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Adya Agrawal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#171

Thank you to the ones who comment.. And silent readers please agar comment nahi karna toh yahi se u-turn lelo..!! Please mujhe harsh words likhna pasand nahi but aap log mujho force karte ho.. Ek part pe 5 pages comment toh ek pe 2-3 pages comment..

This one is specially for Bhagupur AKA Jyoti Di.. For her lamba-lamba comments on each and everu chapter.. Thank you Di it means a lot..

I always read and consider your comments...

😊😊

I think it's the best way to say thanks.. As you won't miss out my thank you for your lovely comments..

CHAPTER-6

NEXT DAY..

MANIK'S POV..

After getting up.. Although i didn't slept whole night planning and plotting what to do to make it up. i decided to go and talk to her firstly.. That would atleast help me with something... I would go there and make some space in my little princess' heart..

Than slowly-slowly in Nandini's heart..

Then we both will live happily with our lottle princess in our own world with only LOVE and LOVE...

POV ENDS..

But he came out from his dream land when his phone rang due to the alarm he set..and reallty struck him...

MANIK'S POV..

No manik it's not as easy as you think..

You have hurt her very badly.. She just too broken to listen to your bloody trauma and shock wala explanation..

You have to win her back.. It's not like you will say please forgive me.. I know i made a mistake ans she will happily forgive you a chance..

A CHANCE TO..MEND..HER..

A CHANCE TO..TO.. LIVE..WITH HER..

A CHANCE TO..KISS HER UNTIL YOU ARE BREATHLESS..

A CHANCE TO..CUDDLE HER.. AND SLEEP..

A CHANCE TO..LOVE HER..

All she would say is..

JUST GO AWAY.. YOU WANT A CHANCE..RIGHT.. YOU WANT ME TO BELEIVE THAT YOU LOVE ME...

BUT WHY SHOULD I BELEIVE YOU..???

WHY SHOULD I GIVE YOU A CHANCE..???

SO THAT ONE DAY YOU ABANDON ME.. YOU CAN BREAK ME AFTER I ACCEPT YOU... SO THAT YOU CAN CRUSH ME UNDER I GUILT OF ACCEPTING YOU..

YOU KNOW WHAT MANIK MALHOTRA..

I JUST HATE YOU..

I JUST HATE YOU .. FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART..

Thinking of her speaking like this sent shivers down my spine..

I know how..she must have felt when i called her a sl*t.. I am a loser..

A F**KING LOSER..NOTHING ELSE..

But now putting a full stop to my endless and useless imagination.. I should better move to the venue..( you readers know what.. Yahan tak main likhti gayi and mujhe pata hi nahi chala.. But then when i saw it.. I was like everyone will kill me adha update main toh poora manik ka mindset hi dikhaya..)

LONDON ROUNDHOUSE..AFTERNOON SHOW OF N.M.

NANDINI'S POV

As i reached THE ROUNDHOUSE..

I again felt ki aaj kuchh hone wala hai.. Something Drastic..

But shooing my thoughts i went to the stage when the hall was full and itnwas almost time to start..

She started..

Take away all your things and go

You can't take back what you said, I know

I've heard it all before, at least a million times

I'm not one to forget, you know

( again the flashback came into her minds..)

I don't believe, I don't believe it

You left in peace, left me in pieces

Too hard to breathe, I'm on my knees

Right now, 'ow

( her heart was screaming that something is going to happen..)

I'm so sick of that same old love, that shit, it tears me up

I'm so sick of that same old love, my body's had enough

Oh, (that same old love)

I'm so sick of that same old love, feels like I've blown apart

I'm so sick of that same old love, the kind that breaks your heart

( she continued and the crowd was going mad..)

MANIK'S POV..

I'm not spending any time, wasting tonight on you

I know, I've heard it all

So don't you try and change your mind

Cause I won't be changing too, you know

( i was watching her sing from the tv present in her vanity..)

You can't believe, still can't believe it

You left me in peace, left me in pieces

Too hard to breathe, I'm on my knees

Right now, 'ow

( i could clearly see her delima..)

