MaNan FF ||Our Chance To Love:COMPLETED|| - Page 14

Originally posted by: Natashaaa

Originally posted by: RomComFan

Terrific...how wll manik cope with this? loved the connection between them, looking forward to more mystery revelation and cuteness...

Thanks...

There are inddeeed lots of revelations, mystery, romacne planned up...Watch out..

Originally posted by: aavani

sweetie pie...

i just started to read ur story...still in chapter one...will read all four and then comment...
and so sorry for this late response...hope u forgive me...

with love
aavani

Thanks...

Well forgiving will depend on the length of your comment..😆

Originally posted by: Danny92

Nice update

Nandini is in such a state that she wants to be with him nd thn she doesn't want to be with him she is so much hurt that she cannot forgive him so easily

That kid the thing he did before leaving was just super he told manik that nandini is his mom

Who is that kid is he navyas child wer is navya?

Continue sooonnn

OH em geee...You are way too intrigued and I love it...

BE more close to it and you might fangirl it like KYY😳

Originally posted by: rodi122

Wow man i just found your story on forum and its awesome like really yuh left me speechless and when i got to know that ansn's mother is nandini i was speechless and great story get going on and do pm me

Thanks...Read it twice and thric...I love such readers and I promise to not diasspoint you...

I will pm you if you have sent me freind request...Thank anyways..

Originally posted by: tas456

Wow...am just speechless

Awesome..amazing...superp

Amazing update yaar

Love this nandini..can't believe it he left her for 5 long years

She has every right to b angry

Can't wait for your next update

Wat will b manik's reaction

Pls pls pls update the next part asap

Tq so much for the pm

Take care and always keep smilling

Thanks you so much...I love NAndini so muhc that I want others to love her too..

She be my girl crush..PHOREVA..☺️

Originally posted by: keekz

<font size="6">awesome...</font>
I love the way you write..

Thanksss...And I love the way you comment about my wirting keeping a star in betweeen..Make me feel like an issshtaaar..😎

Originally posted by: kitkat5756

thanks for the pm.wow just wow its a big big update thanks really enjoyed reading such a big wala update...sorry aj small comment kar raha hu promise next time big wala comment pakka dungi am bit busy in some work ...take ur time and update...pm me if update further ...thanks for such big wala beautiful update and pm...love u ..tc...with lots of love and hugs :)

I am going to keep in mind the next time you comment...I will be there with a meter rule to measure it😈

Originally posted by: NAVYA64

Read it in one go

awesome update

loved it so much

cont soon

Thank you...Will try my best to update ASAP

Originally posted by: thamannamanan

superb superb

long long update so thanq so so much

story dmn good

nandini s emotions reactions all were so nice it hurts really it hurts

ur story brings back our memories tooo but we don't have this chance of seeing them together again

ansh damn cuteee

so my frnd manik and this is ur doc my mom nandini murthy

wow

dada told druv is coming to pick me up

u r so nice so good so perfect

an excellent writer

please try to update soon please its a request

OMG...So much..I like it...😳

I like request...Yes I will update soon...Dont worry...I also love reading my ff again..So I will update...DOn't worry..I loe this thing way too mcuh nowadays..I am literally living this story...🤣

Not funnny I know..🤔

Originally posted by: samdamn

you are an amazing writer ur ff is good i cant wait for the next chapter update soon

Thankoos so much...

Originally posted by: apps33

Awesome update... Marvellous...

Finally they meet... And the way she ignores him trying to show her hatred...

Cont soon

Thanks...Will try my best

Originally posted by: nymphadoratonks

Amazing update S!
Like I already told you, why did it end, I want to read the next asap!

Yes yes yes..You love my ff...And I love you so much...

We need to fangirl in group chat...and irritate everyone..😆😉

Originally posted by: Cooldude101

Okay I'm confused, ansh is an Ansh of Nandu?(I know very lame joke ) please clear that out
I am falling in love with this FF day by day! You are amazing and this story is so captivating. Bit I hate you so much! How dare you Leave us on a cliffhanger!?
.He looked at me and stared angrily. I stared back with the same feeling with even more passion and intensity.----- true love all the way
Man please update soon or I will go all mad on you even though I don't even know your real name.

Vaise I am jealous of ansh! He for such a cute mom an that kid is a bundle of cuteness.
He totally threw a bomb on manik today! Now he will be thinking about nandini's life in the last 5 years. Vaise ansh is about 5 years old right?

KEEPING MY MOUTH SHUT ABOUT THE STORY LINE..😈

Now you know my real name..Atleast comment edit toh karti..😆

Originally posted by: AMAR_LOVE

nice update...

like it

plz cont soon

Thank you so much...Will try to do it as fast as possible.

Originally posted by: shar1988

Oh the Ansh mystery is killing me...is he Manan's kid or is he Navya's who died in childbirth???

