#3 MANAN SS ~ YOU BECOME MY STORY Chap21-140 New thread Hyper link-157 - Page 40

No no no...
Don't u even dare to think that kavyuuu...
To push him..not even in ur dreams...
And I know u won't do that for sure...
Update was super duper awesome..
and their was a glimpse of manik's pov too..
I really loved his pov...
U wrote it really well..
Keep it up bacha...
And Again I got my chocolate..
And u know what..Meko sachi me bhi 4 almond chocolate I got...yipppiiieee...
So happiiieee...
Send me ur niece ka foto na plzzz...
I love chotu kids...:D:D

She realised her feelings still not accepting them..
She knows he is her everything..still she is going away from him..
I know she is hurt..her trust has been broken...
But now toh he is back na..
And he has told her everything...plz nandu accept ur feelings na..
Don't get insecured na...

He was their all time...I knew it from the start that he must be there only watching her all the time..
And that biryani thing was super cute...aweee...
He is such a cutttiiieee pieee...
He very well knows how to impress a girl..hehe...

I was literally laughing when that man was saying names to give the boxes..
Who does that..but then I got why...coz of that smilieee...
And cabir..like really..present sir...hehehe..

And then she saw him in mirror..
He was standing there behind her..
Shocking her to her life..
She would have literally fainted if he would have been standing there for some more time..hai na??? hehe..

But he went away when she turned...why..???
He was on some mission..
Mission to make her accept those feelings...
Oh yes what else it can be...

I think cabir and abhi are involved in manik's plan..
Hai na?????

Tabhi toh the said about that chocolate na...

LAst scene was toh superb..
I was scared when I read that..as I was imagining that scene specially..

Thank god manik was there at right time..
Now toh waiting for the next part eagerly...

and my favorite dialouge..

Cabir-kya zamana hai nandini having two handsome guys this girls are fighting for your lap!!🤣


Keep writing bacha...
Stay blessed...
Take care..:):)
Love u bht saara...:*:*

Hayyee
wat an update
truly amazing
beautiful beautiful beautiful
lovd it
u written so well
sooo whts the plan
and ha manik train mei hi hai
ye banda itna tang kyu karta hai nandini ko
umm looking forward fr next
n that line cracked me up
manik ko hi dhaka na maar de...rofl
boys must be knwng abt his plan?

Okay a good one...it ws a confusing one fr nandu ..heheeh😉😉

awesome update...

Wow yr superb update...that chocolate, smily...soo cute...nd hug loved it...so abhi n cabir knew about manik's plan...interesting...update soon:-)

its a beautiful update...

Mindblowing update

It was super wali updatee...
So ol gang pared up...
Really xcited to read nxt part. ..

👏👏Beautiful update...The way you described how much she was craving for him, his love...i loved every bit...Now that abhi and cabir is also playng along with manik i hope navya and mukti also will b convinced... Update next part soon.. wenever yu are free😳

And than looking at My box..though I didn't wanted to eat..but than I felt like seeing that cute little heart Smilliii..
this unknown feeling 👏👏