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mairaallauddin

@mairaallauddin

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1081

Awesome update

Superb update

Manik loves nandini alot

An I think it's manik on the door

Loved the update

Update the next part soon

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manandeeplove

@manandeeplove

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1082

amazing update ...
manik n nandini...
their new journey of being together ...being in love is abt to begin...
looking forward to it...
cont soon

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Kaanika

@Kaanika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1083

Thanku u so very much for updating..
It was mindblowing. N superb.
Manan nok Jhok was cute...
Manik love to tease nandu...
It was super cute..
Finally u gave a long update but left it at a cliffhanger..
Keep it up!!

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riya4smartgirl

@riya4smartgirl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1084

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!😛😛😛😛

Now the journey begins!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😉😉😉😉

I'm sooo excited for this journey of theirs!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😉😉😉😛😛😛😛😛😳😳😳😳

Nandini is getting affected by every action of manik but scare to accept it!!!! i'm sure manik will build that trust once again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳😳😳😳😳😳

Is it manik came to live in nandini's neighbourhood???????😲😲😲😲😲😲

Keep it up!!!!👏👏👏👏👏

Thnx for PM!!!!!!!!😊😊😊😊

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Cutebaby9889

@Cutebaby9889

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1085

i think nandu's neighbour must be manik n his uncle aunty
oh god ur update was
JHAKAS ANIL KAPOOR'S JHAKAS
I LOVED THE LOVE DEFINATION BY MANIK
N OVIO NANDU MANIK WILL BE MAD ON U AFTER THE SILLY THING AFTER ALL U R HIS ONLY STORY
LOVE U
TANISHA

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shameez

@shameez

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1086

wow nice update dear
as usual well written 😊
loved it
thanks for pm

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aroy90

@aroy90

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1087

Wow

Really its getting interesting day by day

I think Manik will be there in Nandini's home

N thanks a ton for the PM dear

😊

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Shanhavi

@shanhavi_manan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1088

Loved ur update
Awesome awesome awesome
Just amazing
Maniks concern for nandini clearly shows his love for nandini
And nandini thoughts are beautifully penned down
Thank u so much for the pm
Shanhavi

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Sm0405

@Sm0405

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1089

Oyeee ... Another amazing update ... I'm so happy after reading this ...

Yes true ... It was indeed an amazing journey ... Which now came to an end ... We all enjoyed reading it ...

Bt I think picture abhi Baki hai mere dost ... He he he I'm also becoming filmy like Mr. Stranger ... Ab thoda toh asar hoga na ...

Nd again Manik gave a beautiful meaning of love ... Seriously ... Manna padega bande ko ... Nd Nandini deliberately asked the same question which he has answered several times ...

U amazingly penned Nandini's pov abt the previous night ... She was scared when she was abt to slip bt thn when she was in his arms she was in the paradise ... I really liked her feelings abt all tht happened in the previous day ...

Hmm ... So now Nandini is lil scared of the passing trains ... Nd after seeing her in tht condition Manik became concerned fr her ... Uska gussa when she was in the train, safe in her arms ... Omg ... Waise hona bhi chahiye ... He was abt to loose her jst the previous night n thn she was abt to miss the train ...

Bt mujhe bht accha laga matlb his concern, his love, his fear of loosing her ... It's really very amazing ... Very soothing ... Their story gives an example of true love ... Seriously ...

Hmm so the train journey ends ... Nd the real ... Love journey begins ... He he he he ...

He didn't go with them nd again she was afraid ... Afraid thinking abt their parting ways ... She was sure abt he is nt leaving her bt thn she was thinking abt Whts going on in his mind ...????...

Nd he has something planned fr her ... Jisse janne se pehle Hi aapne khatm kar dia ye part ... Arggghhh !!!

I so hate these cliff hangers ... Now have to wait fr the next part to know what was the shoving surprise ???

Hmm now plz plz plz update the next part jaldi jaldi jaldi ... Coz seriously can't wait fr it ...

I so love this SS ... Always keep waiting fr its updates ...