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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: prathyushaeluri

superb update

nandini ko kuch nahi hogaya
ab neyonika ko
achi sabak sikayega manik ne
continue soon
thanks for the pm

Yes ab bahot
Mazza aane walla ha😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: divtan

sorry for the late comment...something was seriously wrong with the website or netwrk connection,...i typed a huge comment and it din get posted :( :( :(

Diya !!
itz okk..
family time first..
go mee family..get pampered..get loved !!
they have missed u too !!
we will wait before the next update !!
aur thank u itne updates k liye !!
thats so thoughtful of u :) :) :)

and now the update...it was sentimental...
i could feel nandu's and manik's pain...so much they had to go thru..
thank god brain tumour nai hai...
such cute lovey momens they had !!
i wish woh nyonika is taught a good lesson!!
i love cabir :) :) :)

nice update :)
thank u Diya :)
tk cr :)

Thanks dear😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Kavyashree22

Thankgod,nandini ko brain tumor nahi tha.. Maine 1 part miss kiya just cuz of that.. Hope to see manan happietale further.. Thanq so much for pm..

I told you Dear
More twist are coming😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mairaallauddin

Awesome update

Superb update
Cabir teasing manan was superb
And nobody can separate manan
And what manik is planning for neyonika
Loved the update
update the next part soon

Thanks😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dua_arafat

Chapter11A

Diya ye tum ne kia kiya??
Yar itna maza a raha tha
The way their morning were
Their sweet romance... I love it...
Wear red and the way he hold her...
The story is going amazing you are writing very good
And what???😲
Nandini ko brain tumor???
Yar what is going to happen?
But I trust u I know everything will be ok
Keep it up
Take care
Stay blessed
Love
Dua...

Thanks for trusting me
Dua😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dua_arafat

So everything is fine now...

I'm so happy...
But what will happen next??
The update was beautiful and emotional loved it
Take care
Stay blessed
Love
Dua...

Thanks dua😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Dhingli44

Hey diya...Main yaad hoon na..ya u forgot me
I know I'm late...but mere exams the.
Mujhe PM bhi nai kiya..huh...katti!! 😛 😆 but it's ok.
Update 😳
That song part 👏
The way Manik was making her understand.
SOUL IS IMMORTAL ⭐️ 😳
Loved it

Sholly dear ...for not pm u
And afcourse I remember
you ...hope ur exams goes well
and thank you SooO much
Am glad you like it😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yippee ...I completed 100 pages...sooO happy ...Thank you sooO much Guys bcz of u all ...I completed 100 pages ...vaise toh I thought to update tomorrow ...but bcz of that I thought to give you update ...Hope you guys like it...ENJOY😛
Part-14 (A)

Manik was sleeping peacefully ...suddenly he felt that nandani is not there ...he traced his hand all around the bed with closed eyes...and found no one ...he get up with a jerk ...and saw nandani was no where ...he panic ...he panically said

Manik : Na..nda..ni ...nandani kaha gayi?...Nandani

Manik pov

Nandani kaha gayi ...kahi nyonika ne phir se kuch ...no ...no ...she must be fine ...ha Manik voh thik hogi ...bus yahi kahi hogi ...but what if...nyonika did something...god ...kaha ho tum shona

Meanwhile Nandani came out of the washroom and saw manik ...who was looking very worried ...

Nandani : Manik

He turned and saw her ...he immediately run towards her and hugged her tightly ... for first she taken a back ...but hugged her back ...and tried to calm him ...after sometime he broke the hug

Manik : tum kaha ...chali... gayi thi? Tumhe pata hai main kitna... dar gaya tha...I was so worried ...

Nandani cupped manik face and calmly said

Nandani : Manik relax ...am fine ...main toh washroom gayi thi ...tum itna kyu dar gaye the

Manik :vo...vo...

