manan ff a dream couple updated very imp note on pg 33 - Page 13

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Posted: 9 years ago
so sweeet... 😛
& manik's dad!!!!!!! I wud luv to hv a father-in-law like him 😳😛

he is solo manik... or I should say manik is sooo like his father 😛😛

nice update 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago

awesome update...

loved it so much...

manik's dad is awesome...so chilled out...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
note-i pm many people still no one commented its ook if it that bad that no one is interested in it then I will not continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
plz continue it dont stop its an awsm story
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey pls continue
It's really a lovely story
Continue soon
PS: I have exams so I will not able to comment may be
Thanks for pm
Take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey hy i dont check my in box bcz i was bze

bfr see my indox i see u that u r not continue
what is this common this ff is awesm plz continue

plz yaar plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
So. here is next update I know I m supper late and sorry for that but for now enjoy;*- chap9a;*- [manik POV]:*- (we were sleeping and trust me it feel so good to sleep in ur loves arm ...after a while almost two hour we woke up...actually I was the one who woke up first and see my love sleeping peacefully in my arms...and then i started doing my fav job which is non other than admiring my angels beautiful face... after a while she also woke up and saw me staring at her without even blinking eyes,,). N:*-KYA DEKH RHE HO.(she asked looking at me as I was really staring at her like love sick puppy...coming out of own world of admiring her I ansewerd back in same loving tone ). M;* TUMHE. (on which she blushed a little and cuddle to me much more hidding her face in my chest). N;*-MANIK.(she called me after settling herself in arms ). M;*-HAAN BABY.(I replied her in same way actually I was stuck at that loving tone...trust me if anyone know na manik malhotra talking so lovingly to anyone he or she will definetly faint many tyms). . N;*-U KNOW UR FATHER IS SO SWEET...HE WAS TOTALLY A GRNTLEMAN. M;*-WAAH...MUJHE PTANE ME 6 MAHINE LAGE...AUR DAD NE EK BAAR ME IMPRESS KR DIYA...NOT BAD HAAN(I said this in mischevious .tone and replied lovingly and all I can do is make her more closer to me). N;*-HAAN BECOZ HE IS UR DAD M;- HMMM. N;*-OK NOW LETS FRESHN UP ND GO DOWN.(by saying this she get up from bed and started folding the duvet...so. I also got up and said in mischievous tone ). M;* OK CHALO. ( saying this I took her hand and started walking to washroom and as expected she stooped me...I knew very well this is coming)N;*-MANIK I WILL GO ALONE. (she said this and all I can do is to stare at her with a pleading tone). M;* NO PLZZZ. N;*-WHAT NO...YES BECOZ IF U WILL COME WITH ME NA THEN U WILL MAKE US LATE. (she said this in matter of fact and it is a fact ...but no for now I just want a bath nothing else trust me). M;* PLZZZ...I WONT DISTURB U N;- NO MR. MALHOTRA...I KNOW U ALWAYS GET UR WAY RYT (I again pleaded her but no she was adamdent. after all she was manik malhotra gf na) M;*-,PLZZZ. N;*-OK FINE. (I pleaded one more tym and finaaly she agreed...and once again I started walking to washroom along with her ofcourse). M;*-OK CHALO(I said this walking but she again stopped me ... and seriously I was geting irritated ). N;* WAIT. M;* NOW WHAT. N;*-PHLE PROMISE ME. M;*-WHAT PROMISE.(seriously I was getting irritated by each passing sec ...but what can I do...I have no other option then listening her). N:*- JUST REPEAT MY WORDS. (she said this sternly to which I agreed eventually having no alternate option). M;*-OKKK SHOT. N;*-SO I WILL NOT DISTURB NANDINI IN TAKING BATH. BY (she started with her statement which I have to repeat and I repeated). M;*-YAY YAY I WILL NOT DISTURB NANDINI IN TAKING BATH BY. N;*-HANDS. M;*-HANDS. N;*-LEGS. M;*-LEGS. N;*-LIPS. M;*-LIPS. N;*-MOUTH,TOUNGE, FINGER,ELBOW,EYES AND UMMM EYEBROW. M;*-EYEBROW SRIOUSLY...WHAT U THINK HOW I DISTURB U BY EYEBROWS MISS. (now I was hell irritated like seriously eyebrow). N;*-WO I DONT KNOW ...BUT SAY IT M;*-FINE BY MOUTH,TOUNGE,FINGER,ELBOW,EYES, AND YAY EYEBROW MOST IMPORTANTLY...AREE U FORGOT NAILS ...NAILS TOO HAPPY. ( I eventually said this a little sacastically I was really annoyed and I know she is doing this deliberaitely she loves to annoy me ). N;*-YAY CHALO. M;*-U R IMPOSSIBLE. (I said this smiling and we headed to take our bath which has so many rules). nandini POV;*-(we have bath together he didn't do anything having bath we both came out and headed down where everyone else were present and r having dinner).C;- LO AA GYE LOVE BIRDS.(WE reached down hand in hand ...and cabir once again commented to receive glares only...seriously he never leaves a. single tym to tease us). M:- CABIRRR.(manik glare at him as always and he looked away as always it is repeated scene of my lyf seriously ..dad called us breaking our trans and we to settled on table obeying him). R;* COME GUYS HAVE A SEAT KUCH KHAA LO TUM DONO. N;- HMMM.(we all started munching food when multi asked in curious tone). MU;*-SO KYA PLAN H.(she asked all of us and all started think the plan for tonight ...when suddenly alya comes up idea of clubbing). AL ;* LETS GO TO PUB WHAT SAY. M;* HUMMM COOL...DAD UR COMING NA.(it was good idea and everyone agreed also ...manik asked dad also to join us I was super happy I really love to spend tym with him) R:- I Wish MANIK BUT I HAVE SOME WORK...SO I CANT COME. N;- DAD COME NA.(I tried one more tym as I would really love if he come along with us ...but he has works so its okk ). R;--NO BABY TRUST ME I CANT ...U GUYS GO ENJOY. WE WILL HAVE FUN TOMARROW OK. N;* OK...NAVYA U CAN COME NA...I MEAN. NA;*-HAAN NANDU HUM JAROOR AAYENGE...WAISE V TUMLOG KO PATA G HUMME NA BACHPAN SE BHUT SAUKH H PUB JAANE KA ...BARA MAZAA AAYEGA. (Navya was Navya kuch nhi ho skta uska bachopan ka spna cub long like tottally unbelievable..) M;*-OK DONE THEN WE WILL LEAVE AFTRR TWO HR. (soon we had our brunch and everyone departured to their rooms dad also started to go when suddenly manik stopped him). M:*-WE NEED TO TALK TO U. R;*-HUMMM SAY NA. M;&-ALONE. (HE said this looking at me as if telling me as if he want me to understands his sitution I understand also and went to my room giving them privacy). precap;*-manik raj talk and clubbig
Edited by juhiloveparth - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
No dunt stop
Its awesome story
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow
nice pls jaldi jaldi update kiyakaro naaa
pls
just waiting for next update and pls update a long and lamba wala update plsss
love it
muhaaa
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ab manik ko kya bt krni h apne dad se yr u r scaring me...
Update soon...

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