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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey wow nice story

Update soon
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Thank u guys for likes and Comments...as per my promise am here with update ...hope you guys ENJOY😛
Part-13

Both were hugging each other and lost in there own world ...but they were disturbed by knock

Cabir : Guys agar tum logo ka ho gaya ho toh main ander aa jao

Both broke the hug ...manik annoyingly said

Manik : Cabirrr

Cabir entered in the room and said

Cabir : kya cabir thik toh kaha maine ...agar tum log kuch kar rahe hote aur main ander aa jaata ...toh situation awkward ho jaati naa

Nandani was go all red by cabir comment ...and manik came towards him

Manik : aa tuje batata hu ...kya kar rahe the ...he playfully punch his stomach

Cabir: aaochhh

Manik : kya hua dard hua?

Cabir : saale tu hamesha mujhe kyu maarta rehta ha ...pata ha kitna dard hota ha

Manik : kyunki tu maar khane waale kaam karta ha ...issiliye

Manik and nandani both were laughing

Cabir faking cryingly said: haslo ...haslo ...kya zamana aa gaya ha ...dost dost naa raha ...aur behen behen naa rahi

Both laughed and manik said Manik : chal nautanky ab yeh bata kya kaam tha

Cabir : vo kya ha naa ...ek normal human being ko jine ke liye khane ki zaroorat padti ha ...par tum logo ko toh shayad sirf pyar ki zaroorat ha...kyu

Then manik realized nandani didn't had anything ...

Manik : shut up cabir...shona tumne kuch nahi khaya ha ...common let's eat something

Manik make her sit comfortably ...and take out the food which cabir gave him

Nandani : Manik please I don't want to eat this yucky soup

Manik : Please shona khalo ...its very healthy aur phir uske baad tumhe medicine bhi toh leni ha

Nandani : Medicine ...but am perfectly fine right?

Both manbir exchanged looks...manik gave a pleading look to cabir

Cabir : vo kya ha naa Nandani ...tum toh bilkul thik ho par tumhe weakness ha naa ...jiski vajhse tum behosh ho gayi thi ...toh bas issiliye vitamin tablet ha

Nandani : okay

Both signed a relief ...manik thanked cabir through eyes ...which he smiled

Manik : Shona please khalo ...please mere liye

Nandani : hmmm

Cabir : arre wah kya pyar he ...iske ek baar kehte hi maan liya

Manik : arre kyu nahi maanegi aakhir jaan he meri

Nandani smiled and said:Main promise karti hu main saara soup pi lungi ...par meri ek condition ha

Manik : What condition?

Nandani : tum ese nahi khaoge...mujhe pata ha ki tum bhi yahi khaoge and I Don't Want u To eat this

Manik : but shona

Nandani : Jaan please

Manik : okay

Manik feed her lovingly ...she finished all the soup ...manik kissed her forehead

Manik : Good girl

Nandani : okay now ...ab tum bhi kuch kha lo

Manik:ha Par pehle tum medicine toh le lo

He gave her medicine to which she makes faces and had it

Nandani : ab khush...ab jao aur khana khao

Manik : Jaan per mujhe bhuk nahi ha Sacchi...main tumhare paas bethta hu naa

Nandani : No u r going ...and I Don't Want to listen anything ...cabir manik ko leke jao aur jab tak yeh khana naa khaye tab tak isse utne mat dena...aur tum agar bina khana khaye aaye toh main tumse baat nahi karungi

Manik : par

Nandani : par var kuch nahi tum jaate ho ya nahi

Cabir laughed:...hehe...chal Manik varna tu toh jaanta ha na ...yeh kya karegi

Manik : haa...haa...chal...shona please apna khyal rakhna ...main jaldi aa jaaunga ...okay

Nandani : okay ...now go

Manik : hmmm

Manbir left from there and went towards the canteen ...cabir ordered some food for both of them...

Cabir : Manik kya socha ha ab kya karna ha

Manik : nyonika ko barbad

Cabir : matlab kaise

Manik : tum bass dekhta jaa

Manik called aman ...and tell him about the plan and cut the call

Manik : ab nyonika ko koi nahi bacha sakta ...usne nandani ko nuksaan pahucha kar bahot badi galati ki ha ...ab uski life ko hell banane koi bhi nahi rok sakta

Cabir : Manik tu sure haina ...agar nandani ko pata chala toh

Manik : Nandani ko kuch nahi pata chalna chahiye ...tujhe yaad ha naaa Piya ne kya kaha tha ...

Cabir : haa issiliye bol raha hu kahi use kuch pata chal gaya toh

Manik : kuch nahi pata chalega aur nyonika ko toh apne deeds ke liye pay karna hi padega ...it's time for payback nyonika ...tumne mujhse meri life ko chinane ki koshish ki thi naa ab dekho main kya karta hu

Cabir : chal thik ha ab main chalta hu ...subha aa jaaunga

Manik : chal thik ha...tu nikal main bhi nandani ke paas jata hu

Cabir left from there and manik came to nandani's room ...and the sight in front of her make her to awww over her...she is sleeping peacefully ...she is just looked like a baby while sleeping...

He came towards her and lay besides her ...and after sometime he also drifted into sleep...after half an hour manik wake up and saw nandani is still sleeping peacefully ...he smiled and kissed her forehead...she smiled ...he was playing with her hairs ...after sometime she also wake up
Manik smiled looking at her

Manik : so my baby is up?nini acchi aayi naa baby ko

Nandani : hmm

She hugged him tightly and manik hugged her back...both were silent ...after sometime nandani broke the silence

Nandani : Manik

Manik : hmmm

Nandani : ek baat puchu

He kissed her hairs smilingly said: pucho

Nandani : agar mujhe brain tumour sach main hota ...aur agar vo operation successful naa hota ...toh ...m...a...nik ...