I'm so sick of that same old love, that shit, it tears me up

I'm so sick of that same old love, my body's had enough

Oh, (that same old love)

I'm so sick of that same old love, feels like I've blown apart

I'm so sick of that same old love, the kind that breaks your heart

( i felt miserable by the end..)

After the song finished.. I was still sitting there waiting for her or atleast any one to show up..

When i came in, i met a man named karan.. Maybe he recognized me so..

LIKE 5 MINUTES LATER..

The door opened and i got ready to face Nandini oblivious of the fact that her concert was still going on..

But then a girl maybe aroud 4 or 5 entered..

God she was soo cute just like an angel.. Those eyes , her cute little nose.. And her smile.. She must be my daughter.. Ahhmm..i mean our daughter..

J- hey.. Mistel ( mister ) aap kon hain..??

Asked Janvi narrowing her eyes in a stern voice..

J- don't you knon mele aul ( mere aur ) mamma ke siva noone is allowed here..

Still she said in a stern yet in her babyish tone..

M- hey doll i am Manik Malhotra..

J- as if i cale..( care )

M s.t.- she is my daughter without any doubt.. Dekho toh how is she talking.. Yahi sanskar diye hain Nandini ne isse..

M- mein na aapke mamma ka friend hoon..

J- jhoot..

M- are promise..

J- no, Mamma ke fliends ( fliends ) kal ayye the.. Khail ( khaor ) dosent matter..

She then went and sat on the sofe..

M- aap chocolate khaoge..

Just as he said this janvi tool out a chocolate from her chotu sa sling bag which she was carrying..

And started munching it..

J- no, thanks mere pass hai..

Said she in a rude manner..

Although it hurts to see your own daughter talking to you like this but this is what i deserved..

Now what to do.. I thought but everytime i try to start a conversation with her ,,she just cuts me in middle..

She is a tough nut to crack...

JANVI'S POV...

Although i knew him.. He wash ( was ) Manik Malhotla ( Malhotra )... I mean i no him.. He ish ( is ) the lead singel ( singer ) on Fab5..

I am a big fan of him.. But mummy says ki we don't talk to stlangels.. ( strangers )..

And mummy and Kalan uncle ( karan uncle ) talk about him sometimes..

But still mummy ki baat toh manni hogi na..!!!

END OF POV..

M- achha apka naam kya hai..??

He again made an attempt..

J- JANVI... JANVI MULTHY...

MANIK'S POV..

M- janvi yeh toh bada achha nam hai..

J- thank you..

Just as i was succeding in my job..

She started talking a bit normally i heard..

Voice- tum.. What the hell are you doing her...

And it's time.. Nandini was here..

J- mommy.. Your pelfolmance was awesome..

And then my little princess jumped from the couch and ran towards nandini.. And hugged her knees..

And nandini knelt down.. And hugged her..

N- thank you princess.. I am glad aapko achha laga.. And aap yahan kyun aaye.. Aapko to maine kaha tha to stay in the V.I.P. Room..

J- woh i wanted to meet you ASAP..

N- ohh so my doll was missing me..

J- haan and woh bhi itta sala..

Said my doll stretching her arms.. And i was just adoring them..

N- achha now you go and wait for me in the car.. I will come in 5..

J- ok

And janvi left..

N- what the hell are you doing here..??

M- nandini just listen..

N- listen what manik.. And waise bhi i don't need you.. I have i career made bu myself and me family with me.. I just don't need you..

She was controlling her tears.. I could clearly see that.

M- nandini atlea...

But she cut me..

N- achha tell me what should i listen.. There is nothing to talk about..so just leave..

M- but nan..

N- you won't leave right.. Fine then i'll leave..

And she left wiping the lone tear which escaped her eye..

It hurted me to see her like this.. But again i deserved this..!!!

So as my dear readers wanted an update on the weekend so here i am..

Achha see it was long.. Aur lamba mango ge to i'll need glucose..hehe..

So as per the ritual now i need lamba lamba comments as my dose to right further..

