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Minshu30

@Minshu30

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Posted: 9 years ago

#441

Bravo sweta di the way undescribed suprise and manik tuxedo haaye london eye their love confession loved it to core 👏 apart after there kiss passion was 😳 this part was beautiful and bliss fulll:)

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surbhi08

@surbhi08

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Posted: 9 years ago

#442

So cute soo cute

Love this update alot i have no words to write today that how i love this

There cute makeout ohhh waaooo

Manik confession

Making her remember there previous meeting through the stoal, and anklet

The way he repeat his words of there first mitting just made me fly out of the world to the manan land

So adorable so pure

Love it alot

plz continue soon

And haa the lines which u wrote in the beginning of the chapter was fabulous

It explains the true meaning of love-----

I just love to read ur updates

Continue soon

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Arunima

@abhutani0311

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Posted: 9 years ago

#443

Hey when are we getting the next update? Waiting eagerly...

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Sweta

@sunshinesweta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#444

hola people.. here we go with another chap of stars.. hope it is as per your expectations...

show your love as usual to the chap in comments and likes.. even if you don't like critics are always welcome.. tell me how can i improve and make it better

Manik & Nandini - Stars & Fireflies 96

the firsts in life are always special.. the first car, the first salary, the first crush.. but the most special and significant first of our life is our first love.. that first feeling of a sweet pain, the butterflies in the stomach.. the first time you hold hands together; its magical.. the first time you hug; its spiritual.. the first time you kiss; the world around you stops... the first time you make love nothing can beat the purity and chastity of it when two bodies become one to an already united heart and soul... but as they say it's great to be someone's first love but its always eternal to be someone's last...

it was 5 am in the morning.. the day was about to break on the london skyline but people still were in deep slumber except two love birds... nandini was cocooned in manik's arms as he sat taking the support of the cushions and the back glass but curtained wall of their private capsule in the london eye... her eyes were closed as her lips hummed a sweet melody and her heart smiled reflecting it on his lips... manik looked at her curled up like a little bunny in a white duvet; she looked angelic with a pink roses tainted cheeks and those perfect pink pouty lips.. as his gaze travelled down to her neck a sense of guilt surrounded him on seeing all the love bites he left on her neck and shoulder.. he gently caressed them and dropped feather like kisses sending shivers down her spine and making her tremble like a dry leaf.. her eyes were closed but she smiled feeling is touch and he smiled watching is effect he has on her..

"nandini!" his deep voice made her open her eyes and look at him after lot of blushing.. He took her in his arms and said "i am sorry for these marks.." manik said caressing the love bites... "i wanted to be gentle with you but as soon as i come close to you i just loose myself.. and the way you blush and shiver at my every touch just don't help ok.." he said trying to justify himself.. nandini couldn't help but smile at his innocence... she came close to him and pecked him on cheeks and said "manik! don't ever say sorry for these.. these are your most special and precious gift to me.. they mark me as yours and only yours.. and yes i do shiver every time you touch me cause you make me alive with your every touch.. every time you kiss me i am born again, renewed..." manik smiled at her answer as his heart filled with happiness and sense of being complete in every aspect.. he kissed her forehead and said "i love you so so much nandini that words can't express..." and she smiled as a response..

after some more cuddling and pecking manik and nandini finally decided to head back to the mansion as their special night has made way for the most beautiful new beginning of their lives.. this journey will be filled with oodles of love, togetherness, troubles but it will be a journey worth living every moment of it for both of them... it was 6.30 am when manik and nandini reached the mansion hand in hand expecting everyone to still asleep.. but to their utter shock as soon as they entered they heard the usual voice of the mischief monger cabir "arre waah haathon mein haath..kya baat .. kya baat.. kya baat.." his voice broke manik and nandini's trance and both came to terms with reality.. "cabir for once.. you are so so dead.. kameene." saying this he ran behind cabir giving much needed morning laughter dose to everyone.. meanwhile the girls came and hugged nandini and congratulated her the beginning of her new journey... it was a blissful sight to see the girls who once hated each other were now sharing smiles and happiness with each other.. they were united in the bond of an undying and selfless friendship and sisterhood that was thicker than the blood.. we all have goodness in us..some show it and some hide and all we need is a heart that can see the goodness hidden.. that's exactly what nandini did; she saw the good in them and brought it out in front of the world...

"ahhh..." nandini's loud scream out of no where put everyone in a state of shock and they all froze that their places... manik ran to nandini followed by cabir.. "nandini what happened?" he asked in panic stricken voice.. "nandini speak up what happened?" even cabir asked.. nandini was smiling non stop and in return she just lifted mukti's left and pointed towards her ring finger.. what followed was a moment of shock and a loud chorus scream.. there was a huge diamond engagement ring on her finger... everyone burst in euphoria and happiness while mukti blushed.. "omg mukti ko sharam bhi aati hai.." cabir as usual pulled his leg while abhi came to his fiance's defence "oye cabir! don't bother my mukti.." as soon as they heard this the whole gang went "Ooo" but manik got a rare golden chance to pull abhi's legs.. "look who is talking.. when you tease me and nandini tab kuch nahi.. aaj mukti ko bola toh bas.." they all burst into laughter...