Manik pov
No manik u can't tell her ...if she get to knew about nyonika ...she will definitely get worried ...and I Don't Want that ...aur piya ne bhi kaha tha ...agar nandani ko jara bhi stress hua toh ...uski jaan ...no ...no ...right now her health is my priority ...am sorry shona I can't tell you right now ...but I will always protect u ...I will

Nandani again said:Manik kya hua?

Manik realized and said

Manik : voh shona ...u were not there naa ...toh bas issiliye ...par tumhe mujhe uthana chahiye tha naa ...main tumhe le jaata

Nandani : Manik am absolutely fine ...aur main khud jaa sakti hu

Manik : yes shona tum khud jaa sakti ho ...par tum abhi weak ho naa ...toh issiliye...He took her in his arms and started walking towards the bed ...main tumhe le kar jaoga ...jaha tumhe jaana ho

Nandani : Manik par ...

Manik : no shona ...please ...

Nandani : okay

He kissed her forehead :That's like my girl

She smilingly looked at him ...he placed her carefully in the bed ...and packed her lips and lovingly said

Manik : Good morning shona

She smiled and kissed his cheeks :Good morning jaan

Manik : okay u wait here ...I just be back

She hold his hand and said:where are u going ?

Manik :Tumhare liye breakfast lene jaa raha hu ...u must be hungry naa

She nodded as yes...manik smiled

Manik : u wait here ...I just be back

She nodded ...manik left from there
...

Nandani pov

I can sense something is bothering him ...but what is it? ...vo mujhe kyu nahi bata raha ...I hope sab thik ho ...aayappa ...please Manik ka saath dena ...I knew there is something that was not right ...but please aap uske saath rehna...

Manik came to piya's cabin

Manik : piya

Piya : Manik tum yaha ? Is nandani is okay?

Manik smiled:yaah she is fine ...voh actually main yaha nandani ke discharge ke liye

Piya : yaah ...u can take her home ...but u have to take care of her medicine and diet ...

Manik smiles : don't worry piya I will take care of it

Piya : okay then ...main nandani ke discharge papers tayaar karati hu

Manik : Thanks piya ...Thank you sooO much

Piya : it's okay Manik ...but haan usse pehle ...we have to give injection to her

Manik horrifiedly said : INJECTION

Piya : yaah ...actually it's important kahi ...infection...na ho ...u knew it's just for precaution

Manik : okay

Piya : okay then tum chalo main nurse ko bhejti hu

Manik : hmmm

Manik left from there and get some food for Nandani and come ro her room ...and saw her talking to cabir smilingly...manik again lost in her smile ...nandani felt a strong gaze ...she saw and found manik ...who was looking towards her ...she smiled looking at him ...both shares a small and cute eye lock...which was broke by cabir cough

Cabir : aahhmm...guys am also here

Both smiled ...manik placed the food in the table and came towards nandani ...sit beside her ...

Manik : how are you feeling now?

Nandani : Am fine jaan ...

Cabir : vaise manik tu kaha tha ...main kabse aaya hua tha ...par tu tih yaha tha hi nahi

Manik : haa voh main piya se milne gaya tha ...aur phir nandani ke liye breakfast

Cabir : piya se

Manik : haa voh ...nandani ke discharge ke liye ...

Cabir : Toh kya kaha

Manik looked at nandani who was curiously looking at him ...he smiled and said

Manik : usne kaha ...ki hum use le jaa sakte hai

Nandani excitedly said: Sacchi

Manik : Mucchi meri jaan

Cabir : wow manik ...that's great yaar ... finally ...we Are going...ab toh party banti ha

Nandani : yes cabir party karenge

Manik : No jaan ...no party ...nothing ...tum abhi weak ho ...toh tumhe abhi rest karna ha ...ek baar tum thik ho jao uske baad tum jaha kahogi vaha party karenge ...

