PART- 25 U WILL LEAVE ME...!!
Hello everyone ...!! I am back with the next chapter...!! And I know I am again late...!! But what to do my exams are on my head and I am really busy with my studies...!!
So first of all a big big thanks to all those who commented...!! It feels great to read the comments...!! And I never expected such a response...!! Really happy...!! And belated merry Christmas to all...!!
So let's move on to the story...!!
Happy reading...!!😊😊
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Cabir abhi manik and nandini... were in one car with nandini in manik's arms on the back seat... they were trying to wake her up...!! But sprinkling water on her face...!! She was coming to senses... but then she started breathing really fast...!! She was sinking...!! All of them were tensed for her...!!
Seeing her condition... abhi was getting all the more tensed...!!
Abhi: cabir please drive fast...!! We need to reach hospital as soon as possible...!! Her condition is just getting worse...!! We might loose her...!!
( As manik heard abhi he just said ...)
Manik: abhi...!! please don't say like this nothing will happen to her...!! I will not let her...( Manik couldn't complete his sentence... as saying the word ' die ' pierced his heart...) she cannot leave me...!!( then she continued looking at nandini) Nandini wake up...!! Look we will reach soon...!! Please don't this to me...!! ( tears were coming out of his eyes... and nandini was still sinking... ) please nandini...!! I know I was wrong in leaving u...!! But please... u don't do this...!!
( looking at nandini's condition abhi said...)
Abhi: manik she is loosing her breathe...!! Just rub her near her chest...!! ( then abhi held her wrist to check her pulse ... which was dropping miserably...) we need to reach as soon as possible...! Her pulse rate is dropping... she needs oxygen...!! Nai toh she will die...!!
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And this was it manik's mind went blank...!! As he heard ' she will die' he was shocked...!! He was not able to think anything...!! He was rubbing her chest...! But still her condition was the same...!! And before he could register his own actions...!! His face leaned closer to her pale white face...!! And his warm breathe fanned her heavy breaths... and finally his mouth touched hers...!! To give her mouth to mouth oxygen...!! And as he did that abhi and cabir were shocked...!! Shocked even to react to wat was actually happening...!! But for manik right now only her life was important...!! He didn't wanted to loose her this time...!! His mind was occupied with just one thought and it was ' she needed oxygen...' so Manik repeatedly blowed air in her mouth 3- 4 times...!! And she was getting better...!! Her breathe was becoming normal...!! And finally they reached the hospital...!! And in a jiffy manik took her in his arms...!! And ran inside the hospital shouting for the doctor...!!
Mukti who was in another car along with navya dhruv and alya...!! Had already called up to the doctor and informed him about what happened and about her condition...!! So he came and ordered nurse and ward boy to take her to a private room...!! And manik was not ready to leave her hand...!! He was really very scared of loosing her...!! This mere thought of loosing her was killing him...!! Some how... cabir controlled manik... and finally he let her go...!! Then doctor faced them... and said sternly...!!
Dr. Raghav: how can u all be so careless with her...!! I had warned u all the last time also when she was brought here... that next time we won't be able to save her...!! But still...!! I told u all to take it slow with her...! She is a very sensitive case...! I warned u all to keep her away form alcohol and drugs...!! And u young man...!!( he said looking at abhi) I trusted u in her case...!! That u will prove to be a better doctor than me...!! As she is ur sister...! But u proved that people of ur generation can only show aggression...!! No sense of responsibility...!! Firstly she herself is very aggressive...!! And then u all...!! I m sorry...!! To say u have really disappointed me today...!! And if this time something happens to her...!! This will be totally ur fault...!! U all will be responsible...!! But I will try my best...!!
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Saying so the doctor left...!! And they all were really tensed for nandini...!! Manik's tears were not stopping...!! He was blaming himself for her condition once again...!! And all of them were just silently praying for her .. to get well soon...!!
( how strange...!! Is this naa...!! The last time when they were here they were all praying that it's better she dies.. as atleast she will be at peace...!! But today... they all are back here but this time they want her to survive...!! For herself...!! For them...!! For their best friend...!! As it's because of them that today their love story is at this stage...!! Both of them...would have been happily living their life...!! If He was not bound to protect his friends...!! Nandini would have never felt alone...!! If they had trusted him...!! If they had trusted their friendship...!! She wouldn't have lost her family...!! her smile...!! Her amms...!! And herself...!! If they would have believed in their friendship...!! If they would have believed in Fab 5...!!
But as it's said...!! What's done... is done...!! So they cannot change the past but can surely hope for a better future...!! A future where nandini will be happy...!! Where manik will not be guilty...!! Where they will not be manik and nandini but will be MaNan...!!)
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After 2 hours...!!
Everyone was in their own thoughts...!! Just then the room's door openned...!! Abhi And Raghav came out...!! Though Raghav was angry on abhi but still allowed him to treat her because he was the one who has been taking care of her medical treatment since past 1 week and he knows her medication and everything...!!
As they both came out... abhi was having tears in his eyes...!! Manik saw this...and he just rushed to the doctor...!!
Manik: doctor how is she...?? Is she fine...??