Manik : Jaan shhh...tum esa kyo soch rahi ho sab thik ha

Nandani cryingly said: par... agar ...main... m..a..r

He placed his hand on her lips and said

Manik lovingly said: no jaan ...Don't u dare say like this ...tum jaanti ho naa main tumhare bina nahi reh sakta ...phir tum yeh sab kyo keh rahi ho aur sabse important jaan tumhe kabhi kuch nahi ho sakta bcz main tumhe kuch hone hi nahi dunga ...we are each other soul jaan...aur soul kabhi juda nahi hote...bcz
SOUL IS IMMORTAL
We are soulmates jaan...Aur jab tak hum dono saath ha koi hame alag nahi kar sakta ...aur ab yeh sab sochna band karo ...BCZ WE ARE TOGETHER HAMESHA

Nandani : HAMESHA

Manik : HAMESHA

Both shared a cute eye lock ...manik
Placed his lips with her and started kissing her ...the kiss slow and soft ...its not bcz they need this ...its a kiss of assurance ...that no matter whatever happened we always live together ...no one can apart us ...after sometime manik broke the kiss ...both hugged each other

Nandani : Manik

Manik : hmmm

Nandani : Please sing for me

Manik smiled:okay princess ...just one minute

he take out his guitar from the car and came in the room and said

Manik : so tell me princess what u want to listen

Nandani smilingly said : I want to listen ur heart ...I want to listen what ur heart says

Manik kissed her forehead :okay


Teri saanson ki saans mein
Jo hoon toh main hoon
Tere khwabon ki aanch mein
Jo hoon toh main hoon

(He looked at her lovingly and sing looking into her eyes )

Tere hone se hi mera hona hai
Tujhko khona jaise khudko khona
Tu jo hai toh main hoon
Yun jo hai toh main hoon
Tu jo hai toh main hoon
Yu jo hai toh main hoon

(He closed his eyes and remember how she knew about her disease ...how much pain she bear ..she unconsciously she lying in his arms ...a lone tear came from his eyes)


Bin tere mera kya hai
Jisko sunu jisko kahun
Bin tere mujh main kya hai
Jisko jiyun jis mein rahun
Tujhme hi tuniya meri hai
Tere ik pal main sadiyaan meri
Bin tere main sehra saa hoon
Bin tere main qutra bhi nahi

(He opened his eyes and looked at her ...her eyes were full of tears ...he wipes them and ask her to smile...he kissed her forehead and assured her everything is fine ...bad phase is gone...she smiled)

Tere hone se hi mera hona ha
Tujhko khona jaise khudko khona
Tu jo hai toh main hoon
Yu jo hai toh main hoon

(He looked at her and said through if you are with me ...everything is fine ...if you smile ...everything seems to be wonderful ...if u r with me ...we can fight with every problem bcz if we are together no one can harm us ...we will never loose)

Manik completed the song...nandani came and hugged him tightly

Nandani : I love you Manik

Manik : I love you too jaan


True love is immortal people dies but love never dies



That's it Guys
I hope you like it
Okay aap log yahi
Soch rahe hoge naa
Ki three days and three updates
But there is a reason
Behind it
I can't update for
Next three days
Bcz am going my home
It's being two months
I didn't see my parents
So I just wanted to
Spend some
Quality time with my
family and friends
Hope you guys understand
Aur tab tak aap log
Jinhe yeh update achi lage
Comment karna
Aur mujhe bhi
Batana which part
U like The most
Aur please yaar jo bhi
Mujhe p.m bhejege
Unse main pehle hi sorry bol rahi hu
Bcz I couldn't comment
On ur post
So if u guys like it
Do Hit the like button
and comment on it Too
Keep smiling
Keep shining
LOVE
DIYA😛


Edited by diyaNarwal - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
update is amazing ...

heart touching so pure love it ..
cabir always protect thm he is really a best friend a friend can have ...

enjoy diya with your family n friends ..
see you soon t cr .
stay blessed
cont..
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Posted: 10 years ago
such a heart touching update yar... seriously. . sooo much emotional. ... cabir is a true frnd... itsss nicee. . awesome. .. keep updating like this. . update soon waiting for next update eagerly. . thanks for this beautiful update.. such a full of emotions ... such a awesome chapter. . :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Woaw nice one dear
Just read previous parts too they were awesome
Sorry i know m late
But der aye durast aye 😆
Keep up the good work
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sooo emotional.
Love the Manan love.
Thanks for the update.
😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: diyaNarwal


...hehe...
Sholly thoda jada ho gaya
Par jhatka update thi
Naa
Kuch toh dhamal banta ha😊



Diyu baby love you for giving long and quick update
Thank you for giving mabanbir moments ... I'm missing them like hell on TV
Cabir doesn't leave any chance to tease Manan
Whether its hospital or somewhere else
Manan moments were awesome
Their kiss its really a soul searing one
Now nyonikas count down starts

PS: happy and safe journey baby enjoy with your loved ones to the fullest...
I'll be waiting for next one... Take your time and update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow
This update is having a mix feeling, happy as well as emotional n Manik's anger for Nyonika too
But, all total its amazing
N thanks for the PM
😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
nyc update dear
jst loved it
they both r perfect fr each other
nyonika is gng to face bad time of her
love the song
enjy u r time wth full fun n love
continue son
stay blessed
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanks for pm n update!!
excited to see what manik does to nyonika!!
n its a treat to watch manik n nandinis love for eachother!!

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