NEW MANAN SS TOUCHED BY U ch5 pg15 - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
Awsome update
Nice one
They R so Cute
Waiting for the next
Cont soon :)

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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
Yes yesss go ahead..
Write many more chapters...
I like it !!
So at least the guys realized that manik lover her !!
Masssttt
Thank u for the update :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
baiby thanks for the pm and lovely update...eid mubarak sweetheart :) wish u all happiness and success in life...

now coming to ur question we would definitely want to read further ...i just love the concept ...

the update was amazing...manik is falling for nandu which even he isnt realising... hang out at mukti's place was really nice... the video game part was so cute...was deliberately lost the game to see nandu happy so sweet... manik's friend is trying to make him realise manik's true feelings for nandu hope they become successful really soon :) the last part was really sweet awww so cute they hug each other...

update soon..thanks for the pm...love u .tc...with lots of love and hugs
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
Wow Tht was soo cute
Love to read more
Extend it no problem
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
I really loved thisss..
itsss so much awesome. ..

manan r so cute n adorable man...
lovedd it ..

itsss awesome. ...

itsss quite awesome. ..
..I just love it
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update soon. .

waiting for next update eagerly impatiently. ..

thanks for this beautiful update. ...
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lotsss of luv. ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
Amazin'
mindblowin'
loved it very much
so sweet of Manik
he himself lost the game just to make her win and brought smile on her face
the last part was too cute
update soon
plz don't end it in 8-10 parts..
Extend it to more.. Plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
Hey dear
Awsm updates...
Looking forward for dis story to be extended to more than 8 -10 chapters cz I m loving d story line so as yr concept plsss extend it
It is beautiful yr
Plsss continue soon
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I seriously like d stupid blushing manik...
Cuttie manan
Love them
Together forever

Keep updating
Keep smiling
Stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
amazing
hope manik soon realises his feelings for nandu...
manan understands each other so well...
thank you for the wonderful update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome
love this
pls update soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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chapter4

FLASHBACK

manik parked his car and looked at nandini who looked nervous...
M:are u ok miss einstein?
N:im fine...
M:so lets do it..
N:yeah i guess..
they got out of the car..nandini encircled her her arms around his..
M:u know u r lucky...
N:how so?
M;well lots of girls would die to be my girlfriend for a day..and u get to do it for 3 months...
N:well than u should get the other girls do it..
nandini left him and started walking but manik stopped her
M:but im glad that its u...
N:really?
M:yup!!
N:huff...me too...
M:what?
N:nothing lets go...
M:ok miss.einstein
manan walked into the party in full attitude..the ahowl crowd paused..they were looking damn good together


before they could walk in karishma blocked their way...
K:oh my god!!guys u r looking absolutely fab!!
M:thanks karishma...
N:thanks..
K:if i knew u both i would cry..any way guys carry on ill catch up with u later...
M:sure...
karishma left...
M:come lets go to your friends...
N:do they know about our situation??
M:yup...we r fab5..we dont keep secrets from each other...
N:cool
they walked upto fab5 who were sitting at the bar...
M:hey guys!!
A:oh my god nandini!!!
N:what?
A:u look damn awesone..is that dress from where i think it is...
N:laurens crafts...
MT:oh wow..where did u get it from?
N:well last week my cousin sent it to me..she lives there...
A:oh my god...we have so much to talk about...
alya and mukti held nandinis hand started to walk in another direction...
M:guys where r u going?
MT:relax manik she isnt actually your girlfriend...
M:did i say that?
D:u r behaving like that for sure...
M:whatever..
everyone giggled..the girls went away..
C:my god yeh miss.chashmish kitni hot lag rahi hain!!
D:i know right...
M:meri girlfriend hain..fake hi sahi..log kya sochenge k manik k girlfriend pe uske friends nazar de rahe hain..
C:hein bhagwan fake hain isiliye itna posessive hain!!real hoit hain to kya karta...

for the next one hour the party went on full swing...the guys were having fun among themselves..while the muklya were amazed to see the cool side of the nerd of their class..suddenly all the lights went off and the spot light fell on karishma..
K:hello peeps!!welcome to my welcome back party...i hope u guys r enjoying yourselves...now lets get this party really started...i want all of u to come to the dance floor...
really loud music played on the sound box...manik approached to the girls..
M:if u beautiful girls dont mind can i take my fake girlfriend for a dance..
MT:puch to aise raha hain jaise shaadi k liye puch raha hain..
M:oh god..give it a rest already...
nandini placed her hand on maniks hand...he lead her to the dance floor..
M:u r comfortable right?
N:yup.,.dont worry about me..
manik encircled his arms around her waist...nandini entwined their hands...they started moving to the beats...
after a while...
N:manik...
M:yeah?
N:im not feeling comfortable..can i go home?
M:sure..come ill drop u home..
N:u dont have to..ill call my driver
M:no nandini..you r my responsibility...
N:ok...
they got out of the party...
N:manik im sorry..
M:for what?
N:for me u had to leave the party..
M:nandini dont apologize...its ok...vaise bhi i have partied so much...its boring to me now..
N:hmm...vaise kal computer test hain..tumne pada hain?
M:oh crap!!i totally forgot...
N:janti thi.
M:miss.einstein i totally forgot...u have to help me...i know tumne to zaror preparation li hi hogi..
N:itna help kar rahi hu phir bhi aur help!!
M;please please please!!
N:ok...but tum ghar mein chu chap enter karoge..mom se phirse se mile to pata nehi kya karegi..
M:vaise i like your mom..she is so fun!!tum unki beti hoke itni sadu kyu ho?
N:do u want my help?
N:yes yes sorry...
tehy reached murthy mansion...
nandini sneaked in...
N:manik crawl..
M:what?
N:i said crawl!!in sofa k piche mom nehi dekhegi,...
M:oh god!!
they started going towards their room,...
Nandinis mom:nandu beta dekh maine tere liye potato rolls banai hain!!
N:nehi chahiye mom...
suddenly manik poked her legs..
nandini gave him a glare..he gestured that he wanted some
N:u know what mom..i want some...
MOM:r a wah!!ek chalega..
N:hmm
manik again poked her legs..
N:no no..ek kam kijiye ap mujhe pua plate hi de dijiye...main raat ko padungi to lagega,,,
MPM:ok baccha..
after a few more minutes of struggle tehy finally made it too nandinis room...
N:yeh lo aur kaho!!!
M:thanks nandu..
N:whatever..wait a minute ill change.
M:nandini!!
N:what?
M:manta hu tumhara boyfriend hu..lekin fake hi hu..tume mere samne change karugi..vaise i dont mind..
N:sick..u r sick..main washroom ja rahi hu..
after nandini came back..she opened her laptop and started explaining thing to manik..
after few minutes the mischievous boy inside him kicked in...
he slowly clicked the webcam button..
N:manik...
M:come on nandini zindegi mein pehli baar main party chor kar parahi kar raha hu..memories banana to zaruri hain,,
N:tumhara na kuch nehi ho sakta!!!
M:come lets take photoes..
then they took some photos in weird poses and finally manik left the house finishing his preparations...

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