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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Nice concept dear...interesting
Update fast...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Interesting concept
Plz update the next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
thnku so much guys ... being new to this forum nd so much of luv frm u all means a lot to me ... am a med student so wont be able to update frequently .. plzz bear it
Chapter 1
Manik'pov
i got because of sun rays disturbing my sleep ... smtimes i wonder am the same manik who use to sleep because of tirdness of parties nd nw sleeping because of my work load ... but it feels good .. change is good ... all bcause of my bestie ... my nandini .. srry did i jst my nandini ... umm ya she is my .. as a best frnd .. i guess??... leave it . now i havs to get redy ... but wait its sunday so no office ... yippeee ... i got my tracks on nd called kaka nd asked him fr my juice ...
manik: kaka juice laiye ... mai bahar gym mai hu
Kaka: theek hai baba laya
GYM area
i was very concerned fr my health nd fitness ... being fit keeps me working ..suddenly i felt my tracks sliding dowm my legs ... nd guess who r they The FAB 5
Manik: cabiiirrr
Cabir: kya maine kya kiya ... savari apne saman ke khud zimedar hai ...
Manik: acha abhi batata hu rukk saale ...
both manik nd cabir start running ... nd after there long chasing session both wrr panting heavily ... finally they were tired nd seated near all others were siting ...
Mukti : yer ham log Fab 5 the ... remember sabki kitni lete the
Alya: yes ofcource hw cn we forget that ...
Dhruv: but it was fun guyys ... i miss our college days...
while whole of this convo manik was searching fr one person that is his nandini ... cabir caught him
Cabir: nhi aai vo aaj .. rishab ka chekup tka uske saath gai hai ...
Manik : haan toh theek hai .. maine... maine konsa pucha ...
Cabir: bhai tu janta hai na tera kuch nhi ho skta ..??...
Mukti : leave it guys .. aaj sunday .. chalo kuch exiting karte hai ...
Cabir: i hv an idea .. college chalte hai ..
Manik: vahan kya karenge??...
Cabir: fishing .. kya yrr pagal vale ques. aree kal mughe call aaya tha ptici ka vo chahta hai kal Fab 5 ka concert ho ek ... toh maine socha usse kal ki jagah aaj hi karva le ... ayr vaise bhi Fab 5 ko dekne toh students sunday ko bhi ready hai ...
Mukti : cabir tu hame ab bta rha hai.
Alta nd dhruv: yes !!... it will be fun
Manik : so decided we r going to college today ...
Cabir: aur nandini ko bhi bta diya hai vo direct vahi hogi ...
maniks face lit up listening this ...
they all reached the college in no time ...


srry fr chotu update but plzz bear it isme manan nhi tha but promise next wale hai bhar bhar kr manan ... pinky promise ... eggs tamatar ... welcomed ... keep smiling fr ur loved ones ... ooo precao dena toh bhul gai
PRECAP
maink to relive his memories with nandini
manik to sing fr nandini
... nw love
harshita
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
my whole chappy got deleted.. uggghhh srry guys but i will update it today itself ... mera mood hi khatb kr diya ... aahhh!!!! srry guys
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting


I think for love in first sight nandu



Manik being Manik never recognise it




I'm confused


If you updated it's better


But starting fab n amazing tooo
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Amazing start.
Waiting for MaNan scenes. Update soon.
N thanks for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
chapter 2
MAINKS POV
we reached college in no time ...I was nt that prepared to go ..but yes ..I felt smthng good will happen ...it was fun time to be in space ...we were the FAB 5 ...saare college pe raaj tha hamara ...everyone was so exited to perforn ..nd ofcourc we don't need practice to perform.
cabir : yrr college toh college hi hai ..aaj bhi yahahn aakar vahi feeling aati hai jo kuch saal pehle aaati thi .
Mukti: u r right cabir ...yaade taza ho gai
Manik: ab yaade h taaza karte rahoge yrr perform bhi kara hai ..
Alya :yess guys amson exited to perform ...
Dhruv: lo nandini bhi aa gai ..
suddenly everyone looks at the direction of gate ..there comes a beautiful grl in her 20s ..dressed in a modern salwar suit ..with a beautiful white scarf around her neck ...nd again she did it ..manik was again spellbound with her beauty ..😲..she cms to them nd stands near manik ..everyone cms nd hugs her nd at last our majnu manik cms ...its nt 1st time they were hugging ..but everytime they hug it feels different frm others ...a shiver runs down there spines
Nandini : hi guys ...hw r u all??
Cabir: hi chodo pehle ye bolo kahan thi app ?
Nandini : vo guys rishab ke tests mai time lag gaya nd Mumbai ka traffic u know how is it ...
after smtimes prici comes..
Prici : the famous FAB 5 is here ..good to see u guys again ..I hv arranged ur green rooms ..u cn go nd change there ..
they all went to change ...girls in one nd boys in one ..manik was the 1st to get ready nd comes out nd starts exploring the college ...each place he crosses gives a smile on his face ...then he reaches the place behind the music wing ...there he remembers ..he nd nandu shring sm good nd bad moments together but the good ones r more better than bad ones ...manik sits on the staircase ...nd was smilimg whole time while remembering everything ...then he felt a touch on his shoulders ..nd it was nandu ...
Nandu: manik tum theek ho na ?
Manik : haan mughe kya hoga ..pjir se hamari yaaade taza karne ko mila aur kya chahiye ...
Nandu: manik yaad hai ham logo ne kitne ache din bitae hai yahan ...aaj bhi uske bare mai socho toh ek smile aa jaati hai chehre pr ...it feels so good ...
all this while manik was jst looking at her ...her smile was so mesmerising ...then suddenly they hear the announcement to reach backstage ..manik reaches the backstage nd nandu goes nd sits in the audience ...the cosrt starts ...
CONSERT
everyone takes there position ...manik starts the sng looking at nandini ...
haan ho ho ...tere na aa a...
haan hasi ban gae ..haan name ban gae tum mere asmaan meri zamee ban gae
ooo aa tere naa aa ...
haan ham badalne lage
[he winks at nandini ..nd she starts looking here nd there in embarrassment]]
girne sambhalne lge ...jab se jaana tumhe teri oor chalne lage ...
har safar har jagah ,..har kahen ban gae ..
tum mere asma meri zameen ban gae ...
[[then he comes down ...then he cms down nd made nandu stand by giving her his hand nd starts circling around her ...]]
pehchante hi nhi ab log tanha mughe ..meri nigahon bhi hai dhundte vo tughe ..
ham the dhundate jisse vo kami ban gae ...
tum mere isq ki sar zameee ban gae ..
haan hasi ban gae ...haan name ban gae ...
tum mere asmaa meri zamee ban gae ...
[[ they both shared an beautiful eye lock ..which was beoken by loaur cheering of the crowd ..]]
bss mai thkk gai ...I cant write more ..baaki ka kal ...aur precap ...socha nhi abhi ..thnku so much guys ..u all r very good nd supporting ...nd pms ...kaise karte hai I don't know ...smone plss tell me ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: manan23sujoy

Amazing start.
Waiting for MaNan scenes. Update soon.
N thanks for the PM

thnks a lot ...I need encouragement ti write ,,which u guys give
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: epshitatabassum

Interesting


I think for love in first sight nandu



Manik being Manik never recognise it




I'm confused


If you updated it's better


But starting fab n amazing tooo

I posted the next part ..check it plss
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Amazing start love the bond of manan egearly waiting to see manan as bff update soon eagerly waiting 😛 😉

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