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Posted: 9 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Tishyy

Wohoo like that ... Brutal love hmmm
Lovely update ... Loved the way u describe the scene
Kudos to you
Hope ur exams are going good ... All the best gal


thnx dear :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: anjanbapidas

<font size="4">It okay . but please post the next part soon . To clear the confusion. thanks for the pm. and next time to pm me. take care😊</font>


yeah dear will continue soon
tc
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
awesome update...loved the update...all their description was unique and somewhat true in each cases...
can't wait to find out what happens next...keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharon.babu

awesome update...loved the update...all their description was unique and somewhat true in each cases...

can't wait to find out what happens next...keep up the good work and continue soon...


thnk you choo much :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
nyc update dear jst love the way u pinned abt love continue soon
manik was hell irrtang nandu by his smrik
waiting fr next update
thnks fr pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: princypriya

nyc update dear jst love the way u pinned abt love continue soon

manik was hell irrtang nandu by his smrik
waiting fr next update
thnks fr pm


thank god u commented
I was waiting for you comment badly ...
was in tension ..ki where did you disappeared suddenly ??
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: princypriya

nyc update dear jst love the way u pinned abt love continue soon

manik was hell irrtang nandu by his smrik
waiting fr next update
thnks fr pm


thank god u commented
I was waiting for you comment badly ...
was in tension ..ki where did you disappeared suddenly ??
anyways
thanku
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
Please update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
hola ...
so as per my promise I m updating today itself ..
hope you guyz like it ...
but guyz ...I m very dissapointed by the amount of comments ...
I m sending lots of pm ...and u guyz are not even commenting ...
it really hurts ...
those who don't want pm ..or I m sending it plz do inform ..coz its takes lots of efforts to pm you ...and you guyz don't even comment ...and silent readers ..plz don't stay silent ...coz your silence kill me ...
nd I hope you don't want me to die ..
otherwise who will update the story ...?? ;)
and a welcome to those who commented on last chapter ...
now chapter ...


PART 4



NANDINIS POV -:



I saw him leaving the class . his answer ...actually not answer his thoughts about love gave me a shock ...


how can someone say about love like that ??
love is so pure ...so beautiful ..
how can someone call it BRUTAL ..??
how can someone hate LOVE ??
What made him say like that ???
I was very curious to know about the reason ...


I need answer ...the way he was saying that ..there was so much of pain in his eyes ...with lots of hatred anger ...


so I decided to follow him ..I took my bag and got up to leave ..mukti gave me a now - where - are - you -going - look ??but I didn't paid any heed to it ..as for now I needed answers ...


I knew I was behaving stupid ...coz I only met this person in the morning ...and I wanted to know that why he hate LOVE ??

lyk seriously ??
have I gone crazy ??
this is so stupid of me ??
but still I want to know the reason ..
I left the class following him ...
I followed him ...he was walking in the corridor stomping his foot in anger ...while walking he also kicked the bench which was placed near him ...

now I was more curious to know ??


'manik ' I called him softly from back ..he didn't turned around and shouted ' Get lost ...' ..' manik why you hate love so much ??? ' I asked him ..and he again shouted ' I said get loosstt ...'
'manik ...' I was about to ask him again but suddenly he just turned around ...grabbed my shoulders and pinned me to the wall ...
his grip was hurting me like hell..


tears started welling up in my eyes due to pain ...


'manik ...I was again shutted up as he placed his finger on my lips 'shhh ...not a single word more ...
don't you dare interfere in my personal life nandini ...
its none of your business that what I speak or what I don't ??its not bloody your business ..he said ..and jerked me away ..and left ..


I was hurt by his words ...

but at the same time I was confused that why I am hurt by his words ??
why his words affects me ??
why I want to share his pain??
..
why he affects me ??
why ??

oh nandu ...just cut the crap ..



I was walking in the corridor thinking all this ..I chucked my thoughts ..I looked up and biggest shock of my life ..my eyes literally widened in shock ..



what the hell is he doing here ??
what the hell is HARSHAD doing here ??
oh god ...
mtlb I was right ..in the morning it was actually harshad ..
but what is he doing here ?? he was to in California ...
now why he is back ??


I need to find navya ...

ayiappa ...how will she react ..when she will got to know that this bloody jerk is back ..
I need to go to her first ...


I quickly ran to civil sector ...I was searching navya ..and I saw her talking to cabir ..smilingly ..


I sighed in relief seeing her..all okay ..

I just moved towards her and hugged her tight ...she was taken aback by my gesture ..but still hugged me back ..
finally I left her ..


I saw cabir was also confused by my reaction ..


'nandini kya hua ?? u okay ??' navya asked me showing her concern ..
'han woh ..navya wo ...' I don't know how to tell her ..how will she react..I can't see her falling apart again ..
maybe navya sensed my inner turmoil ..and in return she just hugged me and spoke


'nandini I know he is back.. and this doesn't make any difference ..believe me ..
he don't affect me anymore ..what effect ?? he don't even matter to me ...
I don't care whether he live or die ???
he was my worst nightmare and Jo mein bhool chuki hn ' she said calmly and with a smile ..


I was so overwhelmed by her answer ..
I knew she is strong ...but this much ..wow
I am so proud of her ...
but how she knows that he is here??


'navya but how do you know that he is here?? I asked curiously..
'nandini he is in my class ' she stated and this amazed me to the core...


mtlb he is in civil sector and she is behaving so calmly ...
I am really proud of her ..


finally we looked towards cabir and he gave us what -are -you-guyz-talking-about-look ?? and we chuckled at his expression .
and then I gave him navya will explain you later look ..


then he asked me about the class ...
and I remembered manik ..
I told him about the fuss ...


and he seemed tensed ...he didn't said anything further and just ran out of there ..leaving me confused..


'what's the crap ??'


pheww ...done ho gya ...
I hv to stop it here as next part will be maniks POV
hope you like it...
plz do comment ...

and I am hell happy as parth is back ...
so will give you an update as gift super soonish
just tell me wt u want ?? BRUTAL LOVE OR LAFZ ..
plz do drop your views ..



now bye
love
akanksha

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Posted: 9 years ago
yeipeee am the first agin to comment fr u r ly story
first i want to ask abt u r exam hw u performed hope u performed well
yes cmg to update it was awesome u pinned very beatifully jst love dit the way u pinned the nandu povs abt manik n navya
nandu was very curiso to knw wt had made to manik tht he thniks abt love in such a way sge dont abt him at all she jst meet him once bt she want to share his pain wth her she want to hell him jst love the way nandu was
nandu was well shock to see tht jerk in the same clg
the first foremost thought gt to her was navya
jst a lovely friend jst want to have her safe
navya was too stonr tht nandu was too shock to see tht side by knwg her everything
cabir was really good friend of manik he knw tht manik needs some one in this condition so he jst gone to search of manik
waiting fr further uodates wt is the nanvya n tht jerk r attached
waiting fr manik povs
jst love the update
continue soon
stay blessed
keep smiling


as u r wish which is possible to u gve tht updtae waiting

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