Manan ff [BRUTAL LOVE][LINK TO THREAD 2 PAGE 1] - Page 44

Originally posted by: millie17

D updt ws really cute n lvly...
Manik managed to stop hr frm crying using his funny acts...
N riya is such a cutie pie...
Waitng fr d tim.whn manan wl kno about ech othr ompletely..

Plz continue soon...
N thnx fr d pm

thnk gitu Di !

Originally posted by: bhagupur

Awesome update. .

Manik is reached her home.

Riya is so cute. ..

Manik ko ek or moka mil gya. .

Nandni ko height tease krne ka.

Riya manik moments was cute.

Nandni manik tou ek hi tarha baat karte hain..

Gusse main ja jhgda main.

Overall nice chapter.

Thanks for pm.

Stay blessed dear.

Love. .

Jyoti.

thanks jyoti di :)

Originally posted by: tas456

Awesome update dear

Wish she will open up to him soon

Will be waiting eagerly for your next update

Tqvm for the pm dear

Take care and God bless

thanks dear !

Originally posted by: Kuushi

Awesome update..the angry monster wants to know the reason..the very next moment he laughs hysterically and that puts a smile on nandini..it isn't easy to share the pain since they are still strangers and there is also a fear that people will judge you..aww he picked up riya and gave the teddy bear so cute..finally he knows the nickname given by her and before he could say anything she escaped..loved everybit of the chapter..eagerly waiting for the next update ...please continue soon and thanku for the pm:)

thnku so much :)

Originally posted by: DikshaAnand

Zindagi ki yehi h khas baat !!!

Ki roz panapte hn naye zazbat !!!

Pta bhi nhi chalta ki kab kuch log humari zindagi ban jate hn !!

Or kab ho jati ek naye pyar ki shuruat !!!!!

Lines were beautiful
Riya is so cute
Manik is a cute monster

awww
.
thnku :)

Originally posted by: mini_manan

Starting me to laga kuch senti sa update hoga..
But how could i forgot jab manil and nandini saath me ho to comic to hoga hi..hehehe
But overall i to enjoyed it alot..seriously..
Loved it
Cont soon dear.

hehe !!
even I too planed to wrote something senty ...
but wrote ekdm against it :)

Originally posted by: arshuaar

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">awesome...
Manan...
thank you for the wonderful update...
thanx for PM</font>😊

thanku

Originally posted by: Afila1993

Wowww fantastic update sweety...

Full of manan...

Thier nokjok was superb...

Manik become soft and vulnerable only with nandu...

He needs to gain her trust to open up...

Bt literally he is gaining it...

Manik riya and nandu covo was cute...

Naughty manik never leave a chance to annoy nandu hehehe...

The poem was as always over whelming dr

Sorry for the late comment...

Ihav got sum university works dr tat y sorry

Waiting for the next update Dr...

Thanks for the pm sweety...

Always stay blessed nd happy...

With lots of love and hugs..

Afiii

thnks afii Di ..
luv uh too :)

Originally posted by: suji_suji

Hi,

Sorry I am late..
Update was superb..

Manan is coming closer without their knowledge..
And ria was cute..

And also manik telling cchhoottii si was really funny..

Tanq for pm..
Pls update soon..

Love
Suji :-)

hey ..
no need to be sorry ..
its OK ..
thanks ...

love
akanksha

PART 11

NANDINI POV -:

Manik came downstairs all smirking ...he looked towards me and winked at me and I gave him a deadly glare and turned my face ..

He made his way to cabir who was busy in giving him all kinds of suspicious expressions ..

But manik didn't reacted a bit on it ..

" manik beta ..upar kyun chale gaye the .."??" chachi asked him lovingly ...

Ayiappa ...riya tou riya ..chachi ko bhi pata liya is qutub minar ne ..!!

" wo chachi ..mein nandini apni FRIEND se milne gaya tha ..." manik answered her deliberately stretching the word friend just to annoy me ...and receive those frowns and irritated expressions of mine ...and on which chachi smiled .

" F r I E ND ..ye kab hua ??" I murmured to myself having weird expressions on my face ..

