navya werent involved...
tigress nandini mode on...
lets see...aftr this ddlj...wat happens?
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow awesome last mein tume toh manik ko srk bana diya I loved it and thank you for the pm buddy...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hola hola di hey i m here di miss late is early this time...hehehe i myself gave me name MISS LATE...
Kl sunday toh aaj freee wala bht sara time mil gaya toh comment bhi jldi hi krri hu...its too sweet...chalo kam se kam manik baba ka plan toh pta chal gaya but cabir n abhi bhi sath honge not excepted...wese cute too tha...n nandu n uske nakhre jo manik k pov me hote h unke toh kya kehne..mai yoh fida hi ho gayi fannahh hogayi...hehehe bodygaurds kese manne wale h waiting to know n ye nandu kaha chali gayi thi oagali but our heri ne bilkul filmy way me usse train me drag kr hi liya...awww...aage dekhte h hota h kyaa...thnkx for pm di...yhnkxx alot plz pm me again..
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Posted: 9 years ago
She is my story...
aah! This sounds only so cool, cute & interesting!!! (if a guy is confessing this to someone, then that girl would indeed be his life, and would be too luckyyy too! but here both of them are lucky, coz both of them r each others story...🥱)
Well, the chapter was way more cooler, cuter and interesting then it sounded!!
And now i don't think, i need to mention that i loved this part, coz i'm deeply in love with this story... and even by repeating it again and again, i won't be able to express my love for "YOU BECOME MY STORY"😊
i was like smiling throughout the chapter...
i loved like every bit of it! OMG!! manik's POV was FLAWLESS😳
and of course his plan too😃
cabir & abhi were supporting him from the begining only...😲 Nice i love there bond!!
ok, so now let me start from the beginning... there r many things to tell...
they were back from where they left... yes that's how it should be😉
whatever may be going around nandini, she can never stop her cute antic when she is with manik( rubbing her nose on my chest..stopping her sniff, she rubbed her nose again on my chest..., She got up..still nuzzling my chest..., she started hitting me, she pushed me out!!, muttering her self-talks!! These were like the most adorable scenes, loved them!!!)
Y will even manik Malhotra care abt what ppl think, he those just cares abt what nandini.. his nandini.. his life nah his story thinks😛 he won't even care if our countries PM stares at them like this... infact he'll give a deadly gare to him also for disturbing them😆
Nandini for still scared... he needs so badly needs to gain her trust, but i feel that small little scene when manik saved her from missing the train.. would be a big help from taking out of this trauma!
The way she didn't let manik leave her... awww...
and the way she asked really by raising eyebrows, she to cute... well manik too⭐️
the way they slept, on each other😳
and for the first time Mr. Stranger ki like was behaving strange... ab strange toh behaving karegi hi na.. the whole day Mr, STRANGER made her feel strange, like everywhere.. so now pay back time😆
but on a serious note she was behaving STRANGE par morning mein miss murthy ke punches kha kar puri ki puri strangeness hawa mein ud gayi! LOL😆 but the thing is she needed him.. even she herself can't deny this... so ...
and ofcourse that quote on love<3
and trust me it was so good to read manik's pov, the way he called her mad girl, crazy girl etc.. we never knew how he thought... THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS😊
and he understood that she left her not becoz she hadn't forgiven him but becoz she was confused! that is the best part abt manan they understand each other's feelings even before the other one expresses it... sometimes even before that person understands his own feeling...
when i read have u seen a caterpillar.. and my first reaction was what!😲
but then i read the whole thing... and kavya very beautifully explained👏👏
and that trust ur dreams... wala part😃 it was... i really don't know how to express.. all i can say.. so true👏 fab work!
aryaman is a true savior/cupid.. actually agar voh nahi hota toh sach mein in dono ka kya hota😆
he indeed make a full proof plan to get his nandini back😛
She is My Love My Life..
Because Love is Life...

When you love someone na..that becomes your life...
You life for them..
You toil for thier slightest smile..
You cry for thier pain...
The happiness of loving a person just can't be explained...
It's felt...
It doesn't teach you just one emotion of love..but everything...
And than it makes your life a fairytale...


Life is just one-chance..one-chance..to be you..to see you..to love someone..to breath..it's just one-chance..and you just can't let it go!!

I LOVE U FOR THIS! *speechless* again...
i'm sure he will definitely be successful in making her, his story...
i'm sure she would have hitted him badly,... poor manik😆
THE BEST PART: HIS REASON FOR SAVING HER😳
he loves annoying her... and i love him more when he annoys her😃
his craziness and his songs.. haha they r rofl!! i just can't stop laughing by imagining nandini's reaction😆😆
she looks like a candy floos with annoyed pout(kavya u r super duper amazing😆😛)
haha, abhi yeh train tere father in law ki hai kya.. manik kabhi nahi sudhrega😃
and nandini's ke lady don body guards ne manik ko baksh diya, haha thank god!
i love when nandu calles manik bewakoof... bhandar LOL
yayyy manik didn't let nandini miss the train!!!
HE TRUSTED IN THEIR STORY...
this trust will only get them together...😊


and yayy kavya didn't end at a cliff hanger, thank god u didn't!!!!
P.S i never used so many emoji's in one post😲 LOOK KAVYA WHAT DID U MAKE ME DO😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey i always give u review if any i forgotted for last chapter i am sorry for that nxt time i wont forget that to so can plz plz pm chapter 20 i will be waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanx fr pm dear...
Nice update but plz nw bring some romance between manan plz plz plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Hope nandini forgives him soon
Thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
That was awesome update
manik beta bot kuch krna pdega abhi nandu ko mnane ke liye
finally we knew manik's thoughts while nandu walk over him
so abhi jab bande ne tham hi liya he wapas manan ka to poora to karega hi dekhte he kese krta he
thanx for pm
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