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Posted: 9 years ago
Who wants to read an update tonight.

THE FINAL ONE!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: khadupam

Amazing
So they8 fought

Hwy where are you now a days.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Interesting promo...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shaan...

Interesting promo...

Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Take care...
Stay blessed...



Thank you 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow promo...
Can't wit for the update..
What happened b/w them...
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 9 (A)- LAST PART

The whole college was being decorated...well not too big an event but even this Traditional Day for Space was a who's who event.The next day was supposed to be the most eventful day of Space as well as for Manan.It was going to be 10 days since they would have even talked or spared a full glance.This cold war had been going on since the following morning of that drunken night...which was followed by a grumpy fretful Manik and a blue Nandini seen with swollen eyes every morning.
'Come on Manik...ab tu toh jaanede na!!' said Cabir as they walked past a pale sullen Nandini who was deep in thoughts doodling with the fork not eating even a single strand of noodle.But Manik just ignored..though it hurt him to see her like this. She became pale...her glow was not the same as before. He had never seen her like this..But all was not in his hands. No actually! It was all in his hands...but was he ready to let go?

Flashback-

After the rain stopped..the atmosphere became so beautiful. Dew drops here and there...rainbow in the early morning sky..birds chirping..flowers blooming..it was all too serene and beautiful.
Manik lay there with Nandini in his arms. He resting his back towards support and Nandini with the supportof his front wrapped in him. As the morning light hit...he was the first to wake up. He smiled to himself seeing her. His love! His forever!
He gently stroked her hair and kissed her forehead. 'Nandu..' he called out to her lovingly. But she cringed her eyebrows and snuggled in him. He calls out to her again..caressing her cheeks he kissed her there. 'Wake up sweety..it's morning. We have to go home.' he murmured in her ear.

'Manik mujhe nai uthna. Mera sar bohot dard kar raha hai!!' she said. Her eyes still closed.
'Kaise na hoga. Tumhe kal raat ka kuch yaad bhi hai!' He asked her caressing her forehead removing the errand strands of hair. But instead of replying...she now snuggled in his jacket to escape the sun's beam.

After a lot of tantrums he was successful in making her sit. So sleepy was she that she immediately fell over him. 'Aree...Nandini..utho baba. Sambhalo. Lag jayegi!! Come on. Wake up.'
She finally woke up and he bought a sleepy panda to their building.
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It was time for their college and as usual the love smitten Manik Malhotra was waiting for his love. She came running from the corridor...completely out of breath and things about to fall from her hand..chanting sorry's. He smiled looking at her as she came to him.
'Hie.' She stopped in front of him.
'Helloo Jaan-e-mann!!' He said flirtatiously
'Manik kahan se late ho tum aise cheesy lines haan!!' She said with a face.
'Www.Lovegurumanik blog se. Tum bhi dhondna. Wo blog is amazing!' He said cuddling her.

'Tumhe abhi sar dard ho raha hai!?' he asked with care and concern.
'Thodaaa saa!!' She said like a baby.
'Dabadoon...?' He asked.
'Sar ya gala' She asked him tongue in cheek.
'Madam tum itni chotu ho na ki main tumhe bhi daba sakta hoon pura ka pura.' He replied wrapping his arms around her.
'Haww...Manik Malhotra don't you know. Apni girlfriend ka mazaak nai urate.Wo nai sikhaya uss blog walon ne' She replied with a anger filled tone.

'Umm...meri girlfriend bura nai manti. I know. Coz she knows I love her!!' He kissed her cheek. 'A lot!!!'And hugged her.
But their romance was disturbed by a fake cough.


Sorry for being so late.But Yes.Finally the last part is here. Part B will be up in an hour.
Agar comment na karna ho toh mat karna. Hardly matters. I'm ending all my stories one by one. So bye!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww flashback was soo cute...
Manan r soo adorable...
Waiting for nxt part eagerly...
Luved it..
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Woowww...So good. Just 3 comments in more than an hour. Anyways ab I have started a story toh I have to end it na.

