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A.Hajnal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#241

^ I know, I know...The beta was busy with her exams, so was I...But all is ready, the date which she promised to send back the chapter was today, so the update is just a day away or even some hours...So, max tomorrow I will be able to update, In sha Allah! 😳

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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#242

I promise to read this story in a go on sunday.

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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: Cooldude101
Where are you man?
The If world feels so suna suna (lonely) without you!
Just a friendly reminder that people here are dying for an update.
Anyway you take your time, and I'll just go down the older chapters again😳

I agree with you 100%

I-Fworld kya the entire universe feels like soona soona maan ka angan types.

😭

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A.Hajnal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#244

@Nita:- Thank you so much...Your words mean a lot! 🤗

I am glad you are liking this story so far... 😳

@Noor:- Aww, Kara doon gii...First toh I have to tell you how much Manik missed her, what not he did to come back to her, to fight for them and how he reached where Nandini found him...So, thora sa aur wait, please! 😳

@Payal:- Thank you! 😳

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: Cooldude101
Now I think I'm getting the shit down.
That bas***d of a father doesn't want his son to be in contact with the only thing that he ever loved.
Okay I take it back, he may love the kid, but Mr. Malhotra is pure evil, just Nyonika's husband material. (Sorry being too harsh, only Harshad is Nyonika husband material😉)
why? I mean this guy should understand that what his kid feels isn't puppy love for god's sake. No one wakes up after half an year to ask about their girlfriend if he really didn't love her.
Manik is just spot on man! The guy has brains I have to give you that, but with scheming parents such as his he wouldn't have been able to survive without playing his game as well.
We didn't know much about Papa Malhotra, but you writing him down like this makes me believe that this guy had the balls to do what he did.
Along with Nandu and Manik's reunion❤️ I also want a Nyonika reaction, haaannn! Please?
this story is THE shit.
Don't know how I would react if you didn't continue it and try to finish it.

As always, your comment made me smile every time I have read it, and I have read it many times during these days. I always do it with every comment of yours, they are just what I need to make me keep writing...Thank you for that, really! 🤗

Oh, dude, you just don't know what I have in mind, what not that kid has endured, well, you can guess, having Nyonika and Mr Malhotra around, ever since he was born...My heart breaks for the kid...

Sometimes I wonder if we had actually appreciated Manik enough for his strength, sharp mind, his heart and soul, HIM for he was/is a self-made, in every and true sense of the word. Other kids had parents, or at least someone to protect them, teach them and make them decent human beings, but here toh sab kuch he has learned himself, everything that makes him so special, his flaws and qualities, no one own any credit to any of that but he himself. Everything that he has been, has done, he has all by himself, understood by himself, he has taught him himself, and how well he has taught himself, nahi? Whenever I think about that, I feel so proud of the kid...My love and respect for him are constantly increasing with time...

The writers, Richa has done a hell of a job with this character. He is amazing, so flawed but so perfect. Complex and complicated yet so simple and pure. He has been written so well. Without any doubt, the only character that has been written well - with all the layers and shades, one who has been worked on constantly, made progress - has been Manik Malhotra.

About Nyonika and Mr Malhotra, you just wait, as the story moves, you will see how well they compliment each other. Hardshad has a strong rival, that is all I can say to you! 😉

That is the problem, yaar. We know nothing about him even though he was the character whose entry we all have wished for. I will never forgive, for we have been denied the character we have wondered about the most. We don't even know his name, and you don't know how much that irritates me during the time I write him, about him. We will never know what is that Nyo calls him, pyaar se...😉 Never got an interaction between them...You know how much fun that would have been...Add Harshad in between, they were THE ONLY triangle we demanded, damn it...

So much potential wasted because the writers kept forcing the supposed 'triangle' jahan koi chance hi nahi banta tha. I mean, really...

Oh, you will see Nyonika Malhotra in action soon, you worry not about that! 😃

Aww, you make me blush and feel proud at the same time...Thank you, that is all I can say...🤗 *speechless*

Aree, I am not going to do that, doesn't matter how much time it takes, I will end this story, it is MaNan's 'HEA', dude, if not ours too, I will never leave them hanging. I love them and this story too much to abandon it. My kids and my first story ka savaal hai, baba! 😳

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A.Hajnal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#246

Originally posted by: bhagupur

Thanks for pm.dear

This was very beautiful and emotional update. ..

Feels for manik...he remembered nandu...

Very . Very interesting chapter.

Thanks for sharing this.

Looking forward to seeing next. ..

Stay blessed. ..

Thanks.

You are always welcome! I am glad you are liking this story so far...😳

Manik is going to make us cry for him a lot, but I am sure you won't mind crying as it is done for him and with him...I hope you will stay till the end, to smile and laugh with him too...😳

Thank you for reading it and for all the love, sweet comments and the kindness...🤗

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A.Hajnal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: shreya31
Hi there...i read the chapter earlier but cudnt comment tht time so m bck😛
I want Nandini to slap this daddy malhotra atleast once in ur story😡no wonder he is nyonika's husband😡the control freak!! He is being so unfair to his own son whom he claims to love!!!😕

The anxiety which Manik feels on not having his Nandini around is soo beautifully portrayed👏
As always m glad the wait will end soon😳
Continue soon...thanks for the pm, most of the time i end up reading the chapter before it😛

Shreyaaa! Haha, I knew it! You always are around when I update, and you don't know how much that makes me happy. Thank you for that and everything! 🤗

Your wish, my command, my dear. Let the time come, you may get more than what you asked for...😉

Thank you, I am glad you think and say so, I was worried about that. The only think I am always worried is about getting Manik right. Can't fail in that as he is too precious to me, almost sacred...

I am working on to make that 'soon', soon...Wish me luck! 😳

Haha, I knowww...You, the cute stalker! 🤗

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: MSIKura
Nicely written Manik's anxiety. Your writting style is very different. I like it. This is still a mystery to me. Will see how Nandani and cabir will find Manik.
Please update soon n don't take too long.

Tks.

Thank you, I was worried about not getting it right. You think so? Aww, Thank you, you don't know how much that makes me happy! 🤗

That is where we all want the story to reach, soon, but I hope you will enjoy Manik's journey too. This section of the story is all about unveiling the mystery, so stay around and you will have your answers...😉

Sorry for the delay, was busy with the exams, but I will try my best to make up for the lost time...I hope to see you around and hope to keep you interested till the end...😳

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: dpsdevuu
EID MUBARAK

Eid Mubarak to you too...Sorry for such a late reply, but I guess now you all are used to that. So, this time, I am wishing you in advance for the upcoming eid. 'Happy Eid'...🤗