And I listened him chuckling ...I quickly composed myself and changed my expressions ...

I looked towards cabir and navya .

cabir was busy in shooting draggers on manik...I don't know why ??

While navya was busy in cooking something in her head ..

" oh shit !! meri job .." suddenly navya shouted ...picked up the car keys and left in a hurry ..

I glanced at the watch and she was late for job ..i smiled to my own on this and sighed ..

I shifted my gaze on manik wHo was busy buttering chachi ...

Ayiappa ..what the hell is going on in his head ?

Suddenly maniks phone buzzed and maybe he received a message ...

I saw his expressions changing into the angry ones ...he fisted his hands ..and pissed his teeths ..and without anything he just left fom there ...and cabir too left after him biding good bye to chachi ..

kamal h ..aise hi chala gaya ...koi ni ..kuch kam hoga .." chachi said to herself smilingly and left for the kitchen ..

But I was confused ...

Why he left just like that ?? aise hi ??

What was there in the message ??

Sometime before he was smiling and was busy annoying me and suddenly he left ...

I remembered how cutely he handeled riya and a smile crept on my lips ...

But then I remembered our previous encounters ..

His smirks ..his anger ..that kiss ...his or mine ..?? .. I don't know but that weird kiss ..from cheek to neck ..and his BRUTAL LOVE ..

I was curious to know the reason why for him love is BRUTAL ?

Why he is so weird ..like so azeeb ...?

His life ..it is just like a mystery ...I don't know why ..but i just want t know about him ...

His life is like a puzzle ...the way he do things is so confusing ...

And I feel that even he don't know how to solve that puzzle ...or maybe he don't want to do it ...

I remembered how that day he defined love ?? that hatred ..that anger ...and that pain in his eyes ...that was clearly visible in his eyes ...

The way he ..said " that someday this love of yours na will be crushed with so much of BRUTALITY by this cruel world .."

That defeated tone of him .

I so wanted to help him .

I don't know why but I wanted to share his pain ...

I actually want to show him that love is not BRUTAL ..its BEAUTIFUL ...

I don't know why I am so curious and why he affects me to this extent ?...but he does ..

He just make me go insane ...

The way he do the things do nothing just increase my curiosity to know about him ...

And now also ..the way he left .

Huh !!!

Ayiappa ..this chalta firta qutub is definitely getting on my nerves ..

I sighed chucking my thoughts and departed to my room ...

...

MANIKS POV -:

I came back to my home ...all frustrated ...

That bloody nyonica why she just cant let me me in peace ...

What the hell is her problem ?

I am not gonna let her get even a one rupee from my property or my dads property ...

She will have to suffer her own deeds ...

I slid my phone out from my pocket and diled my lawyers number ." what the hell are you doing ..? listen ..nyonica should not get even a single rupee .she cant claim my property ..." I shouted as he picked up the phone

" sir ...but wo nyonika ...sir her case is also strong ...the divorce papers are not their with us ..so she can claim " the lawyer said stammering ..

" listen I don't know anything ..just make sure she will suffer ..she feel humiliated ..the same way my dad felt ..." I shouted and cut the phone and threw it on the bed ...

This nyonika ..what she wants now ??

I frustratedly banged my hand on the wall and left out a groan ...

I didn't noticed when the blood started oozing from my knuckles ...as the pain inside my heart was much ..much more deep and much more painful ...then it ..

I listened cabir chuckle from the back and sighed and sat on the bed placing my both hands on my forehead..

Cabir came towards me and said " tu ni sudhrega" and left out a defeated sigh ..

He took the first aid box from the cupboard and sat beside me ...he took my hand in his and started dressing it ..

" I m waiting ...jab bolna ho you can .." he said in between the dressing.

He completed the dressing in few minutes and said looking at the bandage .." hm !! abi tou h isme or h..so tu doosra hat bi todle mein kar dunga " he said sarcastically but little angrily ..

I looked at him and for the first time in my life ...not actually first time but this happened very rarely ...I noticed tears in cabirs eyes ...because of me ..

He turned his face and blinked away the tears as I looked at him ..

He again turned towards me and was about to say something...but I hugged him ..tightly ...cursing me for my behavior ..