Part 9 (B)-

'Ughh!! Cabir yaar. Disturbance of India!' Manik said annoyed and Nandu giggled.
'Well Manik Malhotra..pehle dekh lete ki kon hai..bechare Cabir ko aise hi kos diya.' Came a voice unknown but known. A voice he didn't want to hear. Probably now atleast.

'Hie Nandini!' he said and took her in a hug.
'Hie Harshad' she reciprocated with a smile.
'Ssup!' He asked with a smirk.
But suddenly a strong known hand pulled Nandini towards himself. That was Manik. 'Leave!' He yelled towards Harshad and he happily did. Obviously. His work was done there.
'Manik what is this. Is this the way you talk to someone.' She yelled and freed herself.
'You. Will. Not. Talk. To. Him!!' He said annoyed.
'Manik I will...you can't tell me what to do.' She to was angry now.
'You don't know him. And I am telling you No matlab No!' He said gritting his teeth.
'Tum hote kon ho mujhe bolne wale Manik!!' She said.
'Hota kon hoon...I can't believe this. Tumhara boyfriend hoon main. I love you dammit. I care for you!' He yelled.
'Toh order mat do mujhe!!' She yelled.
And that was it for him. Manik lost his mind seeing her defending his arch rival (Ab koi bhi reason imagine karlo) He immediately removed his couple band..literally dumped it in her hand and zoomed out on his bike while Nandini stood there shocked.
She had never ever expected this..that she and Manik would fight on such an issue and he would throw away the couple band. She took baby steps back to her home...locked herself and cried and cried for hours. For altogether 2 days she didn't come out. Mukti tried..Cabir tried...her mother tried. But nothing worked. Finally her mother was at least able to feed her. She cried in her mother's arms but wasn't able to tell her what was the reason. So at the end she had to listen to ger mother and go back to college. She called Manik numerous times to apologise to him. In these 10 days they came face to face a number of times. But always...each time Manik would turn his face and go away.
-End of flashback-

Today..
Manik was tired of seeing her like this. His heart ached. But he was also hurt that when he was trying to protect her she misunderstood and stood for that jerk!
So he immediately turned and came to her table..sat against her and pulled the fork off her hand. She jerked up her head and was shocked to look at him.
He took the fork towards her to make her eat. He nudged the fork towards her and brought her out of the trance. But said no word.
Finding the opportunity...that even after a few bites he was calm...she immediately removed the other bracelet from her hand and forwarded to him with teary eyes and hope. She had been wearing it on her wrist ever since he removed it.

He sighed and got up...but this time she was adamant. She held his hand and beckoned him to look at her. He kissed her forehead and wiped her tears with his thumb.
'Maine sorry..bola na...tum kyu baat...nai karrahe...ho. Tum...mujhe chod ke..ja...rahe...ho...kya!?' She said between her sobs.This compelled Manik to talk to her. He was angry on her 100% he was. But breakup. Was a big no. He wasn't someone who liked ending relationships just on a fight. If it would be...it would be real big...or a mutual decision. He loved her with all his heart. She already owned it. He would not survive without her..umm..means...his heart!

Sometimes in love..you have to learn the art of compromise...to let go...She had accepted him with whatever he was. Not once had she acted like those typical girlfriends. That night in the club when one of his old mates tried to seduce him..she got drunk. But didn't fight with him. She trusted him. And Harshad...was a manipulator. He knew Harshad and he knew his naive girl. She was mature...yet naive. Easily influenced. If you do not let go of things you may lose them and losing her meant losing his sanity. He couldn't afford to let his panda go away. He was her lobster. They were forever.

He did nothing but simply sat back and fed her first. It was his priority. She kept staring at him and wiping her silent tears. He handed her his handkerchief and she literally pulled it off his hands. He smiled inwardly that she still claims on his things like they are hers. He loved that!
'Manik please...Manik!!...Sorry na...I will never fight with you...Tum mujhse baat toh karo.' He heard all this while feeding her but he acted as if he didn't. 'Tum breakup chahte ho kya...mujhse peecha chudana chahte ho na..?' She asked him.
Even the sound of it got goosebumps on his skin. He held her wrist and pulled her out of the canteen far where nobody could hear or see them.

'You listen to me now..and just shut up ok!' He again yelled.
This obviously made her think that something bad was on her way. And she started weeping.

