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mousumi

@crazy_sonu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#321

u knw what...
maine avi saree parts pre.. nd yesss i really like the theme.. the base of ur story...
one side manik who lost faiith in love coz of his parents.

nd other side broken nandini.. she is jst exmple of today's students who r force to study in some sttrem that they don't loved jst becoz of parents...

bt here nandini conditions r worst... her mom committee suiside nd dad in coma.. nd she is blamed for all this..

she is broken from heart to hope...

waiting for nxt part..

nd plz if possible then sent me pm

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AKANKSHA

@Akanksha29100

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Posted: 10 years ago

#322

Originally posted by: suji_suji
Nice :)

thnx dear :)

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anya

@anya21

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Posted: 10 years ago

#323

will comment later...

now feeling sleepy...

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sabi_anamika

@sabi_anamika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#324

emotional chapter

waiting next chapi

update soon

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AKANKSHA

@Akanksha29100

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Posted: 10 years ago

#325

Originally posted by: crazy_sonu
u knw what...
maine avi saree parts pre.. nd yesss i really like the theme.. the base of ur story...
one side manik who lost faiith in love coz of his parents.

nd other side broken nandini.. she is jst exmple of today's students who r force to study in some sttrem that they don't loved jst becoz of parents...

bt here nandini conditions r worst... her mom committee suiside nd dad in coma.. nd she is blamed for all this..

she is broken from heart to hope...

waiting for nxt part..

nd plz if possible then sent me pm

aww ..
thanks dear ..
glad uh liked it !!!

yeah will send you pm ...
love
akanksha!!

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anya

@anya21

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Posted: 10 years ago

#326

awesome update!!!

loved it...

cabir nd navya's convo was nice...

dat jerk harshad...

aww...how cabir punched harshad...

atlast navya laughed...felt really happiee...

nd in cls room nandini was fully disturbed by manik's behavior nd harshad nd navya...

all those thought were fighting in her mind...

she didin't even listening d cls...

wen sir came...she stood numb...

wat sir made her go weak...

she taught that she is responsible 4r her mother's death...

nd aftr her mother died...her father slipped in coma...

just bcs she don't want 2 do engineering?

is dis a reason 4r wat her mother died?

wen she was running aimlessly she heard a guitar sound...

nd she moved towards dat direction...

she don't want music 2 enter in her ife again...

bt y?

@ atlast she ended in canteen...

there she saw manik...who was playing guitar...

bt she can't stand there 4r long...

bcs she don't want again music 2 enter in her life...

but y she is running away 4rm music?

is d music is responsible 4r her mother's death?

excited 4r d nxt part...

cont soon...

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AKANKSHA

@Akanksha29100

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Posted: 10 years ago

#327

Originally posted by: sabi_anamika
emotional chapter
waiting next chapi
update soon

thanks dear :)

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AKANKSHA

@Akanksha29100

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Posted: 10 years ago

#328

Originally posted by: anya21
awesome update!!!
loved it...
cabir nd navya's convo was nice...
dat jerk harshad...
aww...how cabir punched harshad...
atlast navya laughed...felt really happiee...
nd in cls room nandini was fully disturbed by manik's behavior nd harshad nd navya...
all those thought were fighting in her mind...
she didin't even listening d cls...
wen sir came...she stood numb...
wat sir made her go weak...
she taught that she is responsible 4r her mother's death...
nd aftr her mother died...her father slipped in coma...
just bcs she don't want 2 do engineering?
is dis a reason 4r wat her mother died?
wen she was running aimlessly she heard a guitar sound...
nd she moved towards dat direction...
she don't want music 2 enter in her ife again...
bt y?
@ atlast she ended in canteen...
there she saw manik...who was playing guitar...
bt she can't stand there 4r long...
bcs she don't want again music 2 enter in her life...
but y she is running away 4rm music?
is d music is responsible 4r her mother's death?
excited 4r d nxt part...
cont soon...

awww ..
thnku dear ...
will update soon ..

love
akanksha !!

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AKANKSHA

@Akanksha29100

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Posted: 10 years ago

#329

PART 9

NANDINIS POV -:

I just ran out of there ...i was running from the biggest dream of my life which has turned the worst nightmare of mine ..MUSIC ...

While running I collided with a table in the canteen ...and because of it a chair fell down ...

But I didn't paid any heed to it ...

As for now I just want to crash on my bed and cry my heart out ...

I wanted peace ...

I reached the parking area and just took my car and left for my home ...

I messaged navya about my leaving and told her that I got a headache ..yet I knew she will understand like always!!!!

I entered my home ...chachi asked me what happened ??..but I just rushed to my bedroom ...i shut the door after me and collapsed on the floor and cried hard ...

Sometimes crying is good !!yeah it is ...

Because it reduces the unbearable pain ...

Tears flow from our eyes as pain is flowing out from our HEART !!

Afer sometime I got up and moved to the storeroom ..

I reached there and opened the cupboard ...and here it is ...