"by the way abhi..yeh sab..how and when?" nandini finally asked the question that everyone was dying to ask.. abhi chuckled and replied "waise nandini even i can plan an excellent surprise after all i am manik's elder brother.." making manik roll his eyes while nandini and mukti blushed the way their guys took credits for surprising them... abhi took mukti in a side hug and continued "well i planned a surprise dinner for her at hyde park at midnight and asked her if she wanted to marry me and my good luck she said yes.. in fact we wanted to break this news to all of you and that's why we were waiting for you guys to come..." everyone smiled at their happy announcement and took them for a group hug.. while they were celebrating their commotion woke DJ up who ran to the hall fearing something bad.. but as soon as she heard the news she was on cloud nine.. she came running down the stairs to hug abhi and mukti in excitement which resulted in an asthama attack...

as soon as DJ came down everyone was horrified to find her panting, running short of breathes and sweating badly.. manik and abhi ran to her and brought her to the couch.. manik was panic stricken while abhi ran into her bedroom to get her inhaler.. "DJ..DJ.." manik could not utter anything more as he was too scared to even think about the consequences.. he was teary, scared and sweating... nandini tried to console him "manik relax.. all will be ok.. just let her breathe and take her inhaler she will be fine calm down.." she put her hand on his shoulder as an assurance but manik was too disturbed even to notice it was nandini.. he took her hand and pushed her away saying "oh shut up can't you see how much discomfort she is in? get out of here everyone.." manik shouted.. fab4 knew how manik reacted when it came to dj but nandini was unaware of this side of manik cause for she has always seen him prioritizing her.. but she knew manik's bond with dj so she she shooed the tears away and stepped back.. dj was panting badly when abhi came with the inhaler and made her take it.. a few minutes later she returned to normal and asked manik to take her to her room.. as soon as manik took her away the rest of the gang too dispersed...

after an hour or so when manik came out after making sure she is now fine and doing good.. he went straight to his room but it was empty.. "nandini.." he called her out but no response came... he checked in the balcony and bathroom but she was no where to be seen.. manik came out and looked around the house and when he did not find her around he realized he shouted on her a while ago without any reason.. "what if she went out crying??" manik's brain started working overtime.. "she doesn't know anyone here.. she doesn't know london.. what if harshad tracks her alone? how can i be be so dumb.." a strange fear engulfed him as he ran towards the main gate when he saw a happy smiling nandini walking in.. he ran at the speed of light and hugged her..

nandini was taken aback by his bone crashing him which almost made her loose her balance... 'i am sorry.. i'm so so sorry nandini.." manik said.. nandini broke the hug and asked "manik what happened? why are you saying sorry?" manik cupped her face and said "i am sorry for shouting on you without any purpose.. you were just trying to calm me down, help me but i shouted on you of all the people.. i mean how can i and when i didn't see you around i thought you got hurt and went out and what if.." and before manik could even say anything further she put her finger on his mouth and said "shhh.. manik stop feeling guilty for everything.. why would i get hurt don't i know what bond you and dj share... and yes i went out but not because i was hurt or something but because i wanted to make herbal tea and there was a indian herbal store at the end of the street.." manik sighed and said "you are the most important person in my life nandini.. you are my life.." nandini smiled and said "manik i know i am important and you don't have to tell me or prove that ok.. stop taking stress and lets go.." manik kissed her forehead and took her again in a bone crashing hug which responded with equal love..

it was around 9 am when all of them assembled for a quintessential english breakfast with baked beans, bacon, poached eggs, grilled tomatoes, fried mushrooms, toast with butter and sausages... while fab5 and abhi relished on the breakfast; nandini and navya being vegetarians were left with few options.. they both helped themselves with a toast and butter and excused themselves.. manik felt guilty of not taking nandini's eating habits into consideration when he ordered for breakfast... but he saw DJ holding her hand and bringing her back to table.. nandini gave her a confused look and DJ smiled and said "i know you don't eat all this so i ordered special aloo ka parathas to be made by our indian chef just for us.." saying this she chuckled... manik thanked DJ silently and she replied with her usual "you owe me this" look... soon she turned her attention to abhi and mukti "so we have an engagement to plan.. its abhi's birthday after 15 days and i want the engagement to take place on the same day.." everyone looked at each other and flashed a huge smile as acceptance of her offer.. "wow DJ that's a great idea.." exclaimed manik.. "but we have so less days to prepare.." alya being ever enthusiastic party planner asked "DJ how many rituals will be there?" DJ smiled at her excitement and said "Alya its a engagement ceremony so just one ritual sweet heart and since it's abhi's birthday too we will have double celebration... now i want you all to take out for shopping and buy engagement rings here and rest of the shopping we will do in mumbai...