Is update mein.. ManVi ki meet hui... And MaNan ka bhi.. And. Janvi toh Manik ki copy thi but reason the Nandini ke sanskar..

What i wanted was ki Janvi should be smitten bu Manik but some of you wrote tashan to mai e thoda rude dikhaya..

But agar MaNan ko sath lana hai so Janvi is the key..

Isleye woh toh Manik ki side pe jayegi..

Twists and Turns are waiting.. With some nice songs.. Like the one above..

SAME OLD LOVE by SELEN GOMEZ.. do listen...

NOTE:-

If any one wants to ask some questions or clear some doubts.. Feel free to PM me..

And if any of you want to see a specific seen in the upcoming parts them PM me like.. Some scene between ManVi or MaNan or Fab5 or anyone..

Just PM me the idea.. Like if you want to see something like the Ice-Cream scene from ky2 or by your imagination...

YOU HAVE THE LIBERTY TO SEE WHAT YOU WANT TO SEE.. IT JUST NOT DEPENDS UPON ME.. SO UTHAO FAYADA OPPORTUNITY KA..

LOADS OF LOVE..

ADYA..

Edited by Adya05 - 9 years ago

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kishubedi

@kishubedi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#172

Thanks for the update n pm

Glad to see jahnvi finally meeting manik...

N he recognised her immediately...loved their convo

Looking forward to see how manik cknvicnes nandini

She is gonna be tough but to crack she is quit hurt after all!

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dhillon90

@dhillon90

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Posted: 9 years ago

#173

Awesome update
Manci meet was superb
Janvi toh manik ki hi copy hai...rude attitude arrogant...
Manik baba bht papad belne padenge nandu ko manane ke liye...
Plz janvi ke saath fab5 ke kch momnts dikhayo...manik ke saath toh uska tashan hi dikhayo...
Lovd it
Continue soon

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Geet *wink*

@dreamy_doll15

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Posted: 9 years ago

#174

itttsss nicee yar.. or finally manan meet.. n finally manik n janvi meet.. yeyeye... but thodaa rude to rahnaa pdega.. itss little needed. . n janvi to manik ki copy.. that's nice. . I just love it.. Itsss soo awesome .. So amazing. .just love it. .. Soo .fantastic. ... Keep updating. .. U r such a beautiful writer... Update soon.. Waiting for next update eagerly impatiently. .. Thanks for this update . Thanks for pm too. .. :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-);-) :-) :-) ;-) ;-) :-) ;-) ;-) ;-) ;-) ;-) ;-) ;-) ;-) ;-) ' Vaise manik or janvi k little cute cute moments. . n little. ..manik or romantic mood .. itss something I want to see.. but if u fee like it...only toh hi.. :-) :-) - -

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AMAR_LOVE

@AMAR_LOVE

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Posted: 9 years ago

#175

like the update...plz cont soon

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nara26

@nara26

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Posted: 9 years ago

#176

Wow Janvi is like manik rude 😆
Shinis so cute she knows manik as a fab 5 member 😳

Was a awesome updar dear tnx for pm continue soon

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eppie99

@eppie99

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Posted: 9 years ago

#177

Awww father daughter talk

Jst luvd it

Awesome update

Stay blessed

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spreaddsmiles

@spreaddsmiles

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Posted: 9 years ago

#178

Hey I read d SS in one go like I started reading today itself..

Its really dark nd painful

Manik has actually done a sin nd he shouldnt be free of his guilt so easily

I had tears at some point😭

It is so deep and intense

Nd in last update I loved janvi nd her love fr her mother

nd manik adoring them'

Upadate soon

waiting eagerly😊

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Adya Agrawal

@Adya05

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Posted: 9 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: spreaddsmiles
Hey I read d SS in one go like I started reading today itself..
Its really dark nd painful
Manik has actually done a sin nd he shouldnt be free of his guilt so easily
I had tears at some point😭
It is so deep and intense

Nd in last update I loved janvi nd her love fr her mother
nd manik adoring them'

Upadate soon
waiting eagerly😊

Don't cry sweetheart..

It is for your and my entertainment... Not to make you cry..