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Posted: 10 years ago
Dear when will u update ..????
I m waiting..
Plz thoda toh suspense clear kar do...
U know what morning se m sirf isse ka soch rhi hu...
Plz unfold pura nhi toh thoda sa
Plz
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Kavyashree22

Okey,m inn its full of emotionalism which i don't like but manan he hehehe... I don't like crying but don't foget to put pm okey... And support #MTVBringParthBack and don't watch ky2s2 cuz ther is no manan nor fab5 so there is no meaning of watching it na.. Love u loads

Thank you
Dear
And am in also
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SIAZAHEED.1

lovely nd cute part..
love u suspense making idea...

update soon..

Thank you
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shanuqureshi

Dear when will u update ..????

I m waiting..
Plz thoda toh suspense clear kar do...
U know what morning se m sirf isse ka soch rhi hu...
Plz unfold pura nhi toh thoda sa
Plz
Update soon

Sorry dear for
Making u wait
But I can't update today
Please understand
But promise I'll
Update tomorrow
And u knew I
Never break promises
...hehe...😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: diyaNarwal

Sorry dear for
Making u wait
But I can't update today
Please understand
But promise I'll
Update tomorrow
And u knew I
Never break promises
...hehe...😛
Don't be sorry dear diya
I know u might be busy.otherwise u'll definately updated
Its ok & i knew u'll surly update on tom
keep smiling😛

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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you SooO much Guys for ur lovely comments and likes
So as per my promise I update ...hehe...so here
u go...ENJOY😛

PART-4

It has been 15 days since nandani admitted in hospital...and manik was taking care of her with all his love...and finally the day came...today nandani is going to be discharged...Today manik happiness has no bounds...he is doing her packing...and then she said

Nandani : Jaan am so happy ...finally am going home...u knew I don't like Hospital...I felt so suffocated over here...but finally we are going home

She said so cutely which brings smile on manik face He cupped her face and packed her forehead and lovingly said

Manik : yes my baby today we are going our home ...and always smile like this bcz u knew how much i love ur smile

She looked at him and smile...manik said

Manik : I love you shona

Nandani : I love you too jaan

they hugged each other and then nurse came both broke the hug immediately ...nurse smile and ask manik to complete the discharge formalities ...and he lovingly said

Manik : baby u just wait here ...am going to complete the hospital formalities

She just quickly nodded her head and said okay

He smiled to see her excitement and left from there
After he left ...a guy enters in nandani room...nandani who was lying on the bed completely shocked to see the person and then the
Person said

Person : Nandu

He was crying and try to come towards her...just then nandani said in a stern voice

Nandani : why u came over here?...ohh kahi tum yeh toh nahi dekhne aaye ki main mar gayi hun ya jinda hun ...bolo ...bolona

He joined his hands...tears were flowing from his eyes and stammering ...said

Person : Nandu please... esa mat... bol...please mujhe maaf kar de...please

Nandani : kyu sid kyu? ...kyu kiya tumne esa ...tum toh mere ...best friend the naa...toh phir kyu kiya tumne esa...agar tumne mujhe maarne ki koshish ki hoti ...toh shayad main tumhe maaf bhi kar deti...par...par tumne mujhe nahi mere manik ko maarne ki koshish ki...aur iske liye main tumhe kabhi maaf nahi karungi...

Anger is visible in her eyes...

Sid: Please... nandu...ek baar...bas ek baar mujhe maaf kar de ...main apne hosh main nahi tha please nandu...main

But he cut off in between and nandani again said

Nandani : hosh main nahi tha ...she laughed sarcastically...Scriously tumne mere manik ko maarne ki koshish ki ...tum jaante the na manik mere jaan ha ...agar use kuch ho jata tumne kabhi socha mera kya hota...
He looks down doesn't says anything and she said

