*| ROYAL BUT DISLOYAL FATE |* a FF. IMPORTANT NOTE. Pg 85..

anaita arora

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Posted: 9 years ago

#521

amazing chappy manan part was beautifulll u nailed it i fell like mudering madhyam sooo mean sari mehnat manik ki thi loved it update soon takr care ty for pm

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Tiara115

@Tiara115

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Posted: 9 years ago

#522

Wow.. Full of action and drama..

Manik saved his life his nandu..

Harshad seriously pissed me off.

Maddy ko kya hua..

Usko chotu to nai lag gyi

Do update soon

Waiting eagerly

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ArSha_ManNan

@ArSha_ManNan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#523

Awesome update
Harshad na aag lgane ka hi kaam kr skta hai ...
Nandu sad ... Sitting n watching the stars :( :(
Omg that cliff scene... I remembered episode wala cliff scene
Manik calming her down n using his injured hand the pull her up
Aww the hug n Nandu's concern for manik
Ek min maddy was concerned for her ... How come
Thnkz 4 the pm

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AdreamerA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#524

Originally posted by: ArSha_ManNan
Awesome update
Harshad na aag lgane ka hi kaam kr skta hai ...
Nandu sad ... Sitting n watching the stars :( :(
Omg that cliff scene... I remembered episode wala cliff scene
Manik calming her down n using his injured hand the pull her up
Aww the hug n Nandu's concern for manik
Ek min maddy was concerned for her ... How come
Thnkz 4 the pm

Tysm! 😃

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archu_asok

@archu_asok

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Posted: 9 years ago

#525

Awesome update.madhyam and alya's part was samazing.Everyone's restlessness after finding nandini was not there was well written.nandini's pov was superb. Manan's moments were fabulous.madhyam's part was fabulous but sudden change in his behaviour. Eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon. Thanks for pm

Keep writing

Stay blessed😊

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rockstarlover

@rockstarlover

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Posted: 9 years ago

#526

Lovely update
Manan moments were beautiful😃
That Harshad & Madhyam😡
Maddy & Aliya's part was nice
Cont soon

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Cooki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#527

Amazing update dear...
Manik saved her...
It was as if his life was in danger..
The fireflies shined..
But she didn't believe in them...
Maddy is becoming a threat for them..
Harshad is not going to change a bit...
Thnxx for the pm...
Continue soon..
Looking forward to read further parts...

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Sukanya

@Sukanyadhar12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#528

Awesome update .👏

Thanks for the pm.

Continue soon .

Take care .😊

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ragini_nirva

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Posted: 9 years ago

#529

amazing update

it was really cute between manik and nandini

ab ye madhyam ko kya hua ? 😕

harshad ko entery na di ja tab tak tum ko chen nahi milta ?

ek din to chuti do harshad ko nahi lane me 😡

harshad is really jerk

thanks for the pm

update soom

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AdreamerA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#530

Originally posted by: ragini_nirva
amazing update
it was really cute between manik and nandini
ab ye madhyam ko kya hua ?😕
harshad ko entery na di ja tab tak tum ko chen nahi milta ?
ek din to chuti do harshad ko nahi lane me😡
harshad is really jerk
thanks for the pm
update soom

Lol. 😛
*Daant pdh gyi*

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