hello peeps... im back :) wasn't intending to update today but didn't want to keep waiting for long..so im writing just to make u people happy..in return u guys have to make me happy by your comments..i dont reply but trust me i read all your comments and each and every one of them bring a big smile to my face..so people make me happy if u want the next chapter asap!! also i need to ask you something..my last ss had only 5 chapters..i intended to the same with this one..but if u guys want i can extend it to more parts..what do u guys want?
P.s:manik told that he never heard nandini's voice cause he was teasing her for being silent...and those who want nandinis pov it will come but after a while..cause writing her pov now would affect my storyline..but u will get it for sure... :) :)
i hope now all your confusions are clear...
all your criticism is more than welcome btw :)
chapter3
manik woke up by nyonicas constant disturbing...he woke up and took a deep breath as he remembered today as well he wont be picking nandini up..he became really mad at himself..he kept wondering why couldn't he stop thinking about nandini...it was getting into his nerves...he didn't have breakfast..he just drank a cup of coffee and made his way out...nyonica knew what was troubling his son but she knew that he would burs out if she told him..thats why she decided o wait till he could deal with his inner turmoil...
COLLEGE
manik walked in..all the girls started drooling over him as he was looking sinfully gorgeous in his messed up hair...he was passing through when nandini came in front of him
N:Hi
M:hey
N:idhar ao!!
nandini dragged him to a corner..manik malhotra was being dragged a small petite girl...if few months ago someone told it to him he would have laughed his heart out but today he felt good being dragged by her...nandini pinned him to a corner
M:what?
N:tumhare ghar mein comb nehi hain?
M:huh!
N:wait..
nandini started fixing her hair...manik just let her..he was mesmerized by her smell...soon nandini was done..
N:see all better..
M:yeh kya kiya?u ruined my sexy look...
N:oh please!!ur head looked like a crows nest..
M:oh please!!
N:whatever...
M:vaise why do u care?
N:of course i do..yes u r not my fake boyfriend anymore but we are still friends..
M:we are?
N:of course!
M:but i thought ex's cannot be friends..
N:tum pagal ho manik!!
M:im mad for u..
N:u will never get tired of flirting will you?
M:nop..after all i have the right top flirt with you..
N:really?
M:of course..u r my miss.einstein...
N:whatever...
M:u know im right..
N:listen i gotta go i have a class...dont mess up your hair anymore i dont like those girls gawking at you
M:yes mam!!
as soon as nandini left sadness crept over maniks heart..he already missed her...he went to the music room and started playing his guitar..he went into memory lane again...
FLASHBACK
THE DAY OF THE PARTY
manik went to nandinis place 5 hours before the party as he had to make her look like his girlfriend..nandini already knew about his arrival so she stood at the entrance of her mansion so that she could sneak in..
manik malhotra drived in style and handed over the keys to the valet..
nanidini grabbed his hands and started running in..
M:woh woh!!tumhe itni jaldi hain mujhe apni bedroom mein le jane ki to pehli baata de ti main preparations karke aata..vaise we still have time lets do this..
he pulled nandini by clasping her waist..
N:tumhara kuch nehi ho sakta!!
M:i know!!
BGVOICE:hai bhagwan!!!
nandinis fear had come ture..it was her dramatic mom...(chachi)
manik let go of her..
CH:hai bhagwan!!tum dono yeh ya kar rahe the?
N:kuch nehi mom
CH:ha ha pata hain!!maine bhi teri umar cross kiya hain...
M:so ap nandini ki mom hain!! now i see where did she get her beautiful looks from..
CH:hai!!kitna sona munda hain..tumhara naam kya hain beta?
M:manik..manikj malhotra
ch:tussi panjabi ho!!
M:hanji bilkul!!
CH:areh wah!!finally bhagwan ne meri baat sunli..nandini ne ek punjabi boyfriend bana hi li!!
N:MOM!!!
M:hain aunty..main bhi ise yehi kehti hun...meri baat bilkul nehi sunti..mere pyaar ko accept hi nehi karna chahti!!
N:manik
CH:arey tu is bichare pe kiyu ana awaz uchi kar rahi hain?
N:u know what im done with u people...mom ap apne kamre mein jaw aur manik tum mere sath aw...
nandini dragged manik into her room..
M:r a nandini aunty kya sochegi..tum apne boyfriend ko apne kamre mein lekar door bandh kar rahi ho..
nanidni gave him a death glare..
M:ok miss einstein before u kill me lets get started..
N:finally...
M:so let me look at your closet
manik opened her closet and what he saw him left him speechless...there was a huge collection of dresses..short short dresses
M:tum yeh sab college main kyu nehi pehenti?
N:thats none of your business..
M:u r right...its not..vaise bhi i will never get u girls and ur thing about cloths..why dont u just try on something and ill see what suits..
N:excuse me?main kya doll lagti ho
M:yes
N:what?
M:what what? u look as cute as a doll
N:manik u and your cheesy lines..
M:nandini go ahead.
N:fine i will...but then we will go to your house and will do the same thing with u..
M:what?
N:well yeah...im working with you not for you..
after 1 hour og trials and teasing they decided on nandinis attire...then manik went home alone on a conditon..he gave trial to cloths and sent nandini his pics..so that she could decide what he would wear...
flashback end
manik came out of his trance when he heard his friends coming in..
C:woh dude!!that was some amazing tune!!!
M:yeah..it came right from the heart...
ok guys thats it for today..im tired..i know this one is not upto the mark..but i hope i can make the next one worth it as it will be the flashback of the party and some more present drama..till then please bear and stick with me
:) Edited by audity.sm - 9 years ago
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