soon they all hopped in two mercs and headed off to oxford street the best place to shop in london for brands... they braved the rush hour traffic for about an hour and half when all the girls were getting restless especially mukti.. while everyone was busy discussing shopping navya was lost in her own world of loneliness and darkness; looking out of the window blankly.. she wanted to stay back but cabir and nandini insisted her to come out for her own sake... nandini patted on her shoulder and said "all will be fine navya don't burden yourself with guilt.." navya looked and gave a faint smile.. finally after braving the traffic they reached oxford street..

this being nandini's first visit she was mesmerized by the atmosphere, the people and shops around.. she was looking at it like a 5 year old kid with a huge smile.. manik looked and smiled at her and holding her hands walked into the cartier showroom where mukti and abhi were scheduled to buy their rings.. except for abhi and mukti everyone there had an opinion to give about their rings and soon it turned out to be chaotic.. manik sneaked nandini out.. "manik are you mad.. why do you sneak me out every time and leave me people are watching us.." Manik pulled her closer and said "nandini your time is just for me and i can't share you for that madness and one more thing this is london yahan i can do anything.." saying this he started to nuzzle her making her blush and smile both... "hmmm.." dj's voice broke his moment "yeh london hai but you two are indians.." she glared at manik and took nandini with her.. soon abhi and mukti brought two beautiful platinum diamond couple's rings where mukti's ring was studded with a beautiful pink diamond... after the rings they all ran into zara store for more shopping.. manik wanted to shop more for nandini but she stopped him saying his love is more than enough for her and all these things doesn't matter... manik obliged but him being him secretly brought quite a few outfits which he planned to gift her every now and then..

after wrapping the shopping carnival they all decided to feed their empty stomachs with some pizzas and pastas all vegetarian considering nandini and navya's presence.. soon they were back in the mansion packing as it was their last evening in london.. they pre-pond their tickets keeping in mind the impending engagement and navya.. manik still couldn't trust navya and he just could not let harshad scot free keeping nandini in danger.. but they all decided to make teir last evening memorable by partying all night before they board the flight back to india... manik hosted that party for his elder brother and mukti in one of the most swanky pubs in London The Egg London... Egg London is a stylish venue spread across three intimate floors. Reminiscent of an Ibiza club, it's the outdoor courtyard that really makes Egg stand out. its a perfect place to cool off, chill out and have a drink under the night sky.

soon they all were dressed in their best looks and stepped out in style.. manik wore a black tee and black jeans and teamed it up with his D&G off white jacket.. while nandini perfectly complimented him perfectly in her knee length spaghetti strapped black outfit with smoky eyes and chandelier earring.. she wore a moderate heeled boots.. they both looked the most heavenly couple who descended on earth just for the night... all their friends blessed them in their hearts and kick started the night... the night was a memorable one for all of them as abhi and mukti celebrated their reunion.. alya and dhruv celebrated their closeness and attraction for each other and sealed it with a kiss... but two people who enjoyed it most were manik and nandini .. they were with the crowd but lost in each other... a lot of secret kisses behind the pillars were exchanged.. they danced in each other's arms oblivious to the world around and finally called it a night on the open courtyard wrapped in each other's arms and love.. with loads of memories, happiness and love manik and nandini boarded the flight back to india to start their new journey...

the best kind of love is the love which changes you without actually changing you.. love has the power to heal the deepest of wounds... it spreads light in the darkest corners of our heart because the will to life happily for that one person, with that one person is bigger than any wound or the darkness..

end of part 96...
ciao..

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Manya

@manya_189

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Posted: 9 years ago

#445

Beautiful chapter!
I really loved the way you've shown the bond b/w DJ and Manik :)
Amazing update :)

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Danny92

@Danny92

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#446

Nice update

So abhi nd muktis engagement ohhh am so xited

Manik nd dj share a great bond just love it u showed it very well

Hope navya will be fine sooonnn

DJ's statement in the mall to manik was super it is London but u two r Indians

Watng fr more

Continue sooonnn

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Kuushi

@Kuushi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#447

Awesome chapter..wow Abhi and mukti engagement more fun and masti on the way..please continue soon and thanku for the pm :)

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samreen

@Manansamkhan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#448

its amazing ...

so sweet pure friendly full of love ..

dj is superb yeh "yeh london hai but you two are indians.."

this last lines r so true mesmerizing ..
the best kind of love is the love which changes you without actually changing you.. love has the power to heal the deepest of wounds... it spreads light in the darkest corners of our heart because the will to life happily for that one person, with that one person is bigger than any wound or the darkness..

cont soon.