MaNanSS: Dheere Dheere Chap5/PG91/ Link to Thread 2/PG1 - Page 13

nice start amazing story line manik ke dil m nandu ko phele bar dekh kar hi ghanti baj gayi continue soon

amazing start ...

new story line nice .
manbir convo was good n funny.

manik hiding his feelings he dnt believe in love but he fall in love at first sight ..

nandani character is so innocent so naive she is a doll.
who can resist from falling for a our cute doll ...

its a cute story n as u said it will b just small four short ...
its ok ...

amazing
cont soon ...

Awesome start

It's just awesome yaar!!! Love it's story line.. Wow,, ur writing skill,, I just want to kiss ur hands 😛 😛 ... Continue soon!! Thanks for pm me...
Love, Aisha

Just came across your story!!

YAYAYYA......NEW STORY...YIPEEE🥳...OR WO BHI MERI FAV8 WRITER KI......THANK YOU APPI EK OR STORY KE LIYE...AB APP KE BARE MAIN KIA KAHUN JITNA KAHUN KAM HAI...BUT...U ARE AWSOME...MUAHHH!! AND TIGHT WALI HUGIS APP KE LIYE... 🤗🤗🤗

COMING TO THE UPDATE...

NANDU'S POV AWSOME...I LOVE IT...THE WAY SHE INTRODUCE HERSELF...AMAZING...SO NANDINI IS ORPHANE AND SHE FEEL SHE IS CURSE GIRL...SO SAD...AND SHE WANT'S JOB...AND SHE CAME...MALHOTRA INDUSTRIES...SHE IS SO NERVOUS...THEN CABIR AND NANDINI SCENE...MINDBLOWING...OR FINALLY USE JOB MIL GAI...AND SHE BECAME EXICTED...LIKE A CHIL...LOOVED IT...THEN CAME...ARE ANGRY YOUNG MAN..HEHHEH😆...MANIK MALHOTRA...OR NANDINI PHIR SE NERVOUS FEEL KARNE LAGI...THEN NANDU KO PTA CHALTA HAI KE MANIK USKA BOSS HAI...THEN THEY ACCIDENTLY BUMP EACHOTHER...AWWW!! NANDU'S HAND...HEHEHEH...!!😆 I LIKE THERE CONVO..."Nandini who? Listen you are not Queen Victoria that you will tell me your name and I will recognize you."..AWSOME LINE...AWWW!! HE CARE FOR NANDU...SO SWEET...THEN MANIK POV AWSOME...AWSOME CONVO BETWEEN MANIK AND CABIR...AND THEN MANIK NE NANDINI KO PEHLE DEKHA HUA HAI...KNOWINGLY OR UNKNOWINGLY...MANIK FELL IN LOVE WITH HER...SUPERB...NANDU'S SCENE WAS...AWSOME...ROAD WALA SCNE...MINDBLOWING...👏...HIS POV IS BEST...AMAZING...SO MANIK MALHOTRA PYAR KE CHAKAR MAIN NHI PARNA CHAHTE...PER NANDU KO DEKH KAR PARNA HI PAREGA...HEHHEE..!!😆

AWSOME...MINDBLOWING LOVED IT...TO THE CORE

THANKS FOR PM
CONT SOON
LOVE U

Awww 😃 Angel u hit a Sixerrr 😛 really really loved d story 😛 plot luks really promising 👏 its so frsh n new yr 😛 really loved d way The ArROGANT MANIK MALHOTRA got cleaned bold by nandini's innocent n antics at frst side 😉 😛 God manik' Pov was really awsum man she affected him dam to d hell 😆 😛 plzz update itx nxt chp soon will b eagerly w8ting for it

Awesome story line... Loved caring and childish Nandini... It will be interesting to read how she will fall for him... So all the best and congratulations for this FS
Update soon...

Amazing start but i think age gap 10 years is something not good... If the age gap will be this much than we will not be able to imagine the chemistry between the 2.. U understand naa MANAN is all about their chemistry😃 ...U can show manik 25 years old... This we can accept but 10 years... Plz dont get me wrong its just my way of thinking but i love ur FFs ... Sun Saathiyan is my favourite .. All the best for this ff and yes i will keep on reading despite of THE AGE GAP 👏