Doctor : she is better...!! But still unconscious...!! It's good that u thought of giving her CPR...!! Normal pulse rate was really a necessity for her treatment...!! We will get to know her exact condition once she gains her consciousness...!!
Manik: when will she gain her senses...??
Doctor: it totally depends on her body system...!! Till when the medicines affect her...!! It may take 2 hrs... 6 hrs... or even a day...!! And seeing her condition since long time I can say that she may take time...!! Don't loose hope...!! Be strong everything will be fine...!!
Saying so the doctor left...!! And abhi was also trying to move from there but Mukti could hold of his hand...!! To stop him...!! And as she did so... abhi just hugged her tight...!! And cried...!!
Mukti: abhi she will be fine them why are u crying now...?? Please u can't falk weak... please...!!
Abhi: Mukti...!! She is in so much pain...!! U know when I was treating her naa...!! It felt like I was getting numb...!! Then some how... we made her puke the alcohol...!! She was unconscious...!! But still was so restless...!! Then u know she cried in her unconciousness...!! Tears were flowing from her closed eyes...!! It was getting so difficult for me to treat her...!! I was feeling so helpless...!!
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As abhi cried and described her condition...!! Manik was also feeling helpless...!! He was staring at her from the glass door... her pale face... covered with oxygen mask...!!
Time was passing...!! And manik was sitting there along with cabir and navya...!! As manik had send others back...!! As abhi was feeling really low... so Mukti went with him...!! Alya and dhruv went to clean up her house...!! But cabir stayed back for him... as he needed somebody for his support and navya stayed there if on case nandini wakes up...!! So she may talk to her... as in this one week... navya had somewhere succeed in building that old bond of friendship with her all over again...!!
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Next day morning 9 am-
Manik was sitting near nandini on the stool holding her hand...!! Cabir and navya had gone to the hospital canteen...!! To bring some coffee for him...!!
He was just looking at her face...!! Which was dull pale...!! He didn't sleep the whole night he kept looking at her...!! Remembering the old times...!!
He felt her moving her hand... and then he saw her eyes moving...!! He was happy that she was finally waking up...!! He felt like he was alive again... as she was gaining her senses...!!
He then called her name...!! And then pressed the button near her bed to call the doctor...!!
He got up and caressed her face...!!
Manik: nandini...!! Nandini...!! Are u ok...?? Are feeling better...??
( She finally openned her eyes...!! When she heard her name from his mouth...!! It gave her an unknown peace... a warmth...!! Warmth of his love...!! Though he had taken her name yesterday many times... but she was not in her senses... to feel that love...!! But today... listening her name in his voice... on gaining her senses... gave her peace... which she didn't felt in these 2 years...!! But then reality hit her and she looked at him with blankness in her eyes...!!
She moved his hand from her face... using her left hand...!! And tried getting up...!! And then manik... understanding her...!! Didn't try to touch her face again but then seeing her struggling just helped her in sitting ...!!
Just then doctor entered and asked manik to leave... as he need to check her...!!
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Outside the room... manik told navya and cabir that she is awake... as they returned from canteen and forced him to have some coffee...!! He didn't wanted to but for them he drank the coffee...!!
Just as he finished doctor came out... and said...!!
Doctor: she is much better...!! She has really improved...!! The drug content is zero in her body...!! This is the first time... I have seen such good results in her case...!! It's just she needs to be stress free...!! Just keep going with ur process it's actually working...!! And... and... I m sorry...!!!
Manik: sorry why doctor...?? Is she ok...?? What happened just now u Saif that she is fine...?? Then what happened...?? ( Manik spoke in one breath...)
Doctor: aree...!! Aree...!! Cool down...!! I wanted to apologise for yesterday...!! I just scolded u all without even checking her progress once...!!! I even need to apologise to abhimanyu...!! For behaving like this with him...!!
As doctor said this... abhi who had just arrived along with others... came near him and said...!!
Abhi: no uncle...!! U don't need to apologise...!! U said all that because u concerned for her...!! And next te we will be extra careful with her...!!
After some more talks doctor left and all of them moved inside her room...!! Only to find her trying to get up from the bed...!! Then... manik came forward to stop her...!! And said...!!
Manik: nandini what are u doing...!! U are still not fine... if u needed something u should have called us naa...!! Come on now lie down...!!
( all of them were looking at him with shocked faces as how can he behave so normally with her...!! Nandini was also seeing his care for her...!! She was after a long time feeling that someone is there by her side...!! But again that past came in front of her...!! And that fear that he will again leave her...!! She just jerked away from him...!! And again tried to get up...!! But he stopped her again...!! Then she furiously said...!!
Nandini: why are u here...?? What do u want now...?? Why are u showing this fake concern... because eventually U WILL LEAVE ME ...!! so just stop all this and leave right now...!!
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So here I end this part...!! Finally finished...!! Now keep thinking what will manik say to calm her down...?? Will they be able to become MaNan from manik and nandini...?? Will the future they are wishing for can ever be true...?? Will she ever be able to say... that ' u will never leave leave me...' instead of ' u will leave me...'
To know the answers keep reading further...!! And keep commenting...!! Will be waiting waiting for waiting for ur views...!! Criticism is more then welcome...!!
AMAAYA...!!😊😊
Edited by AMAAYA - 9 years ago
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