"Manik jaldi kar..aur mat rulana ise" his mind said to him and he raised her hand towards her eyes indicating towards the handkerchief.

'Breakup!! Breakup tumhe life mein nai milega..tum...tum jhagde karo ya kuch bhi. I am not leaving you. You have to bear with me. Get that!!' He said in a go.
She shoot her head towards him..smiling within her tears. He was so relieved to see her smile.
She came towards him to take him in a hug...but he didn't let her..'What! I'm still angry.' He said in a rukha sukha tone.

'Sorry Manik! I will always listen to your reasons first. Sorry' she said pulling her ears.

'No tumne uss jerk ke liye mujhse ladayi ki thi. Jao ab uske paas.' He said folding his hands on his chest and making faces.
'Main usse pyar nai karti. Wo mera boyfriend nai hai.' She said and this time hugged him.
'Tum karte ho na mujhse pyar!!' She said in an "I know" it tone still hugging him and he immediately reciprocated as if showing his possessiveness for her. He hugged her so tight that nothing could pass through.
'I Love you!' she said in a loving tone with a few tears.
'Me too Nandinii.' She said.
'Nai. Say it!' She demanded.
'Ok Princess' he chuckled 'I Love You Too. A lot. A lot. A lot..' he lifted her and twirled her.
'And now no more crying ok.' He wiped her tears and slammed his lips on hers.
He kissed her as if compensating for all the loss of these 10 days. I love you he said in between the kiss and she smiled. He pulled her closer with his hands on her waist and she tightened her hold in the back of her neck with one hand and the other hand kneading his hairs. He nibbled..bit..smooched the blood out of her lips. And finally after being out of breath he left her. That too with a few smooching pecks.
'I'm never letting you go! Get that. Aur agar maine tumse kabhi gussa hua na. Toh bhi you will never leave me.' He said pulling her close.
'Ok Boss!' She giggled and rested her head over him which he happily cocooned.
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Bact to Present-

'Wow guys..you are so filmy!' Mukti said.
'But hats off to Nandini that she didn't give up on you!' Cabir said.
'I know' Manik nuzzled in her hair. 'My choice is always the best.'
'Abe sharam kar. Hum yahin hai!' Cabir mocked him.
'Toh. Apni fiance ke sath romance kar raha hoon. Tujhe kya!' He said in the same tone.
'Bhul mat aaj hi engagement hui hai...Abhi time hai shadi ko!' Mukti too said.
'Pata hai. Par we're bound to be together from the time we started loving each other. And that's for 2 years.' He said kissing her engagement ring.
'Wah Nandu. Dekha.Ab na tum dono ka jhagda hone se raha...Manik ko sare dates bhi yaad hai!' Cabir joked.

Their college ended and just the next day they got engaged.
She smiled at him and kissed his chin!
'Chalo let's leave now. Ab inhe pack up bhi toh karne do!!' Nandu said and all four left with each other from the venue.


Manan! They left with a promise to be together always. Always and forever!


The End.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry doll today I can't comment long as wish luck tomorrow is my exam
I'm helpless

Sorry for short comment


Awesome




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Lovely





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Amazing
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow... Last part came. this is very nice story. I really liked it.. Uff manan didn't talk for 10 days. oopss. poor nandu.. angry manik... N manik is not ready to talk to her. But because of what... uff n their Flashback moment was so cutee naa. I just love them.. n their cute silly things. ohhh manik is damm possessive abt nandu. ohh to ye tiff jerk harshad ki wajah se huyi.. huh ..yar manik k samjhane pr bhi nandu ne uski na sunkr harshad ko support.. haww. N manik ne to pura control kho diya. or couple band utar diya. poor nandu kitna royi.. but now manik can't take more. her health is more imp. na.. so sweetly he didn't talk to her but still feed her.. woww... N but finally manik bolaa. or nandu ki tanki bhi chalu. How he said about he can't stay away from her. n she have to bear him. god I literally found it so cute. lovblee.. Soo They Kissed. Wow bda romantic tha. Soo manan r engaged now. n soon to be married. . Their sweet n very love story.. Thanks for this sweet story... Thankeww for pm... Stay blessed Take care Keep smilling

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