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hiddenblossom

@hiddenblossom

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Posted: 10 years ago

#431

d heart shape smiley..

D almond choclate half eaten up in a go..

D fyt to lay dwn in nandini's lap scene..

Nd finally ..

Manik's re entry..

Alsoo d song..

Actuallyy ... I luved. D whole update.. Nyc one... :)

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mananneetu

@mananneetu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#432

this time i literally couldnt wait fr ur update..i was checking my pm again nd again fr ur update..bt because of my restlessness i searched fr this update nd u had already updated ..!! nd i m really happy i didnt had to wait long... 😃
i was so sure that manik was there nd with each passing second i was being more confident that he was there!!!
bt what surprised me was that he had convinced everyone ..cabir abhi nd aryamann was involved in his plan bt i m not sure about navya nd mukti..!!!! 😲
manik is so sweet...first chhocolates nd then that song then that smilei...nd most funny that halluciation part..he was really trying to make nandu realize her feelings...
nd the last part once again a cliff hanger.. 😉
that line:
"my story started with her nd end with her cause she is my story "
beautiful line..
cant wait fr nxt part..update soon!!

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NISCHITHA.NISHU

@NISCHITHA.NISHU

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Posted: 10 years ago

#433

Thank u so.much for dd PM pretty. It was long update. Wats manik nexxt move n wen nandini will confess, waitinggg for tat dear. N thanx for d update.

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Shubhijaiswal

@Shubhijaiswal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#434

Hey kavya di...sorry for superse bhi uparwala late...woh net issues the...just read both 18 19 now...ur discribtion of their feeling na yarrr itssoo aawesome...but 18 was of no manan but 19 was literally a surprise for us...thnkx...for pm love ur stoey..plz cont soon...waiting for the manik plan...

Sorry again but i will be late again in furure bcozmy cell is too not working welll...

Shubhi...

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AAVANI

@vani86

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#435

kavya

its beautiful dear
train journey...with manan...wow...loved it completely...
i think cabir and abhi knows manik's plan...loved the way covered up that chocolate mystery...but our nandu is also smart...strange feelings of her stranger...the smiley in briyani...was a sweet idea...i really love these small gestures of expressing love a lot...
as usual u penned brilliantly...
continue asap
take care
stay blessed

nandu's p.o.v and manik's p.o.v by the end was my most favorite parts...

coming to my favorite lines...

I was all lost...lost in different emotions..emotions of pain..grief..guilt..Love??
Was I missing him??
Was I missing being with him??

The answer was Yes..I was...I am..and I'll always miss being with him...

Being with him..Being with him was everything!!
Being with him was Tender...
Being with him was Passion...
Being with him was Peace...
Being with him was Impulsive...
Being with him was Affection...
Being with him was Attraction...
Being with him was being me...
Being with him was being him...

But than being without him was pain...

There was a Smilliii made on my Biryani..the Strange thing was in place of a circle it was a little heart...

And than looking at My box..though I didn't wanted to eat..but than I felt like seeing that cute little heart Smilliii..

I couldn't believe this one now...Saying I was shocked would be an understatement...

I thought not for once he had came out..or talked to anyone of us..usually that's not the senerio In Indian Trains!!

Nandini Murthy every stranger is strange!!

kya zamana hai nandini having two handsome guys this girls are fighting for your lap!!

At first I stood there..and slightly pushed the door..I stood there inhaling the fresh air..I think we were crossing some kind of open green area..and suddenly I heard a loud horn!!

Within a blink a train came in front me..just running parallel to us..I was too shocked to react..i lost my balance as there was water down...I was about to fall.. but than I was pulled by

someone in..not in but to Him...Someone encircled his arms around me tightly!!

I closed my literally squashed them...I could still hear that train running parallel to us...

Seeing her in danger had taken her troll on me now...nothing matterd more than her right now No Plan No mission but only her My Love My life!!

I moved inside..she had held me tightly...Yes she was scared...I kissed her hairs and tightening my hug held her more close..

As I was more scared than her...

It seemed we were back from where we had left in morning...

True they say no matter where you go..all that matters is where you come...

And my story was meant to start with her and end on her..because She had became my story...

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saya_2403

@saya_2403

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Posted: 10 years ago

#436

Waah wahh such a long update impressing haan!! Hehe..amazing update yaar!!! Luvd it!!!

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Angel

@asangel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#437

Amzng post... nandu is cnfusd ;)
mnd blwng

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spreaddsmiles

@spreaddsmiles

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Posted: 10 years ago

#438

Awesome update..

Entire update was really interesting

i loved it

This update had everything nd full of emotions..

I didnt wanted it to end.. hehe

waiting eagerly fr next

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sininowlakha

@sininowlakha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#439

Hey read the update it is awesome...all the scene from chocolate to lunch to washroom and lastly the gate...god I love your writing. ...do update fast