Nandani : but manik

Manik : Please jaan

She makes a cute pout and said : okay

He kissed her pout and said : don't worry we will party hard ...Once you will perfectly fine

She smiled ...and...manik started feeding her lovingly ...both smiled

Cabir was watching all this silently...his eyes were filled with tears

Cabir pov

God please inhe hamesha ese hi saath rakhna ...ab aur koi problem mat aane dena ... they already faced a lot ...please just keep them together always

After finishing the breakfast ...cabir said

Cabir faking angrily said : u knew what mujhe toh esa lagta ha jaise meri koi value hi nahi ha ...tum dono toh apne aap main hi busy ho ...hmmm

Both smiled looking at him ...after sometime cabir too smiled

Manik : tu nahi sudhrega

Cabir : Naaa...kabhi bhi nahi
...hehe...

Meanwhile nurse came...manik knew what is going to be Happened now ...just to distract her he said

Manik : Jaan

Nandani : hmmm

He saw nurse is ready to inject her

Manik : voh tumne bataya nahi ki tumhari presentation kaisi rahi

Nandani : oh that ...that goes ausom ...u knew everyone like it...s.she started telling them about her presentation...meanwhile nurse done her work ...both manik ...cabir smiled ...nandani saw them smiling...she confused

Nandani : tum log hass kyo rahe ho

Cabir :...hehe... Scriously Nandani tumhe abhi bhi pata nahi chala

Nandani : kya pata nahi chala

Cabir : voh nurse tumhe abhi abhi inject kar kar gayi

Nandani : what?

Cabir : yes

She looked at manik ...who was guilty

Manik : sorry shona par its important ...that's why I did this

Cabir : vaise nandu mujhe aaj bhi yaad ha ...jab tumhe injection lag raha tha ...tumne kya kiya tha

Manik gave a deadly glare to cabir...

Manik : Cabir shut up

Cabir : arre ...main kyu chup ...vaise nandani tumhe yeh injection se itna dar kyo lagta ha ...I mean mujhe exactly yaad ha last time jab manik out of town tha aur ...tumhe high fever tha ...tab tumhe doc. Inject karne walla tha ...aur jaise hi tumne injection ko dekha tum clinic se hi bhag gayi ...aur aakhir main doc. Ne haar man kar tumhe glucose powder diya tha ...god that was so funny ...uss wakt meri aur druv ki halat dekhne layak thi ...tumhare piche piche bhaag bhaag kar ...vaise behna tumne kabhi bataya nahi tumhe injection se itna dar kyo lagta ha?

She lowered her head in embarrassment and bitted her lower lip and said

Nandani : vo actually when I was small ...main apni friends ke saath khel rahi thi ...tabhi meri friend ki pet chikky ne mujhe leg par kata ...aur jiski vajhse mujhe 16 injection lene pade ...uske baad se ...I just hate injection ...whenever I saw them I remember that incident ...

Time heals every pain ...weather its physically or mentally

Manik : Shona kya vaha par abhi bhi pain hota ha

Nandani : No jaan ...ab nahi hota ...voh toh bahot pehle lagi thi jab main baby thi naa

Manik smiled and cabir said

Cabir : vaise behna tum toh abhi bhi baby hi ho ...cute si ...sweet si...hehe...

Manik : Cabir

Cabir : kya cabir...

Manik : yeh tumhari nahi sirf meri baby ha ...hehe...

Cabir : ...hehe...

Nandani : Tum dono jao main tumse baat hi nahi karti

Manbir looked at each other ...hold their ear ...

Manbir :Sholly

Nandani looked at there puppy face and smilingly said : its okay

Manbir hugged her and said : I love you baby...hehe...

Nandani smilingly said: love you too both

Okay that's it
Hope you guys like it
In next update u will
See...how nyonika
Is going to pay
For her deeds
Tab tak please
Leave ur
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And about next
Update ...I will try
to Update asap
Till then
Keep loving
Keep smiling
Keep shining
Love
Diya😛




Edited by diyaNarwal - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
it was awesome update. Please post the next part soon. Tack care of yourself.
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Posted: 10 years ago
congrats fr reaching 100 pages😊
lovely update dea...
continue soonnn
tnx fr d pm

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