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jashanpreet

@yash7717

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Posted: 10 years ago

#401

Oo finally Manik out...that ws awesome update...
I loved it..
Wanna c them united

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Manal

@manu_stylish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#402

Awsme update..

Loved it..

Cont soon

...n pm me

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Tiara115

@Tiara115

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Posted: 10 years ago

#403

beautiful yr 😊 how sweet ...someone can be 😳 that smilee and chocolate scene was the sweetest😳😳 how can anything happen to nandu when manik is there 😉 but ab dekhna yeh hai kI how will nandini react ...

do update soon

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millie

@millie17

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Posted: 10 years ago

#404

Awsm updt..
I knew it dat manik ws on d opp seat..
N d choclt n smiley were his pln...he is so adorabl yar...
N I think d whol gang is in d pln n hlpng manik to win nandu bck...
Plz nandu don't b ngry on manik again...
Hope dat aftr dis they r unitd n remain togethr frevr..

Hey hv a rpckng tim wth ur niece...
Continue soon dr..

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pnlove

@pnlove

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Posted: 10 years ago

#405

the update was nice

but the best part was the MANIK's POV

i really wanna hear the story in his POV

although it was a cute update with MANAN in it

i think that the whole gang knows about MANIK except NANDINI

i really hope that MANIK shifts to mumbai and they stay together always and i know you will also not let our hopes fall

so update soon

and dont forget to pm me

because i usually don't comment because i literally have very less time to read stories nowadays i just come for a short time and read all in one go so didn't comment all this while

sorry for not commenting but i really cant help it

today i got time so commented

keep up the good and work stay blessed

Edited by pnlove - 10 years ago

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Pari

@kyy_manan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#406

So effing nice update

The way he pulled her so save her was awesum

Update soon !!

Waiting eagerly ;)

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Ambyrocks

@Ambyrocks

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Posted: 10 years ago

#407

lovely update...😛.nd thank u for updating soon

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juhi singh

@juhiloveparth

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#408

oh manik and uske plans he so love to annoy her Jo v plan h bhut MST h aur hoga hi akhir manik malhotra ka h ...but love him seriously and our nandu she really loves him a lot yr he means life to her waiting for their talk ahead and also nandu reaxn when she got to know about manik being in the train love u keep updating and haan no need to pm me I will comment if u not pm then also

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mampi1903

@mampi1903

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Posted: 10 years ago

#409

Hey d update was good. Almond Chocolate & smiley in Biriyani box. Manik is smart & also know how to woo a girl's heart. Quite impressive. 👏 Dis chapter is really full of hide & seek. Hmmm. Cabir-Abhi also involved. Dats nyc. Last scene MANAN HUG was awesome. ❤️ But what ll b Mukti-Navya's reaction. Waiting desperately for d next update.