MY BROKEN GUITAR ...

I remembered how that day whwn mom died papa threw it on the floor sand it got broken ...

I left out a painful laugh remembering that day ...

It was indeed a horrible day !!!

I actually lost my everything ...every damn thing that day ...

I lost my mom !! I almost my father !! and most importantly ..i lost my DREAMS ..I lost my life MY MUSIC ...

That day only this guitar was not BROKEN ..

That day my dreams were broken ..they were shattered ..

My heart was broken ..

My soul was broken ..

And it is broken till today ...

And here I am trying my best to fix everything ...but its just not happening ...

I am tired of running ...running away from myself ...

Thak chuki hn ...pretend kar kar ke ..that its all okay ..when its all messed up ...

By now my tears had been stopped a long ago ...as they are also tired of flowing ...

Wo hasi sapne ...Wo saji manjile ...

Sab toot gaye ...

Dil mein junoon tha ..Sab ka sath tha ...

Sab peeche choot gaye ...

I looked at the broken strings ..and smiled ...syill they are like this desperate to to ring ...

I wiped those dried tears from my cheeks and sat on the floor holding that guitar in my hand..

MANIKS POV -:

I was playing my guitar in the canteen ... I love music as in my life music is the only thing which gives me peace ..

I was playing there and people were enjoying ..

But I got distaracted by the sudden thud sound ..i looked towards the direction and saw nandini running out ...

Why is she running like this as if she has saw some ghost ...??

What happened ??

That boy ..has he done something again ??

What is wrong ??

Is ok ??

I was curious to know ..

I got up from the table on which I was sitting and ran after her ...

I followed her and saw her leaving from college in her car ..

When she was opening the door ..i noticed her tears ...

Was she crying ?? ofcourse she was !!

I don't know why seeing her like this pierced my heart ...

I never felt like this before how I feel with her ..

Something different ..something new ...i don't know what it is ..but it is something ...!!!

Yesterday too ..it was a very different feeling ...

In the furniture shop I was very close to her ...

I so wanted to kiss her ...until she go out of breathe ..

If she wouldn't have stopped I would have definately kissed her ...

But what she said that she won ..lyk seriously ??? stupid girl ...

Today too I wanted her to share about that guy too me ..

I don't know why ?? but I just wanted to know ...

I wanted her to tell me ...

My chain of thoughts was broken as I listened cabir calling me from back ..

I turned around and saw him with navya ...

" bro ..whats up ?? tu idhar kya kar rha h ??" he asked me ...

And even I don't know what I was doing here ..

Umm ..i was following her ..but why ??

Why does she affects me ??

I cant tell cabir that I m here following nandini ..so I further asked him " meri chod ...tu bta tu yahan kya kar rha h ??"

And he seemed distracted ...

" woh !! nandini messaged navya that she got a headache ..so she left ...and she took the car with her ..so I m just going to drop navya " he said ..

When did she got a headache ??

And she was tou crying ...

Then why did she lied ..??

Now I was more curious to know ?? what happened ??

I need to see her ..actually I wanted to see her ...

" han !! tou ..come I w2ill also come with you guyz ...you know she is my classmate ..i mean she was fine then all of a sudden what happened ?? so I will also come with u ppl nto see her " I said so innocently that even I was shocked by my tone ...

Navya agreed inwstantly and cabir gave me a suspicious look ...which was almost expected ..

As Manik Manhotra never cares for anyone !!

Before he asked me something I quickly grabbed my keys and got in ..in my car ...

Cabir took the passenger seat ...and navya sat at the back ...

While sitting inside cabir gave me a what -are-u-upto-look ?? but I ignored it simply and strated driving ...

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We reached her home ...and navya rang the door bell ...

An aunty dressed up in a sky blue salwar and kurti opened the door ...she saw us and greeted us with a smile ...

Maybe she was nandinis mother !!

"chachi yeh cabir h humara dost ..and yeh manik h ..nandu ka classmate ..." Navya introduced us ...

Chachi smiled and welcomed us in ...and then left for the kitchen for making something ...

I saw navya going behind chachi..she stopped her " chachi nandu kahan h ??" she asked

chachi...

Chachi said nothing amd just blinked her eyes and smiled sadly ...

Navya too gave her a helpless look ...

What is happening dude ??

Where is nandini ??

My curiosity was just increasing to know where is she ..

I wanted to know the reason behind her tears ...

Huh !!

But wait ...again ...arghh !! why I am curious to know about her ??

This girl is definitely getting on my nerves ..

She is driving me insane !!

This is so not me !!

But I chucked those thoughts as now I just wanted to see nandini !!

Navya came back and sat with us ...she started chatting with cabir on some of her subjects and cabir too got engrossed with her completely ignoring my presence ..

What the hell ??

I need to do something ...nandini where are you ??

Then I saw a beautiful ..very cutee little girl coming out of a room holding a doll in her hand ..she was licking her thumb and seemed confused ...

She came towards navya and patted on her shoulder with tiny hands to gram her attention...

