NEW MANAN SS TOUCHED BY U ch5 pg15

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey guys as promised here I am with my ss!!!! chapters will be updated according to ur response..till then here is the prologue

prologue!!!!!!

what happens when u realise that u r missing something that was never real...u feel confused, u feel lost, u feel helpless...cause u don't know what to do...

this is exactly whats happening with manik...when he realized that he is missing his 3month old fake relationship with nandini...
yup fake relationship...something to help manik get rid of karishma behind his back...he got his relief but what will happen when he will realise his new born feelings??? what will he do?? will he be able to talk it out with nandu????
things will get even more complicated when...

should I say everything??comment for the future updates...let me what do u think will happen??? so in short comment for updates and pm!!!

INDEX
CHAPTER 1
CHAPTER 2
CHAPTER3
CHAPTER4
CHAPTER5
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sounds very interesting.
Please do continues.
Love to read when nandni know about fake relationship.
She will never forgive manik.
I like the idea.
Thanks for sharing this with us.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice and different concept.. now just looking forward for the story.. wanna read it ASAP
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Posted: 9 years ago
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looks interesting...plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sounds interesting
Plz Cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow nice prolong I must say meri jaan looking forward for ur new story...fake relationship but manik have started feelings for nandu and he is missing her so sweet... There would definitely be complications I guess after reading the prolong... But woh love story hi kya jisme twists and turns na ho ..maja toh bohot ane Wala hain yeh story parne main for sure... Thanks meri jaan for starting a new story ...looking forward to read ur new story...if possible pm me when u next update ur stories it become easy to know whether u have updates new chapters or not ...love u...tc... With lots of love and hugs
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey guys what up??here i am with the first chapter :) :) :) give it a read...next chapter will be updated in respect to your response...so don't blame me if i give late updates...all those receiving a pm but yet just liking it.im not gonna pm u guys anymore...it takes effort to pm u all...i hope u understand...here we go now-----


PART 1
Manik woke up in the morning by the constant calling of his mom..he was annoyed to the core but he could never decline his mother...after all he loved her too much for that..although they barely got any time to spend together because of her office and his posh life style but he loved her a lot...as soon as manik woke up nyonica left to make him breakfast..manik took his phone and by his habit called nandini
N:good morning manik
M:good morning nandu
N:itni subah subah call kiyu kiya?
M:yehi puchne k liye k tumhe kab pick karne ayu?
N:manik u dont have to come to pick me up
M:what?why not?i do it everyday..
N:mr.malhotra in case u forgot let me remind u that we have been doing that for thr past three months because i had to pretend to be your girlfriend..but now that karishma has gone we dont have to do that anymore...so u dont have to come n pick me
M:oh yeah...right..i forgot
N:anyway i got to go...harshad will be picking me up any moment..
M:yeha..i also should get ready...
Before manik could say anything else nandini disconnected the call
manik felt a slight pang in his heart but even e didnt know why so he just decided to avoid that feeling..he got ready and had a hearty breakfast with his mom and left for college..by habit he started driving towards nandinis house but then his brain clicked and he took a u-turn...after good 20 minutes he reached college..he saw his best friends waiting for him..his fab5
C:arey lover boy aj tu akela?where is mrs.malhotra
M:what?
mt:arey cabir would be ms.malhotra
M:what the hell are u talking about?
A:arey baba we r talking abot your girlfriend nandini
M:guys ahem...in case u forgot let me remind u that she was my fake girlfriend..
C:sure!!!
M:what?
MT:hum andhe nehihain..tum dono ka chemistry hum sabko dikh gaya hain..there's nothing to hide
M:guys im not hiding anything..it was just a fake thing...which is now over..tumhe to sab pata hainna..then why are u acting like this..buddy please make them understand..
D:i will..but usse pehle tu yeh bata k tu hume convince kar raha hain ya khudko?
M:tu bhi!!u know what guys..I'm leaving..jab tum logo ka dimag thikane pe a jayega then call me...
manik walked out leaving a tensed fab4 behind who were worried about their friend who was still to acknowledge his feelings..
Manik was walking around in college when his eyes ell on nandini..she was looking ethereal in a white dress..he just wanted to go and take her in a side hug..cause for the past three months thats all he used to do...she fit into him like a perfect piece of puzzle...he missed her that he admitted...he thought to go to her and say hi but his footsteps stopped involuntarily when he saw that she was spending time with her friends..he turned around..he remembered that in the past three months how she was always there when he needed her..but she never interrupted him and his friends..a smile automatically crept upon his face...Then the bell rang so all the students headed up to their class..Manik entered in the class..his friends apologized to him..he accepted that wholeheartedly
nandini walked in to the class with her friends...manik had kept a sit beside her but nandini sat on the opposite side of the class..manik felt bad..like really bad...He couldnt concentrate on the lecture..he kept stealing glances of nandini while his brain was exploring a memory of the previous classes..how he was inattentive but nandini forced him to concentrate..how she used to help him when he was stuck...how she made sure that he never got punishment when all his friends received detention everyday for not paying attention..all those memories made him happy but he felt hurt when he was brought to reality by the bell...He made his way with his friends =..they went into the canteen...he sat down while dhruv a brought food for him..dhruv had brought cola for him..he remembered that nandini made him stop drinking cola because it was harmful for health...she forced him to drink juice..
ok that was it!!manik was a hell lot frustrated right now!!!!since morning all he cdid was thinking of nandini..he couldnt take it anymore..he felt annyoed with himself...he told his friends that he wasnt feeling well and so he was leaving for home..his friends knew exactly what troubled him so they didnt ask him any question..while manik was leaving the canteen he bumped into nandini..for a moment he was happy to have her near him..nandini gave him a smile and said hi..manik felt that his day just lit up seeing her smile..he said hi..he wanted to talk to her but her friends took her in..he couldnt even e..he say bye..he then got into his car and drove straight to home..he took a long shower and lied down on his bed...his brain started reminiscing how it all started

FLASHBACK:
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ok guys that was the first part..next pat will be a flashback of how it all started...so to know comment and force me to update faster..please leave lambawala comments and tell me what u liked about it and what do u want to see happening ahead :) :)
till then lots of tlc to u all!!!!

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my other work --- NEW MANAN FF I FOUND PERFECTION WITH YOU on going :)
MANAN SS BE MY DATE COMPLETED

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Okay... This is a really nice concept and i woukd love to read more...
Please cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb update...such a lovely story...tnqu sooo much for the PM...U Penned it soo beautifully...hats off dea...plss continue soon..will be waiting for next part..keep writing..TC
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Of course I love it
Is harsad positive


Is nandu modern


I hope he realised his feelings


Tnx 4 pm



keep it up





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