And the mystery is quite an interesting one...Will not clear it out soon..😈

Originally posted by: star_struck

Thanks for Pm I'll read it and than tell as I'm out!! :)

OKay will wait for your comment...

Originally posted by: Kavyashree22

OH GOD!! Hehe i enjoyed like hell.. Hehe.. Manik is at fault and i want him to suffer.. WRITERJI SUNRAHE HO NA..HEHE.. Ansh is nandini's child?? Naah, i think its of navya.. Is it.. Aah, so many confusion... Please update soon.. That means very very soon.. Thanq for pm..

Thank you...Yes Nandini is going to make MAnik SUFFER...It is going to be either ways ..justsaying😈😆

And readerji I take you all very serioouly...Your wish is my command...I will definitely make it up to you...😳

Thankoosss

Originally posted by: manya_189

Read all the parts in a go and must say I loved it so much!! The way you've written it is commendable :D
Continue soon :)

Thankooos so much..I know right..Reading in one go makes you get so many feels...The same's the case with me..I do that quite often..😳😳😳

Originally posted by: Madpal

Nice and emotional update!

You have portrayed Nandini's inner turmoil very beautifully...

Although it was a long update, I didn't want it to finish but wanted to continue reading...

Very well written indeed

Hey don't make us wait for long

Will be eagerly awaiting your update

Please continue soon...

Errr...you read an update and don't want it to finish...But when I write so much I am like LET IT END SOON..😡😡😭😭

I wont make you wait long...Just the nest month..😆

Thanksss

Originally posted by: sahasimren

Amazing.

I loved this update.

Continue soon.

Thanks...I will try my best

Originally posted by: Dhariya_

So good

She is ignoring him

Does she really hate him...???

last line was too good

Rocket science

Loved it

Cont soon

Hate him...Well we could answer it better...Do you really think she can...😃😳

Thank you...Will update soonish

Originally posted by: anushi3012

How you well described the situation!!!

Like we were there in the hospital along with Nandini!!

Every inch of details was important and I thank you so much for not missing any of them.

Indeed, 3500 words is very long, hats off to you!!

Nandini.. I could see her as very strong woman, handling her job and her son!!

And she is dedicated to both of them.

Manik, still wondering why he has gone and at the same time, he is hurt.

This is quite complicated but of course, the mysteries are always in the start.

Before this chapter, Ansh was till then a silent character.

Then, I did get hints that he was Nandini's son.

And you confirmed it in such a way!!!

With Manik!!!

The curiosity and the shock really make me eager for the next chapter!!!

Please try not to update with much delay, it's a kind request.

Will be waiting for your update

Thanks for the pm

Awww really...Throws you virtual chummas❤️

THERE IS A BIG TWIST COMING AHEAD...BEWARE😆

Originally posted by: Cutesanjana1008

Awesome one..

The bomb fell on manik in the end was best...
Gr8 work
Cont soon

LOVE
SANJANA

Hey Sanjana...Thanks...And only Bombs will not fall...Many things are going to happen..Stay close

Originally posted by: sharon.babu

awesome update...

loved that even in partial consciousness manik only took nandu's name...

anksh is already having a bond with manik...his dad...hope nandu lets them meet and stay in touch...

manan need to talk please...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

MaNan are not just going to talk...I thought you wanted something more..But just talking..OKay I will fulfil it very soon..MaNan are going to talk in every update from NOW...😉😉😉😳😳😳

Thanks

Originally posted by: cute03sweety

That's
shocking news
Ansh
Nandini
ka
beta...how...????
waiting
for
the
next

You really want me to explain how babies come in the world...🤣
🤣🤣🤣🤣

If we go the Indian way..babies are bhagwaan ka tohfa..🤪🤪🤪🤪

Thank you

Originally posted by: akkukh

aieee ...zeee bat !!
pathaka foda ..
loved it ..loved it
loved it
bs boldiya ...
pm ni bheja :(

Thanks...I love Diwali toh fod diya...Aur bhi bohut saare fodungi..🥳

Pm's ke liye..Buddy bhejo beta...Aur main pm bhejungi..Give and Take..Manik MLahotra fangirl I be..Humesha

Originally posted by: fan145

MY like button isnt working ,so lemme do tht laters but again u had ended at a cliffhanger and tust me this is going awesome chaptr by chapter ..i really wanna knw manik's reaction to ansh being his son lol ...dada manik will be in utter shock lol ...

And i loved how nandini gave cold shoulders to manik ,he toh deserve it thoi feel bad fr him ..gadha hein but still he is our mani riht ,so i do feel bad for him .

You better LIKE it...Because you I can only see blue, green and yellow liking the post...I WANT RED...That's the color of evil and well you know I am soo good like KFC..🤣

And about the story I am just going to keep my mouth shut...Becase you are going to get the SHOCK of your life..😈