Navya turned towards her and smiled seeing her ...and quickly adjusted that girl in her lap ...

"didi ..ye log kon hn ??" she asked innocently ..

"so cabir and manik meet riya ..." She introuced her ...

And cabir shook hands with her and I just passed a little smile ...

She got down of navyas lap and adjusted herself on the front sofa beside me and started playing with her doll..

Wait !!!

She can help me ...she can tell me where is nandini ??

Think manik think ...how ...??

And suddenly an idea stucked on my mind ..

I smirked and got up ...

"navya !! I am just coming ..."I informed her ..and made my way to the kitchen..

I entered the kitchen and saw chachi cooking something ..

She saw me and asked "aree ...kuch chaiye tha kya manik beta ??? "

"Nhi chachi wo!!! Mein hath dhone...umm ...hand wash karne aya tha ..." I said trying my best to sound genuine ...and said with a smile ...

"achaaa !!! achaa!! Beta ..wahan pe dho lo !! " she said pointing towards towards the wash - basin ...

"hmm" I said twitching my lips in a smile ...

I moved towards the basin and saw chachi again getting engrossed in cooking ...

Finally !! huh !! I got the opportunity ...

I quickly opened the fried and to my luck I got as chocolate inside ...I quickly grabbed it ...keeping in my mind that chachi wont saw me ...

And she didn't ..

I slid the chocolate inside my pocket and then washed my hands ...ofcourse noticing that chachi must see me ...

I came out of the kitchen passing chachi a cheesy smile ...

Well done !!!!! I mentally patted my shoulders for being such a smart thief !!

And then made my way to execute what I thought ..

I came back to the hall and saw navya and cabir still chatting and laughing on god knows what ?

"But good for me" I murmured to myself and smirked ...

I looked towards riya ..she was still busy playing with that doll and was shaking it with her tiny tiny fingers ...

I smiled seeing her !! she was cute !!

I sat beside her and said "hi " trying to sound very exited ...

" hey !!"she said looking towards me and again got engrossed playing with her doll..

What the hell ??

She is ignoring me ...the manik manhotra ..

But I need to do this ..

I want to see nandini !!

"how are you ?? " I said again seeking her attention ...

And finally she placed her doll aside and noticed me ..

" I m fine !! how ale uh ??" she asked me with a smile ..

" I m good !!! ..woh !! will you do me a favour ?? " I asked her very innocently surprising myself ..

She cringed her eyebrows cutely and the raised her eyebrows asking me what ??

" wo !! can you tell me where is nandini ??"I asked her ...in a hope ..she may tell me ..and quickly slid that chocolate out of pocket and waved it infront of her ...

She saw it and her eyes started sparkling ..but all of a sudden she gave me a angry glare ...and said " this is my chocolate ..navya di gave me ...apne kyun chulaya ??"

And I swear for the first time in my life I got scared ...

I smiled faintly ...just like a studid person...murmured a sorry .. and pleaded her by my eyes to tell me where is nandini ??

She changed that angry expression and smiled again ...

" its okk !!! ..nadini di is upstails ...left side second wala room .." she told me slowly ...

I grinned like a kid ...on knowing finally where is nandini ...

I got up quickly and was about to rush upstairs but felf someone pulling my coat ..

I looked down and saw riya pulling my coat with her little little fingers ..

I knelt down and asked her " what ?? " ..

" don't forget !! to bring me chocolate next time ..!! its due .." she said and ran back to her room holding her doll ..

I smiled heartily ..on that ..

And then made my way upstairs noticing cabir and navya that they wont see me ..

I reached her room ...but she was not their ...

Then where is she ??

Oh god!! What the hell ...

I left that room ..

I searched in other rooms but she was not their ..

I stopped near the stairs thinking ..where is she ??

And that's when I listened the sound of guitar ..

Someone was trying its best to play it ..but the voice was really harsh !!

I followed the sound ..

I reached towards a room ...and peeped in ..

And what I saw really pierced mmy heart and made me conbfused ..

I saw nandini ..sitting on the floor trying her best to play that broken guitar ...

There were dried tears on her face and her eyes were quite swollen ..maybe because of crying ...

But I don't know why ??

It hurted me to see her like that !!

I finally composed myself and knocked ...

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Phew !!! oh my god !!! how can I write so long ?? I am surprised by myself ...!! I hope that still I am not giving you regular updates but ...I am trying my best to give you long ones ...

Ohk !!! so whats gonna happen now ?? is nandini gonna tell manik every thing ?? will manik ..ber able to brought music in her life ??..how will nandini react on seeing him ?? to know next ..stay tuned !!!

Guyz thank you so much for your appreciation !!! but on serious note ...last update response was really very as compared to the previous ones ...

Anyways ..!! still love you all ..

Hope you guyz like this update ...

Will be waiting for your views ...

So plz shower your love less your likes and comments ...

LOVE

AKANKSHA !!!

Edited by akkukh - 10 years ago