Nandani : jao tum yaha se sid ...mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni hai...just go away

sid: Please

he said helplessly but nandani angrily shouted on him and said

Nandani : just leave...I said leave from here

he went out of the room and saw manik who is confusingly staring at him and said

Manik : Tumne use kuch kaha kyo nahi

Sid:tum kya chahte ho ki main use sach bata kar uski saari khushiya chin loon ...tum jaante ho main toh tumhe usi din maar deta par nandani beech main aa gayi...aur vo goli use lag gayi ...vo tumse bahot pyar karti hai aur main use...main use dobara tut te hue nahi dekh sakta ...aur uske liye yahi acha hoga use iss baare main kabhi kuch pata naa chale ...varna uska pyar par se bharosa hi uth jaayega

He said all this angrily looking at manik...manik has tears in his eyes and said

Manik : Please sid mujhe maaf kar do ...maine jaan ...bhuj kar kuch nahi kiya ...please sid

Sid:u knew what manik main tumhe maaf karne walla kon hota hu...lekin agar tum sachme kuch karna chahte hob toh nandani ko yeh sach kabhi mat batana...main uski nafrat ke sahare toh jee sakta hu par ...usse taklif main nahi dekh sakta...aur ha main aaj raat ki flight se London jaa raha hu...toh tum nandani ka khayal rakhna

Manik who just nodded and didn't said anything...after that sid left from there ...and manik composed himself and go to nandani room
Who was crying...he just hugged her tightly and try to console her

Manik : Shona ... stop crying ...shhh...bus jaan ...please

Nandani : Manik why he do this? Why?

Manik who was so guilty didn't said anything...just lone tears came from his eyes

after sometime nandani feel relaxed and broke the hug and said

Nandani : Am fine manik...please mujhe ghar le chalo

Manik just nodded his head as yes...and walked from there...in the car manik saw nandani who was very upset ...and decides to do something
for making her mood fine and said

Manik : Shona U okay naa...

nandani:am fine manik

But manik knew she was not okay bcz whenever she was sad or emotional ...she called him Manik...then he saw a ice cream parlor and stops the car...and looked at him confusingly for sudden stop...but he didn't paid on it and went out to buy ice cream...after sometime manik came back with nandani favorite ice cream and said

Manik : Shona look this ice cream is so tasty and I knew u also like it...so u wanna have some

nandani who was quite but after seeing ice cream a smile crept on her face ...and she quickly grabbed it from him and started eating with her fingers...and manik Just adored her ...after sometime nandani realized manik was looking at her...nandani looked at him ...they had a small eye lock which break by nandani who was gesturing him to have some...but manik said no with a smile...nandani again starting eating and after finishing it...she looked at him who was just looking at her...and she gave him a what look
to which he smiled and move towards her and
slowly kissed her lips and started sucking it
Nandani who was shocked But after sometime time she too respond it ...His hands were moving her waist
and her hands were on his hairs...and just pulling him more closer...manik bit her lawer lip and entered her and exploring each corner of her mouth ...there tongues were dancing with each other...they were kissing each other madly
After sometime both broke the kiss and manik said

Manik : ice cream is really very tasty

to which she blushed and hugged him tightly and manik also smiled to looked at her

Manik : I love you shona
Nandani : I love you too jaan


so tell me how's it? Toh
Ek mystery toh reveal ho gayi
sid hi tha jisne manik ko maarne
ki koshish ki ? Par manik ne
use sorry kyu bola? Akhir kis
Baat ki maafi maangi manik ne?
Akhir eas kobsa sach ha jise
sid ne manik ko nandu ko
Batane ke liye
mana kiya?
bahot saare questions hai
Par don't worry guys
in next Update I reveal
that too
Par uske liye do hit the like button
and comment on it Too


LOVE
DIYA😛






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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh my God
Y did manik say sorry ??
What was manik's fault..
Ohh God. No manik nandini separation plzz
Plz plz plz update next part oso soon
This past was so interesting!!
Thank u for the update Diya!! :) :) :) :)

Edited by divtan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
mtlb ek mystery khatam toh dusri ..
hope this doesn't break them..
loved manan seen..
sorry for chotu comment..
not well :(
continue soon..
thanks for pm :)
love - Kavya
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing...
... Manan...
as always Mananbir awesome...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Sid is nandus frnd!!
Hav so many questions hope nxt update wil clear the alll
Ur gng great
Continue sooonnn

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