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Kuushi

@Kuushi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#131

Another awesome update though the stalker is giving creeps...like the way manik answered him in his monster way loved the lines run before I get hold of you.. And the family teasing is always fun and finally the trip to London..looking forward for the next chapter please continue soon and thanku for the pm :)

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divtan

@divtan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#132

Sweta,
beautiful update yet another time !!
i am surprised that all your updates are a hit yaar !!
*touchwood*
god bless u !
keep it up !!

i hope that stalker is caught soon !
manan are sooo dam cute together !!
nandu is really scared and manik is really worried...i hope nothing worse happens..
but abhi toh yeh sab london jaa rhe hai...soo yayyy!!!!!!

waiting for the next London update :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)

thanks for the update :)

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prrk86

@prrk86

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Posted: 9 years ago

#133

Awesome update I am curious to know who is that

Stalker is and loved caring and loving side of manik

Hope London trip brings some romance hehehe

thanks for pm

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Sajna2881

@Sajna2881

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Posted: 9 years ago

#134

Awesom...👏👏

Very beautifully written...

curious to know abt the stalker... what's wrong with navya...

Thank you for the update...

Waiting for ur next...

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nami169

@nami169

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Posted: 9 years ago

#135

nice update.

love each & every character of ur story.👏

& plz catch & throw that staiker away.😡

plz update soon.

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Kavyashree pradhan

@Kavyashree22

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Posted: 9 years ago

#136

Aaah! Even m worried, whow is that person..or better stalker.. But remenbering happie moment is all about... They they are damn happie right now.. Thanq for pm..

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jashanpreet

@yash7717

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Posted: 9 years ago

#137

Waooo London trip...i am so excited ...

I love the way they both own each other.

And this episode...care of Manik was just mind blowing...

You wrote it really well...
I awwats said that...i love your start and end...
Its always fab...

Update soon this time dearie...
Loads f love and regards...
I wait for this ff like desperates..hahaha

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Diksha Anand

@DikshaAnand

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Posted: 9 years ago

#138

"wrong move dude.. rule number one check with whom you are talking and rule number two and the most important rule don't ever even think of messing with manik malhotra.. nandini was, is and will always be mine and just know how to protect her.. and now rule number three run before i catch hold off you cause once i get to know who you are you won't be alive to see the next morning.."

Awesome dialogue
A full on thrill movie dialogue