" sorry .." I whispered slowly and he chuckled ..

He wiped his tears and said .." ni tu kyun sorry bol rha h ...its ok ...I just luuv to see you like this .."

"Cabir " I tried to cut him off but he was in no mood to listen this time ..

He stood up and shouted " what cabirr ..? kya cabir ..its ok manik .i just love to see you like this ..see your life totally messed up ..see you totally messed up ..fir nyonika ne kuch kara hoga ..and you reacted ...I am tired ...thak chukka hoon tujhe samjha samjha ke that that give your life a chance ...give yourself a chance ..but nhi nyonika wo jayda important h ...that why you always do the way she want ...mein to kuch hoon hi nhi tere liye ..." he completed and I was taken aback with his sudden outburst ...

" cabir esa ni h ..its not like that but I cant let that lady ruin my life again .." I stated helplessly ..

" oh ..seriously manik ?? vaise to teri life is perfect right ??" he mocked me ...

" aj tou tu form mein h .." I aaccepted my defeat and sat back on the bed .

Cabir chuckled on this and mocked me again " now ..who is changing the topic ??"

And I smiled sleepishly ...

Cabir sat beside me and asked " ab bta kya hua ..?"

I sighed and started " wo !! nyonika ..she is claiming on the property ..actualy the problem is we don't have any legal divorce papers ...with us ...so according to the law ..she is claiming herself as dads wife and is claiming the property ..."..

"And I cant believe ...how much this lady can stoop low ?? she is asking for the property of that person ...who has died because of her ..." I said and laughed sarcastically.

"And cabir because of her ..dad never loved me .."I said painfully and cabir patted my on my thigh ...

"I have literally died for care ..affection and love for my whole life ..." I stated tears forming on my eyes ...

"And now ...its time for her to suufer ...i am not gonna let her get even a pounce from my property ..."I said wiping my tears harshily and with so much of hatred ...and left from there ..

" manik that lady had made you believe that there is no love in this world ..you are living your life just to destroy her ...I so hope you will find a new reason to live .."cabir murmured to himself helplessly and left behind him ...

...

pyar ne ummeed di ..usi ne dard diya ...

pyar ne zindagi ko maut se badthar bana diya ...

ab zindagi ka koi maksat nahi ...

sirf us insan ko barbad karna h...

jisne pyar jaise alfaaz ko ...sharminda kiya !!!

...

NANDINI POV -:

I reached the college and made my way to the class ...i was walking in the corridor and I saw manik ..

Should I ask him ??

No again he will be angry ...but ...want to know ...

I reached to him and said ." hii !!"

He didn't replied and just gave me a sarcastic yet weird look ...

" manik woh tum ..kal ese achanak ..i mean why did you left suddenly just like that ...?" I asked him hesitantly .

I saw his face expression changing into angry ones ...his jaws tightened ...hr grabbed my shoulders ..and shouted "listen ! this is thee last time I am telling you ...stop interfering in my life ..its not your bloody business ..samajhti kya ho tum apne apko han ...?? what do you think of yourself ...? Mother india ho ?...listen !! just saty away ok ?" he said and left from there ...

I wiped my tears who had already made their way ..out ...

I was hurt by his words ...

Ok fine ..!! if he didn't want to share its ok ...

I will not ask him ...

But this is not way ...

One day you are behaving so sweet with me ...and on the very next you are talking to me as I didn't even exist in your life ...

But manik is right ...

Who am I ?? No one ...

Arghh !! stop thinking about him...you are here for study and just do that only ...

I entered my class and sat on an empty bench ...

Manik too entered the class after sometime ..and I didn't even reacted a bt ..though I did noticed him ..

He sat behind me much to my surprise ...as he always you to sit at the back ...

Suddenly mukti came running to me ...and was panting heavily .." nandini ...nandini ...wo ..navya ..."

Phew !!!! done finally ...

Ok so ..nyonika ..kamini ..huh !! awww ..my manbir bond ..i so miss them in the show ...and even pata ni when cv are planning to show my real manik ...:😭( anyways ...

What happened to navya ..did harshad did something ?? ..to know stay tuned ..😉

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