ADarkMaNanSS-WILL MAKE YOU MINE CH-7 PG-30 25/10 - Page 20

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Posted: 9 years ago
Oswm oswm oswwwm update👏 finally manik nd nandu nd janvi ki meeting hua😛 manik k liye bura to lagraha hai but manik ne Jo kiya hai usse to yeh KUCH v nahi hai 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry for the late comment..

Awesome update..

Whatever janvi did with manik was perfect..

She should teach him a lesson for what he did to nandini..

After some cute fights between ManVi make the patch up..

Pls continue soon..

Love
Suji :-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
sorry sorry
i am late to comment
i loved the update
janvi talks just like manik
loved the convo
chocolate part
i am sure she'll jell up with manik soon
she's a fan of manik
loved every thing
cont soon and take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
it was awesome update. Please post the next part soon. Thanks for the pm. Tack care of yourself.
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Posted: 9 years ago
I read it in one..I must say it is amazing awsmmm
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Posted: 9 years ago
NOTE...

First of all sorry.. Maine phir se ek note likha hai so go ahead and read.. It's important..!!!

1) this is for A12609z.. So as you said ki clear nahi ho raha hai... It's been 5 years so Nandini waise bhi sab ke bare mein kayi bar sich chuki hogi. She must be over right.. So what i mean to say is ki har cheez ka right time hota hai.. I will show ki how manik realised..
And about what they felt... So maybe first or second chapter mein i wrote ki Nandini was a fan of manik and she found him hot but after what he did so.. Nandini ki feelings ko woh deny karegi but woh feelings toh rahegi.. Woh feel karna band nahi kar sakti..
And i as i told ki Manik was heartless so uski feelings toh sabke liye hi secret hai.. But i will definately show you how he felt.. Not in flashback but maybe as a convo. Between ManBir..
I tjink it will help you..

2) secondly kal mere half-yearly ka marks milenge so i just can't write.. Like mujhe bohot tension ho raha hai...
And then kal hi in the evening i will be going to my maternal grandmother's place for a week.. But i will try to update.. Pakka..
I don't know wahan internet hoga ki nahi.. Agar nahi hoga toh main likh ke rakh loon gi and as soon as i will return.. Do teen chapter ek sath de doon gi.. To compensate..!!! I guess that'll be cool...

And sorry for not updating.. Reason toh bata diya hai..!!!

REGARDS..
ADYA..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Dear...Adya.
Good luck for your results.
Will be waiting for your updates.
Enjoy your trip dear.
Have fun. Happy and safe journey.
Thanks for sharing.
Stay blessed dear.




Love. .
Jyoti.





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Posted: 9 years ago
itsss okk..

we'll wait...

all the best for ur resultss..

n hav fun...
n enjoy...

.!
Edited by gtilwani45 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey i am back from my Nani's place..
So here it is.. The next part..
Hope you all like it..
This one's for Sharon.babu... Thank you very much.. I read your comments.. They mean a lot.. Keep commenting.. God bless..

Enjoy Reading..

CHAPTER-7

NANDINI'S PLACE..

A new day..
With the same miseries.. The feeling of facing him haunted her..
Yes, she didn't knew what she felt for him.. Maybe NOTHING..
But she wanted to know.. That what she was told was a lie or what..

She can't forget everything and accept him.. Just because she was told that He LOVES Her..
Well it sounds weird.. The one who asked her..or maybe ordered.. Her to join him in his bed for a night is now saying.. I LOVE You..
Isn't it weird..?? Well it is..!!

Life is not a fairy tale..!!!
It Can never be..!!..It Will never be..!!!
Well thats the irony..
No one knows when life will take a troll over you..
A NIGHT.. Yes, a night is enough to..
!!.. LOSE ANYTHING AND GAIN EVERYTHING..!!

N- janu baby please.. Main thak gai.. Now eat quietly or i won't talk to you..

J- nai na mamma..

So, the seen is Nandini was trying to feed Janvi.. Who was running anywhere and everywhere to escape the food..

N- fine i won't talk to you..

Saying this Nandini sat on a chair and made a cute pout..
But Janvi was Janvi.. She kissed Nandini's pout..

J- achha ok fine.. I will eat..

N- aww mera baby.. Now chalo finish it..

Although Nandini had dozens of servant.. Still she liked speding some quality time with Janvi.. She didn't wanted her to be a love deprived child.. Just like her biological father..

Yes, well somewhere Nandini knew that the reason behind Manik's rudeness and arrogant behaviour was his sad , alone and love deprived past.. HIS LONELY CHILDHOOD..

J- achha mamma woh aap unko janti ho.. Woh Jo kal aye the..

N- kon baby..??

J- are wohi.. Manik Malhotla.. Fab 5 ke singer..

This was what Nandini knew would come.. How can her daughter miss it out..??
After all she was a Damn.. Mad fan of MANIK MALHOTRA..

N- hann.. Woh..ha..

Just then the bell rang...
Thanking her stars... Sun and Moon.. With the god..
Everything present up there she went to see whose it..

Nandini opened the door.. And the veiw shocked her.. She didn't expected this at all...

There were red heart-shaped ballons attached to a stand.. With a big..no..no.. A very very bid teddy and 5-6 boquets..
And a hoge sorry card..

Her eyes were filled again with tears.. FOR HIM... BECAUSE OF HIM..

J- mamma koi aaya hai kya..??

Her doll's voice broke her trance..

N- no baby..

And she closed the door , silently asking a servant to throw it all..

ON THE OTHER HAND..

Manik was standing in a corner watching it all..
When he saw a servant taking it all he called him..

M- hey..!! Where are you taking it..??

S- umm.. Sir.. NM mam asked me to throw it all..

M- ohh..

Although he didn't showed.. But he was hurt..
He didn't thought that nandini would ask a servant to throw it all..
But alas.. NOW HIS DEEDS ARE PAYING HIM OFF...!!!
And if in his hands.. He would like to go back in the past and make it all ok..

AT NIGHT..

It was a really special night..
It was the music awards night.. YES, THE MUSIC AWARDS NIGHT..
The main reason of Fab 5 being in London..

Getting ready in a sexy black gown.. Nandini was all set to be the centre of attraction of the ceremony as always..

Little did she knew that this night would make her face him again..



So this is it..
Not in a mood but still wrote a bit for you all.. Its been long..
Up with cold..
Weise i have a new idea for a new SS but i will write that after completing this one..
Do comment.. I came across some people who sent me a buddy request for pm but they didn't even bother to comment.. And i know your names.. And won't think twice before writing them here.. So better comment..
Take it as a threat or whatever you want..

LOADS OF LOVE..
ADYA..

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Posted: 9 years ago
okay so daughter is fathers fan
wow
this is awesome
loved the update
nd gud to see u bck

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