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shreya31

@shreya31

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#221

Aaahhh...this is so beautiful!!! The way nandini is ingrained in every thought n fibre of manik is beautifully depicted!! Lovely as always😳

U r making us wait sooo long for the actual meeting between manik & nandini😭i hope it comes soon!!

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Jyoti

@bhagupur

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#222

Thanks for pm.dear

Very interesting chapter. ..

I like the way manik description about nandni...

And John understand with peasant. ...

Poor manik only talk about her...and where is she. ...didn't reached to him...

Looking forward to meet them. ..

Stay blessed.

Thanks.

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nita24

@nita24

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#223

Wow awesome update dear
How beautifully written
Lovely as always
Love the way john understand what manik want to say
But when Ur actully planning to meeting bw them
Will waiting for that impatiently

Thanks for the pm dear
Wait for next one
Continue soon
Tc

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Cooldude101

@Cooldude101

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#224

I totally believe you man, the thing is I'm the most weird person with the most weird set of emotions.
Don't you ever thing that I really meant that, I'm just a frustrated soul waiting for a long awaited reunion.
Manik baba seems to remember his Nandini alright, but the evil but loving Papa Malhotra is dead set to call her his imagination, do it so many times that he himself is compelled to thing that Nandini is nothing but his own imagination.
Smart that guy is. But no one is as smart as you!
This plot is enthralling and you writing it is the cherry on top, and on the whole damn freaking cake.
No words of appreciation are ever enough.
I actually always read the 10th chapter once again, before reading the new chapter as it gives me those feels
Don't you ever think I won't be here to read this story. No matter how long it takes, a year or 10 years, I'll always check the forum for your updates and won't leave until it's done, if it's the last thing I do on this forum!
Keep on with this pace, and I guess I will need 10 years after all😉😆
Haayyye Maar DALALALALALALAAA!!!!
Manik and his characterisation, his pain, his way of communicating, those expressions, every freaking thing is so so perfect sometimes I think that Richa Yamini is working undercover here!
You be the GOD!
Someone save me from my madness, but it seems I'm in tooo deep!😉

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dpsdevuu

@dpsdevuu

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#225

amazing story

i want to tell you that you are an amazing writer.

continue soon

eagerly waiting for the update

LOVE YOU...

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bashful_moon

@bashful_moon

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#226

I hate you... Like I H.A.T.E you for doing this to me...

You do not drive your readers to tears with such a gut- wrenching update... writer...

Right now I am an incoherent mess... I am just trying to gauge the depth of pain Manik has undergone all these years and I do not think my thoughts can ever match the intensity of your writing... .. His wounds, his angst, his pain, his helplessness but Nandini's omnipresence in all his actions and thoughts... Oh boy!!! How the mighty has fallen...Both figuratively and in love as well...

Sorry for the late comment writer... I wish I didn't have to be a Manan zealot, a fan of your writing and a student of Applied Mathematics all at the same time. I wish these were not the last couple of weeks before exams.. But if only wishes were horses!! Phew...

Keep writing my Coelho!!! May words be with you.

Love n God Bless!!

Yasna

Edited by bashful_moon - 9 years ago

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ershilpavyas

@ershilpavyas

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#227

Yar it was really very emotional update...nd u described it really well. I really liked it but kya karu muje ye b chota update laga 😆

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#228

@Shreya:- You are once again the first one to comment! Thank you for that and for the sweet words! 🤗

Ah, Manik is Manik...And to tell you the truth, the story is more about him than anyone else, so about him, I must write. But I am playing to make that happen soon, let's see, in a few chapters! 😃

@bhagupur:- Thank you so much so your sweet words! He is so admirable, isn't he? Manik's love has always made our heart melt...

Yes, I will make sure that happens soon...😳

@Nita:- Thank you for always making me smile with your encouraging words. I am glad you liked John, it's always amazing to know how well also new characters are accepted by you all. 🤗

I am planning to make that happen soon, just a few chapters away! 😃

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: Cooldude101
I totally believe you man, the thing is I'm the most weird person with the most weird set of emotions.
Don't you ever thing that I really meant that, I'm just a frustrated soul waiting for a long awaited reunion.
Manik baba seems to remember his Nandini alright, but the evil but loving Papa Malhotra is dead set to call her his imagination, do it so many times that he himself is compelled to think that Nandini is nothing but his own imagination.
Smart that guy is. But no one is as smart as you!
This plot is enthralling and you writing it is the cherry on top, and on the whole damn freaking cake. No words of appreciation are ever enough.
I actually always read the 10th chapter once again, before reading the new chapter as it gives me those feels
Don't you ever think I won't be here to read this story. No matter how long it takes, a year or 10 years, I'll always check the forum for your updates and won't leave until it's done, if it's the last thing I do on this forum!
Keep on with this pace, and I guess I will need 10 years after all😉😆
Haayyye Maar DALALALALALALAAA!!!!
Manik and his characterisation, his pain, his way of communicating, those expressions, every freaking thing is so so perfect sometimes I think that Richa Yamini is working undercover here!
You be the GOD!
Someone save me from my madness, but it seems I'm in tooo deep!😉

Haha, you and me both! 😆

I know! And I understand. In fact, your comments make me feel high and after reading them, I really try to make that reunion happen as soon as I can, but what to do? Something or else always makes me feel that if the things aren't explained well, the essence and the reasons of the story will be missed.

Ah, Manik...I am just going to tell you, let the whole scene play, the next-se-next wale chapter main you will see what and how many things are happened to him, with him...

Aww, you think I am as smart as Manik? Dude, THAT is a compliment, coz you and I know how freaking smart that guy is! 😲

@Bold:- I have a silly smile on my face right now that has the ability to scare anyone away! Thank you, that means a lot! 😳

Haha, I know what you mean, I do the same with the scene I have written down. I have their whole interaction written down, all ready and I happen to read it after posting the chapters, to see how far away I am from posting that one. 😆

Awww, that so sweet and kind of you to say that. But don't worry, I am not going to test your, others and mine patient for that long. 😳

And dude, do you think Manik will let me live if I keep him that long away from his Nandini? I may be the 'God' of this story for ya, but Manik Malhotra bhi koi kaam nahi...❤️

@Red:- Dude, you have maar dala me...You always give me such huge compliments but this one is something else! First, you say I can write Manik and understand him enough to know him and his reactions, emotions and all. <- That is something that makes me jump and feel so much of pride.

And then you say that I know him as much as Richa Yamini does! <- ☺️ *Khushi-ke-mare-dead* I have always said that I have done Ph.D. on him, but you saying that confirms that like nothing else could! Thank you! So MUCH! 🤗

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#230

Originally posted by: dpsdevuu
amazing story
i want to tell you that you are an amazing writer.

continue soon

eagerly waiting for the update

LOVE YOU...

Welcome! 😳

I am so glad that you read and enjoyed the story. Thank you so much for your sweet words!

I am just updating in a few hours. I hope you will find it as good as the others!

🤗